The Call of Destiny - AdiYa FF - Updated Chapters 4 & 5

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Diya_Abhilasha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#111

Aditya asking the kid to confirm was too good😆

Last part was hillarious🤣

Waiting for next update😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
hehe adi last scene was awesome
haha zoya chasing adi

Glad that you enjoyed it!! 😛

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: sreya98
Aww totally in love with this story..
Lasts part was cute..
Cont soon dear

Thank you so much dear!! 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
I started watching this serial 2 days ago & came to forum. Saw your story & that hooked me up.

Prologue & CS was nice
It was an interesting story line which is as usual different from original.
You wrote the update beautifully
Aditiya shot yash by mistake & he resigned from his job.
Zoya came to Mumbai for attending yash funeral not as his bride.
She took sleeping pills to finish her life.
Aditiya zoya is same bus
He saw her condition & told driver to go to hospital first.
Hope she will be alright
Now it's time for aditiya to repent for his mistake which he did unintentionally.
Update soon please
Do pm me
Thanks

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Update was good
Aditiya was frustrated after meeting with zoya.
Asha zoya scene was nice. She scolded her for her actions.
She decided to stay in Mumbai & fulfill yash dream about her.
Nani aditiya Convo. She told him to think about her POV.
They meet again & this time he was shocked.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks

Heyy!! Good to see you here in my AdiYa FF too...glad that you are loving the show and my FF!! Shall continue soon!! 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi
Aww what gud update aishu dii
The second meeting was hilarious 😆😆

Must say this di ur awesome with dialogues 👏👏

Thank you so much dear!!! Glad that you are enjoying!! 😆

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: sirimiri
Amazing start continue soon.

Thank you very much!!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Diya_Abhilasha
Aditya asking the kid to confirm was too good😆

Last part was hillarious🤣
Waiting for next update😊

Thank you!! 😆 Keep supporting!! 😊

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: minaz296
Awesome...plz continue

Thanks a lot!! Shall continue soon!! 😊

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Anaya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#119

Thanks for the PM, Aishwarya! The last bit was absolutely hilarious! I could imagine Harshad panicking and running away from Zoya, his eyes popping out at her sight. 🤣

Oh god! What a horror it must have been to see her at the exact moment he was busy bashing her with Naani! And Naani is such a sweetheart, explaining the circumstances under which Zoya had been rude with him. I like her already!

It is going to be absolutely delightful to run into Zoya everyday now, Adi will soon find a purpose in life! And it was so sweet of Yash to prepare Zoya for the inevitable, to encourage her to become independent and at the same time making accomodations for her in Mumbai. Yeh Asha toh apartment hi hadap leti if not for Zoya!

Arjun as usual is a fun guy! The bit where Adi justfied making calls from the ICU and Arjun scratching his head on realization had me in splits!😆

Btw, do we have someone in our head for Asha? As in who's playing her in the story?

I'm eager to see what happens next. How does Adi's perceptions about life, love and everything in between change when Zoya moves in next door? Adi will finally open up about his tough life and it will be equally interesting to see Zo's character growth. Poor guy thinks she's stalking him. 😆

Update soon!

Edited by -Villete- - 7 years ago