||The Dusking Sky Ch.6 Part 2||*08/07*{PG.26} - Page 11

Originally posted by: Pori

Noor on hash brownies?😆

HAHA, love Zoya's remarks regarding the brownines and Adi's reaction.

hmm, so who is this woman Adi is trying to avoid? and I'm so intrigued to know why he doesnt celebrate his birthday no more.

and what's with Zoya tracing her ring finger?

I'm guessing both Zoya and Aditya has a past that'll connect them so well.

Your description on panic attack was bang on. It's described so well and onnly someone who suffers through them knows how it feels😔

LOVED the update and plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Dragonfly88

Thank you sooo much :) Did it match any of the scenarios you had imagined lol?
Glad you liked it !!! I knowww I wasn't planning on stopping there but I thought it would be fun haha. Will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: jerry73

Wow, just Wow, 😆 I'm totally speechless❤️. I just read the update twice. How do you manage to write so well? You know you should bring out a novel just like Fifty Shades of Grey which was a fanfiction though I didn't like it much 😕. But nevertheless, your story is just amazing. Loved the way you were describing Zoya today, she thinking about Aditya's cologne and all, Arjun and Noor as usual were sooo cute 😆, I would love if you write from Aditya's POV. I am sure Aditya is imagining someone else in the last part with the way he is so close to Zoya, 😕 you left it in a cliff hanger 🥱, Please update sooon waiting...

Originally posted by: Dragonfly88

Was waiting for your comment 😉. Thank you so so much for saying that! I dont think this is novel level but if you so, it means a lot :) Fifty shades😆

i am planning on eventually showing Aditya's pov but for now let there be mistery lol! Keep reading !

Edited by Dragonfly88 - 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Dragonfly88

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

amazing chapter!

so well penned!

thankyou so much for the pm!

i was yesterday only thinking when will you update next and today here is the update!😳