Adiya SS: Rainbow In The Rain, Chap 7 on Pg 55, 29/01/19

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: diatoms82
This is just so beautiful !!
I had tears in my eyes by the end & I can feel that next updates r going to be super emotional. I'm so excited for this self discovery of Aditya with her princess in tow.
Plz do continue with this story, u surely r a gifted writer.
Loads of love to u 😊

Till I saw your comment I was under the feeling that the update is so bad that readers are barely interested to even read it thank you for the lovely comment 😳 if this update made u emotional then be ready for the big reveal that will happen as that's gonna be the most emotional part of this story n I can only hope I do justice to it. As for Adi he may not become a loving father overnight but he will start taking baby steps 😊 and of course now that he got acquainted with his lil princess there is no way he will turn his back on her.

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supriya

@Supi94

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#222

Thanks for the update.. I eagerly wait for Ur update..
Your writing is just flawless.It is one of my favorite ss here. Please continue.. Will love to see the ss getting completed 😊

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#223

thanks for pm as always. was certainly worth the wait. not to long or boring. loved how you incorporated the past with the present.
why did Zoya leave. will she come back, hope so. please update soon

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@Coffee_Chips

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#224

Hey don't feel negative about response. This is an emotional story which might not connect everyone but eventually will make sense to those who do not comment too. You know ryt there are silent readers in our forum? 😉😆

Moving to the chap one of my fav chapters this was. Elaborating AdiYa's past was a brilliant idea bcz I had a big smile plastered on my face. They were so in love & happiness had no boundaries in their lives. I feel quite bad for Adi now because he dedicated all his life for Zoya & wonder how equations changed b/w 'em 😕

Aliya is adorbs & Adi cannot be such a jerk to not regard abt his daughter ofc 😊 He knows he's a father to this kiddo, who has expectations of fatherly love from him but the situations has changed him. Pm the next & yeah, hope this analysis made you happy 😃

Btw, one suggestion is that if you'd continue the updates asap maybe the viewing might increase too. Just a sweet suggestion 😊

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: Binzzz
Superb update...
They had been leading such a beautiful life..
Waiting to know what happened...
Felt bad for aliya...
Adi is going to accept her..wow..
Update soon..

Yes and this was another reason why I wrote that scene in more detail - so that my readers could not confuse AdiYa in this story with AdiJa in the show since they were bffs. AdiYa shared a beautiful bond n it was never a case of friendship confused for love. It was a natural transition here. My heart breaks too whenever I write about Aliya 😭 But don't worry she will win over Adi soon 😉 Adi won't get into father mode right away but he will be seen taking baby steps.

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geet0910

@geet0910

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#226

This was such a superb n lovely update dear. It was emotional, oh so romantic, sweet n cute all in one. Loved it totally. U updated this part so late😭 thats y i dont read any ffs or ss becos i have to wait for days for next part n u knw this. Still u dont update it soon😭 pls update next part soon😭

Ps. Y do u think ur story will bore us or we wud not b interested to read it? Its so so bful n i love long n meaningful updates. Pls dont discontinue this story n leave it halfway ever. Thats leaves a bitter experience to me not to get attached n read ffs n ss ever b4 they r completed. i m loving this story very much. 😳

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Shonu_1996

@Shonu_1996

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#227

The story soo far is really beautiful... it is quite interesting to see where it goes..

Plz continue this story.. there are still soo many questions unanswered till now..

Why zoya left.. where she is now.. is she was forced.. will she come back.. and if she.. will aditya accept her which will be very hard.. the emotional journey of aditya is also soo beautifully written yaar..

I also love how you have envolve the past incidents with the present.. arnoor are also soo cute and support..

Plz do continue this story..

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JungleeBilli

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 7 years ago

#228

Their story was too good to be true- childhood sweethearts who loved each other crazy, meant to be, no romantic rivals or vamps, had a HEA written for the rest of their lives. Maybe that's why tragedy striked. The story paced is good but maybe it's time Zoya is introduced as well. Or maybe some indication of the upcoming tragedy in FBs. Did Adi cheat? Is Zoya dead? Or maybe Wasim had some hand? What happened? Aliya cares so much about her Pa who didn't look back at her for years but what about her Ma? What she thinks about that? Not trying to dictate your story, a writer knows best. Just a suggestion, hope you don't mind.

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil
Their story was too good to be true- childhood sweethearts who loved each other crazy, meant to be, no romantic rivals or vamps, had a HEA written for the rest of their lives. Maybe that's why tragedy striked. The story paced is good but maybe it's time Zoya is introduced as well. Or maybe some indication of the upcoming tragedy in FBs. Did Adi cheat? Is Zoya dead? Or maybe Wasim had some hand? What happened? Aliya cares so much about her Pa who didn't look back at her for years but what about her Ma? What she thinks about that? Not trying to dictate your story, a writer knows best. Just a suggestion, hope you don't mind.

I don't believe every story needs a villain or a vamp 😊 Sometimes circumstances act as the bad guy n here that probably is the case. I had already outlined the plot long ago and I have stuck to it. Trouble is I wanted this to be an OS and I thought maybe this will make for a super long OS, maybe spanning 10k - 13k words but when I finished the first update I thought this will take another 4 updates but given my writing style n my penchant for adding details this is growing big Plot though remains the same. I know all of you are eager to see Zoya in the present but there is some time for it. That is why I am making up for it by showing the past. There is an entire part dedicated to just Zoya. Upcoming updates will give a clue about what possibly went wrong. About Aliya thinking about Zoya u will get to see that soon. I get it as a reader u will have many questions 😊 and no I will never mind that. It means readers are engrossed in ur story n thank u for that 😊

I know my writing style will probably not appeal to everyone because it generally doesn't just revolve around the lead pair. Story is the lead here, not a particular character but I guess when u write a fanfic the general expectation is that the audience is interested more in the lead couple and that is why I asked that question. If not many are liking this story, I will probably shift this story to a private blog as it probably didn't do well enough to continue here 😊

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
Aditya & Zoya had perfect life full of fun,happiness & love then how come they end up like this separated from each other? They both understood each other so well . Aaliyah is one adorable kid and even though her father kept his distance from her she never did so from her side . Despite everything she loved him and she is so young to understand these things . Great to see Adi realising how he has missed being a father to her & has decided to change that . That was really commendable from Adi . Amazing update mandy . Loved it

Yes Megha, they were very much in love and there is a big reason y they aren't together now. Aliya's character is inspired by a friend's daughter I was fortunate to meet. She was a very intelligent child, way beyond her years and a very compassionate child 😳 Adi will definitely try his best to be a father n let's see where that takes him 😳

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