AdiYa FF ~The Hookup~ NEW CH UPDATED - Page 21

Originally posted by: KashishJ

Nicely written chapter.

I am unable to accept AdiYa cud be cheaters😭.

May be Posh spiked their drinks to make AdiYa guilty so that Posh could easily get away with their affair.

Originally posted by: hriti713

This was amazing! 👏

You write really well and I don't know why but I'm suspecting Yash 😆

Zoya must be having a really tough time as she can't even share her feelings of what she had done and that is like a burden for her... She had to enter like a thief in her own house and can't even face herself in the mirror... You've written it with so much perfection!! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sbhavi

Super update

Originally posted by: Santiago24

This is real mature writing! I love .. so love it.

Two adults in such a situation.. no justification .no vilification.. shit happens, yes! There is no rationality associated with these things and I absolutely love how you have handled such an explosive topic with such maturity.. the blame is all self inflicted so far.. struggle is all internal..

Can't wait to read more... Pls update ASAP

Originally posted by: Flame.

They have messed up and how!

Would be interesting to see how they deal with the consequences and their internal guilt. I can't wait for Adi and Zoya to meet again. It would make for one hell of an awkward meet 😆

Only complain I have is the update was tooo short. Please make it longer the next time! :D

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

its totally messed up...

zoya is too guilty for cheating her husband...but i really don't know why I am suspecting yash also...where were he last night...

Originally posted by: KashishJ

Nicely written chapter.

I am unable to accept AdiYa cud be cheaters😭.

May be Posh spiked their drinks to make AdiYa guilty so that Posh could easily get away with their affair.

Originally posted by: Sovereign_K

I'm loving where this is going, but obviously, I do not know where this is going but I liked the way it started off. 😆

Hahaha but it's a huge compliment that you're liking the story so much just after 2 chapters 🤗

Looking forward to reading further where Adiya meets in consciousness. 😆

That will be hella interesting, I can tell you that 😆

And the way you write is awesome, I really liked some comparisons you made and the style of some sentences...

Awww so sweet of you to say that! 😳

Both want to hide all evidence, which going to bit them back for sure. 😳

You'll just have to wait and see 😆

I do not know if you will justify their actions in the upcoming parts but I will personally not want a justification because concerning me cheating is disgusting whatever the situation you were in, drunk or not, conscious or unconscious. 🤔

Nope, can't justify their actions but can tell you what led up to this deed of theirs. So keep reading to know! 😉

Next part, please.

Today!!

Keechu.

Akshita. 😆

Originally posted by: coderlady

Something tells me Yash is not such an innocent party either. Just maybe Puja might be up to something too. Why did she miss her own anniversary party?

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Loving this story and the way you are writing the characters of Adi and Zoya

I do smell something fishy abt poo and yash some thing out there seems weird abt them

Thanks a ton for the pm