SS||FOREVER is a LIE||Chapter 16 Pg 30||22nd Sept - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Amazing update
Y i'm thinking pooja's bf is Adi😕
But can't wait for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Amazing Chapter😊
You're an awesome writer😉
But too short😭
Please continue soon and pm me😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
A New story from you 🤗 I'm so glad I found that visiting your profile unless I would have missed such awesome piece...

Once again have to say Banner it's really incredible all These Pics and coloring Everything about it is perfect!

Coming to the story I'm really interested in this show but unfortunately I don't like watching TV much or don't feel so watched just starting few episodes they are really good together... and I am happy you are writing on them...

Prologue is about present I guess... Kinda Intriguing Why Aditya is angry with Zoya this much?

And first chapter is about a lot of adroable things and funny too... Chubby Zoya, eh??? 😆

Hard to imagine Jenifer like that 😛
but I just loved Those lines and was smiling throughout where it was written about her love for food 🤣 food they should know to how much beloved they are actually 😆

Aditya woo Seems like an idiot to trouble this Cute Girl this Though I have enjoyed a lot reading his all comeback with his parents...

Yash is already imagining Zoya as his future wife...😆

Mahi is friendly figure over here good...

well liking their Cute sizzling chemistry from childhood...

waiting for more...

I should actually stay busy with books instead of being here but couldn't resist to read your story...

I'm really greedy to read your all Story no matter on which couple you write I will be always there ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
Chapter 2 & 3 Liking how it's progressing... Aditya and Yash has moved out for Study while cutipie Zoya still struggling with her issues if she really wished to loss weight she has to act serious too well until she's going to be in her 20s I guess she will be in her form 😉

What does Adi want Actually always teasing poor girl no one is complaining about her weight like he do... He looks very much interested in her and she gets irritate too well Something is between them but they are unaware of it...

Loved their small Moments while departing...
So now Pooja in the picture until he will be there BACK to his family I guess she's going to be his side as his girlfriend! Don't know but let's see how it goes...

Okay I should not read more ...
I will be back after my exams only
Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Read all three chaps at a go & it was a 'I'm on the edge of my seat' kinda read 😆
The cuties Adi, Zoya and surprisingly Yash & Mahi were adorbs & could totally imagine Adi & Zo taunting each other, while reading the story 😃
You've got a fine backdrop & keen to know what happens ahead & as I've read along you don't send pms isn't it? ROFL😛
I'll follow the story anyway 😎
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
This is so amazing love your all 3 parts
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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YAYYY!!!! See i told you you'd be stumped Adi!!! ;)
Glad to see ke Mr Hooda ko jhatka laga... and EXTREMELY glad to see k finding her look attractive DID NOT suddenly cause Aditya to fall for her.. when he loves her, he should love her for who she is not because she suddenly got thinner..

LOVED their tom-and-jerry fights!! LOL

And Mahi's coughing.. "yeah and Mahi too" hahahaha

Update soon! :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29
This is really interesting, great job
Please pm when u update:)
Posted: 7 years ago
#30
This was the best part 👏 Noor noticing the muscular Adi cracked me 😆 Still the bachpana is there in him & Zoya's transformation still didn't affect Adi to the point, where he stops calling her fatty anymore was so typical of the guy..
Wanna see how the taunting ends up with a beautiful twist & waiting to see how the story unfolds 😊

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