The Call of Destiny - AdiYa FF - Updated Chapters 4 & 5 - Page 6

Originally posted by: shdiksha

Its awesome

Originally posted by: pearl100

Aishwarya 👏 Amazing chapter, its been ages since I have read a very good FF.

Loved your entire chapter. Why do I feel its Yash who was shot by Aditya. And fate brings both Adi and Zoya together, Adi will punish himself when he gets to about Zoya and may be he ll help her out. Very very interesting concept. Waiting for your next part.

Thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: sreya98

Aish..! I can't wait anymore for next update.
You penned the emotions so beautiful, I totally loved it.
PPlease update soon dear.

Originally posted by: veds275

Great update. Very engaging. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Res

Unres-

IK this took me the 'whole day' to unres and read your chapter 😆 I'm sorry for that had to do a lot of work and I didn't want to rush reading this. Anyway gurrrl can I just say what a chapter!!? Waaah👏 I enjoyed reading it. ❤️'ED IT!!

I'm actually quite surprise from this chapter that in fact Adi didn't kill Yash but in fact something else happened to me but eh idk I'm still not convinced. (I honestly don't know why😆 my brain isn't convinced okaaayy😆😭) Will have to wait and see how the story unravels.

How Adi bravely admitted he did a mistake and wanted to quit because of a mistake he committed that costed a innocent person losing their life... Man it takes guts to face the truth and forget everything else and thats make me fall in love with this Adi. Indeed the truth is bitter that can destroy you for a short period of time but in the long run you'll be happy at least you did whereas a lie... lets not go there we all know the consequences of lying in the long run.

I like how you wrote this scene including how many for their profession would go to such an extent to hide a mistake by lying not thinking about the consequences. It's nicely written.

I liked how you wrote down how Zoya was feeling after hearing about Yash's passing away. I felt sad when she felt the need to kill her self but indeed it was "destiny" that Adi saw her and rushed her to the hospital.

P.S Also that Mehndi smudging part 😆😆 Y to A yeaaah?😆😆😉 Dropping hints who her future man might be😆

Thank you for the PM.

Update soon!!!!😭 (Also make sure its this long hehehe)

Originally posted by: Fiza28

Originally posted by: Santiago24

Lovely chapter and terrific writing..

The intensity of emotions came through clearly.. I felt bad and excited for Zoya - both in equal measure.

Pls update soon.. 😊