The Call of Destiny - AdiYa FF - Updated Chapters 4 & 5 - Page 7

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani

Loved it..

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

Such a long chapter 😃 Thank you

Loved it aishu dii 👏

Originally posted by: MissRight

Oh wow... intense!!!! So that's how they meet!!! Can't wait to.read more

Originally posted by: komlika

Awesome story

Did Aditya killed Yash?

Can't wait to read more

Originally posted by: -Villete-

Hi, Aishwarya. Thanks for the pm and sorry for the delay in my reply. Got caught up with work and finally sat down with all the reading to be done over the weekend!😆

Read both the parts. And I really liked the buildup so far. It almost seems like a show of its own with the vivid imagery that you created. The description panned out an image in my head with Aditya looming over the victim (probably Yash) as it pours heavily on the scene. And Zoya's life uproots all but in a second! You have managed to keep the suspense really well. Zoya and Aditya are in different cities to begin with but Ajay, Asha and Radha were concealing the details behind Yash's death as well. Did Yash really die in Pune where Aditya encountered him or elsewhere is yet to come out. Or these could be two separate people to begin with. Oh god, you've left us with so many unanswered questions! Enjoyed reading both the prologue and the part so far. They have created quite a bit of mystery and I'm eager to find out the answers in your story. Continue real soon! And could you please PM me when you update next?