AdiYa SS : Dare you to Move Part 2 page 13 *Updated 21/04* - Page 7

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..

What if I say continue this one and start a new one too<3

Depends totally on you:)

Whatever you will do I know I am gonna love it😳

So make it as soon as possible!

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

This was lovely ❤️

Originally posted by: .IPKKND.

Loved this

Especilly the ending

Jm pinning on aditya falling in love first!

Originally posted by: wrizaa

Good work... try to continue this one...

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

RESS.

(Once i'm free from all the work I'll unres this) 😉

UNRESSS

CRRRIIIEEESSS! Sushi, CRRRIIIESSS!!!! WHAT YOU DOING TO MEE!!?😭😭😆 My poor heart can't take this!🤣

Hahaaa sushiii🤣 idk if this is my praise or criticism😆😆

This sh!t is so intense, someone call an ambulance. 😆 *faints*

When did Adi get this nice and intense?

Hawww faints? I fainted in college once! 🤣 *Throws water on face and Madz wakes up half smiling half blabbering*😆

This is so good I'm not even lying. I love how you visualized how maybe the future track will go with them being in the same office. Also I love how you wrote Adi in this he seems so intrigued by her. 🤬

Okayyy this was my praise only! You liked it, now it's kinda clear😆😉 Yeahh! This is the futuristic Adi, improvised version😳 Yeah he's whipped! 🤣

OMG the flashback part nearly made me scream I couldn't help but fangirl and imagine Harshad and Jen playing this part in my head.

LOOOL '"You stupid moron, ek better excuse nahi tha? Sona hai tujhe? And since when do you call her Zoya?" He thought to himself mentally abusing his brain or heart, who knows' THIS PART THOUGH🤣 ROTFL

LOL!! 🤣🤣 while writing this part my mind was going stop the shit you're writing 😛 Flashback, oh yeah , i enjoyed writing it too! 😳

Naaa ADI is making her his. Gurrrl you should make SS or FF!!!

Hahaha yeah yeahh! I am making it an SS. ❤️

Awesome job!!! Keep writing!😉

Finally thank you so much! This comment means a lot!!

Originally posted by: A.Green