Adiya SS: Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 7 on Pg 55, 29/01/19 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Ikhtiyar

Amazing chapter to kick-start .. there is a teeny bit of confusion as the story kept panning from one place to the other though.



I wanted the confusion to be there as that is the mystery factor here 😉 so in the first scene u see a teen Adi and Zoya who are the best of buddies n next u see a scenario where everyone around are talking about how Zoya walking out on Adi has affected him so badly. In the next scene from Sakshi's pov u saw how Adi's childhood was growing up n how Zoya was the only person who could help him come out of it. So what could have happened in between? I want to unveil the mystery slowly. The past depicts how AdiYa started their journey from being friends to where it will transition next which u will see in the next update. But what went so drastically wrong that Zoya left Adi? So the past will slowly answer those questions 😳 I hope next update gives u some (certainly not all) answers 😳

Thank u for the lovely comment 😊
Posted: 7 years ago
#32
Hey Mandy, this had me hooked till the end. Way intriguing & seems the story ahead will bring along twists & turns. A fact I liked here is how you've collaborated the past & present scenes. Adi seems an emotional guy who's helpless atm.
Wonder what Zoya has done to leave everything like that. I'd be glad if you could pm me when you update Mandy 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#33
Amazing start & so many questions . Everyone seems to hate Zoya for leaving them . Can't wait to see the reasons unfold for everything that has occurred so far .
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34
It was lovely
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: SewzVB

Hey Mandy, this had me hooked till the end. Way intriguing & seems the story ahead will bring along twists & turns. A fact I liked here is how you've collaborated the past & present scenes. Adi seems an emotional guy who's helpless atm.

Wonder what Zoya has done to leave everything like that. I'd be glad if you could pm me when you update Mandy 😊


Thank you so much 😳 Am glad u found it worth your time to read it 😳 Yes lots of twists and turns until the mystery unveils and hope you like it 😊 About Adi, you will get to know more about him in the next update.

Will surely send PM u 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.

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According to the Bible God gave us the rainbow as a symbol of hope. It also sygnifies as the glory of the God.

Likewise in this story of modern day drama we also encounter a tale of love, commitment and hope. Thanks for suggesting the title 🤗 Rainbow is a sign of hope, true and it's easier to spot a rainbow once the rain has subsided. But to spot one in the midst? That's a challenge as you cannot see anything beyond the dark clouds surrounding you.

The opening lines were like a dream come true. Very beautifully penned and well conveyed emotions. I could visualise Adi and Zoya in the snow and their tantrums. Snow has an important part to play in this story 😆

"He had seen life ebbing slowly out of her existence, leaving behind an empty shell. But he did not have the luxury to grieve for his own mother for he had to be strong for Arjun. Sakshi and Roshana took it upon themselves to care for Anjana's children but try as they might, they could not reach out to Adi. Something inside him was broken and they were simply at a loss on how to fix it."

I couldnt help but quote these lines. Here you have with so little words echoed Anjana n Adi's pain in such extensive terms that i felt the ache here in my heart! It was heartbreaking. Especially Adi. Woah👏 I am not sure if I wrote anything that was worth quoting but thanks a ton 😳 There is very little of Anjana here but she kinda is the catalyst to the story.

The banter of the Siddiki sisters in the following scene was a delight to read after coming through such emotional phase. Especially Zoya rolling her eyes! I could literally see her making that face. Kudos to the writer for bringing things alive with words.⭐️ I always wanted a sister and imagined how it would be to have these cute lil banters 😆
And not to forget the part where Adi walks infront and both look into eachother was a part to behold! I caught my breath and read like I was watching them in front me. It was that much enthralling! 👏 I guess that part is so unlike my style of writing 😆 Romance is not my genre at all 😛


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It was a surprising aspect coming across the orphanage and learning about Aliya.I fell in love with her instantly!❤️ Hope we will have more of her. 😳 U will have plenty of Aliya along with You-Know-Who 😉 in the next update.

As the day passes by a child is left on her own, abandoned by her father and mother alike. What we do not know is why and how the circumstances lead to this. Yet we are hopeful to find all our answers as we go deeper into the story.😊 It was heartbreaking for me to pen the last part not coz of Noor's breakdown but that tells how Aliya was abandoned by her parents even though she is such a happy child


Noor's pain was valid and touching. I love this Noor more than I loved the show one. 😉 Noor here is much older, has been rendered more mature by all the pain she endured and is on the verge of motherhood herself. So u won't get to see a mischievous Noor here.

Now eagerly waiting to see what exactly had happened all those years ago. And why Zoya had done what she did. I hope we will get all these answers pretty soon. U will have to wait for that am afraid 😛

Thanks for sharing this story with us. Lots of love.❤️ Waiting to read more. 🤗 Thanks for encouraging me dear to write 🤗

P.s. and see? I kept my promise! 😛
Thats one helluva shocker for me 🤣





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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Amazing story dear.

First chapter was awesome. This helds so much in it...cannot wait to read more.There are many lines and emotions in this chapter which bowled me over:)
This is intriguing.
What has Zoya done which broke him completely?
What was her reasons?
Going by the way Pooja's character has been written we may get Aditya marrying pooja in future.. Sorry for these questions but your story has intrigued me to it and just trying to decode the signs😳😆😆
sorry for blabbering so cutting it short...
This is an awesome story. I loved reading it and cannot wait for more chapters.
Please update asap... Waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
I have seen you in Saher di' gallery & I remember that your colour was light purple something:)
but now it is purple. Your posts are reduced too?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Awesome update dear
Very well written...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Very beautiful..looking forward to next update🤗

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