The Call of Destiny - AdiYa FF - Updated Chapters 4 & 5

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: CRAZYCUTEE
Superb update
Zoya said adi to why he saved to in return adi said if he again meet her seeing her attempt to sucide he will not save infact he will help her to sucide
And Zoya decide to stay in Mumbai fullfill Yash dreams about Zoya being inpendent and second meeting was hilarious

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: lovesick23
Hahahahaha the last scene was so hilarious. I can only imagine what it must look like Aditya running all freaked out with Zoya behind him 😆
Although we did have a scene like that but this is funnier 😆

Hahahaa...even I was laughing as I wrote that scene 😆 Was visualizing that in my mind 😆

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: .Priyanka-
Awesome update

Thank you! 😊

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srividhya68

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

wow
awesome upt
loved it
the ending is superb ...rofl🤣

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: srividhya68
wow
awesome upt
loved it
the ending is superb ...rofl🤣

Thank you 😆 More hilarious tracks on the way 😉

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

hehe adi last scene was awesome

haha zoya chasing adi

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sreya98

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Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Aww totally in love with this story..
Lasts part was cute..
Cont soon dear

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Asif

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Posted: 7 years ago

#108

I started watching this serial 2 days ago & came to forum. Saw your story & that hooked me up.

Prologue & CS was nice
It was an interesting story line which is as usual different from original.
You wrote the update beautifully
Aditiya shot yash by mistake & he resigned from his job.
Zoya came to Mumbai for attending yash funeral not as his bride.
She took sleeping pills to finish her life.
Aditiya zoya is same bus
He saw her condition & told driver to go to hospital first.
Hope she will be alright
Now it's time for aditiya to repent for his mistake which he did unintentionally.
Update soon please
Do pm me
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Asif

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Posted: 7 years ago

#109

Update was good
Aditiya was frustrated after meeting with zoya.
Asha zoya scene was nice. She scolded her for her actions.
She decided to stay in Mumbai & fulfill yash dream about her.
Nani aditiya Convo. She told him to think about her POV.
They meet again & this time he was shocked.
Waiting for next update soon
Thanks