kurbaan hua (part-2) epilogue Updated a zaya ff (completed)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER-37
HOME
NEXT DAY
NIGHT
NIKKAH
aliya walked downstairs by wearing a blue sari and her head covered by her sari pallu she was looking breath taking ,she passed a smile to everyone and took her seat ,in front of her zain was sitting by wearing a black shirt and white jeans and clean shave as always, he was looking handsome and hot as always,they both passed a smile to each other
qazi sahab-aliya ghulam haider aapka nikkah zain usmaan abdullah ke saath ho raha hai kya aapko yeh nikkah qubool hai
aliya-qubool hai
and everyone clapped for them
qazi sahab-zain usmaan abdullah aapka nikkah aliya ghulam haider se ho raha hai kya aapko yeh nikkah qubool hai
zain-qubool hai
and every one claps for them
ayat hugs aliya
ayat-appi l am so happy for u
aliya-thank you very much
jade and sapphire together kiss aliya's cheeks and she closed her eyes ,zain was admiring aliya
jade and sapphire-mama chalo
kids drags aliya with them towards zain
kids hugs zain
zain-so chale hamare ghar
jade and sapphire-yes
aliya holds sapphire's hand and zain holds jade's hand zain and aliya were walking together with kids on their either side
ZAIN'S APARTMENT
jade-wow yeh kitna big hai
sapphire-aur beautiful bhi hai
aliya-chalo ab room main
jade-no mama
aliya-jade kal subha school bhi hai chalo
sapphire-no mama
aliya-chalo na beta please mama is also tried
KIDS ROOM
the room was designed for kids the bed was having the cover of jade and sapphire's favourite cartoon doramon ,room was decorated with ballons,soft toys,teddy bear and with dolls
sapphire-wow
aliya-dekho papa ne aapke liye room bane hai
aliya puts kids in bed
ZAIN'S ROOM
aliya walks inside the room,only to find it decorated with flowers and candles ,tears roll down from aliya's cheeks ,she gets the memory of their happy times
zain sees the room
zain-aliya
aliya hugs him
zain-l am sorry maine room decorate karne ke liye nahni kaha tha
aliya-zain main abhi ready nahni hoon
zain cups her face
zain-aliya main tumse pyaar karta hoon lekin uska matlba toh yeh nahni hai ke main tumhare jism ko chooein chahta hoon bina tumhare maarzi ke,main asie nahni karoga
aliya smiles
aliya-thank you so much
and both have a eye lock

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

CHAPTET-38
ZAIN'S APARTMENT
MORNING
DINNING TABLE
zain walks downstairs only to find kids on dining table
zain-good morning jade sapphire
jade sapphire-good morning papa
aliya walks out from kitchen by a pot in her hand
zain sees aliya and lost his breath,aliya was wearing the same suhugaraat sari but a white colour one she was looking like an angel
aliya places the pot on dinning table
aliya-good morning zain
but zain was so lost in aliya that he didn't replied back
aliya-zain beitho na
but again he didn't replies me
aliya waves her hand in front of him
and zain comes back to the world
aliya-zain kabse bula rahe hoon main
zain-sorry
aliya-its okay chalo beitho breakfast thand ho rahe hai
aliya serves all and sits beside zain
jade-mamma school main grandparents day hai
sapphire-mamma hamare grandparents kahan hai
zain and aliya glance at each otherr
zain-mera hogaya
zain leaves the place because he hates suraiya a lot and can't forgive her for spoiling his life
aliya-beta aap khao main abhi aate hoon
ZAIN'S ROOM
aliya enters the room only to find zain packing his back for office
aliya-zain mujhe tumse ek baat karne hai
zain-haan bolu aliya
aliya-zain tumhe nahni lagate ki humein mumbai jaane chahiye
and his hands stops and he looks at aliya
zain-nahni mujhe mumbai nahni jaane
aliya-zain mera baat ke baare main socho aur sirf 4 din ke liye hum mumbai jaate hai please akhir baccho ko bhi pata chalne chahiye ki unke dadi bhi hai
zain-nahni aliya main tumhe mumbai lekar nahni jaane chahte hoon please try to understand
aliya-lekin kyu zain
zain-jise ghar ne tumhe aur mujhe alag kar diye waise ghar se mujhe koi rishte nahni rakhne
well mujhe late horahe hai l have to go bye
aliya-bye

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pree551

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

you are the best writer 👏 keep writing and continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

CHAPTER-39
ZAIN'S APARTMENT
zain returned back home from the office ,he was in his room and was on a phone just when aliya enters the room by a glass of milk in her hand.she place the milk on table and sits on bed ,zain keeps the phone aside and sits beside aliya
zain-so how was u r day?
aliya-it was fine,what about u
zain-mine was also fine
aliya-zain toh tumne socho
zain-kise baare main
aliya-yeh hi ki humein mumbai jaane chahiye
zain-nahni socha aur nahni sochne chahte hoon main
aliya-zain meri ek wish hai ki main mumbai jaoein aur mamu ka grave par jaakar dua karo
zain-thik hai lekin hum barkat villa nahni jaygein
aliya-zain tumhe mere kasam tum mujhe barkat villa lekar jaoge
zain-aliya what u did tumne mujhe ,tumhare kasam de diye,ab mujhe tumhe barkat villa lekar jaane hogaya
aliya-toh jao tickets book karo aur main packing karte hoon
and aliya starts to pack her clothes
zain-allah hamare rishte ki aur aliya ki hifzat karne
NEXT DAY MORNING
aliya was looking beautiful in white dress which she wored(when she met zain after 20 years for the first time in bhopal)zain too wored the same clothes which he wored when he met aliya for the first time in bhopal(GREEN jacket)
jade and sapphire hugs aliya's legs
aliya-chalo
AIRPORT
zain aliya and kids were standing for luggage checking and for ticket checking
checker-zain abdullah
zain-hi l am zain abdullah
she checks his ticket and signs it
checker-sir yeh aapke ticket aur yeh mera number
aliya-aapka number kyu
checker-sir is so hot ma'ma l want to share my number with him
aliya-aapko koi right nahni hai ke aap mera shahaur ko aapka number de
zain-excuse me keep u r number with u,mujhe aapka number nahni chahiye kyu ki mera paas already itne hot wife hai aur jo main chaho ,jab chaho aur jahaan chaho unke saath kara sakta hoon
and winks at aliya and aliya pass him a angry look
checker-next
AFTER SOME TIME
kids were playing ,aliya was reading a magazine as she was feeling bored
zain sits beside her
zain-waise tum jab jeasouly hote ho toh aur bhi zyaadya hot dekhte ho
aliya glares at him
zain place a kiss on her cheeks and whispere in her ears
zain-hot
aliya blushes ,but tries to hide her blush
FLIGHT
zain-oh no seats toh bahut dura hai,jade and sapphire u r there
kids happily seat on their seat
zain-meri woh hai
aliya-aur meri woh
and both points at different direction
zain-oh no tum uske saath beithoge
aliya-haan toh sirf beithane wale hoon usko kiss nahni karne wale
and she was about to leave just when zain grabs her by waist
zain-aur tum isko kiss bhi nahni kare sakte
aliya-kyu
zain-kyu ki tum meri ho sirf meri
and nuzzles his face in her neck and cheeks ,aliya pushes him away and sits on her seat
aliya was feeling sleepy, she sleeps ,zain peeps from his seat and sees that the man beside her was bad eyeing her,zain gets up from his seat and comes towards aliya
zain-woh seat meri hai ,kya aap waha jaa sakte hai
man exchanges the seat with zain
zain seats beside aliya and takes her in his arms and both dozes off together,aliya smiles in sleeps and sleeps peacefully in his arms
the love birds sleeps peacefully without knowing about the storm which will hit their lives very soon

sleeping position was this ,but zain's hand on her waist and aliya's head on his shoulder and both eyes closed and face down(not looking at eachother) and clothes which l described above

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER-40
MUMBAI
AIRPORT
zain aliya and kids walks out from airport and hires a taxi for barkat villa,aliya enjoyed the ride in taxi
BARKAT VILLA
aliya along with zain and kids gets down from taxi,aliya was shock to see a alsoultely silence
zain walks inside followed by aliya
suriaya was so happy to see zain
suriaya-zain
before she can speak a word she sees aliya with kids
suriaya-yeh ladki yahan kya kare rahe hai
zain holds aliya's hand
zain-biwi hai meri
suriaya fumes in angry and leaves
a tear roll down from aliya's cheeks
aliya-zain kya iss ghar main asie koi nahni hai jo mujhe pyaar karte hai
zain-aliya hai na shazia bhabhi aur fahad bhai woh tumhe bohat miss karte hai
aliya and zain walks towards dinning area where entire house was having the breakfast
nafisa and shazia both fumed in angry by seeing aliya which didn't went unnotice by zain and aliya,zain was about to speak some words but aliya stops him by holding his hand
shazia-aliya aayege tum welcome in barkat aap kya chahiye tumhe
zain-mind u r words bhabhi
shazia-ohh toh aap bhi bola rahe hai aliya ke ashiqua
nafisa-kya chahiye tumhe aliya sab kuch toh khatam kar diye tumne
zain and aliya both were shocked by the words spoke by nafisa,she was blaming aliya for spoiling the lifes of abdullah and their happiness but the truth was the real person behind all this was she,aliya realized that,she gave her happiness and her kids future just for nafisa and her daughters but even after creating such a big mess in everyone life's she is the same nafisa who was use to be before,but the fuel to fire was been add by fahad
fahad-zain kaise tum hamare dad ke hatyaar ko yahan lekar aaye sakte ho
this was enough for zain,his angry now didn't had any bounds ,how dare his brother was raising his finger towards aliya,aliya his wife,he loved her so much,just for her happiness he came to mumbai,zain can tolerate the words against any one but except aliya,he loved her so much ,fahad's wife was the real person who did all this but he is saying that aliya is the culprit
zain opened his mouth to speak something but aliya runs upstairs and zain followed her
ZAIN'S ROOM
aliya walks inside the room and all the memories hit her back,their kitkit their love,their romance,their sleeping in each others arms and pillow fights
a tear rolls down from her cheeks
zain-aliya
aliya hugs him
aliya-zain koi mujhse pyaar nahni karta
zain-aliya l love u
aliya hugs him more tightly

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER-41
NEXT DAY
MORNING
BARKAT VILLA
DINNING AREA
all were gathered around the table to have their breakfast,nafisa was eating the fries with a stick spoon just when aliya enters with jade and sapphire,aliya greets everyone but no one greets her back,a tear ran down aliya's cheeks she wiped them away quickly as zain's word rang in her head"l love u"this word provides a great courage to aliya,to face the hatred of the people,who actually deserve her hatred ,nafisa and shazia glanced at eachother and made a face,fahad indicated them ,not to open their mouth as yesterday night itself suriaya warned three of them to shut their mouths,as their is no point by talking to aliya,as she is nothing to them and talking to a person,who is our nothing is waste of time,shazia and nafisa quickly nod their head ,
aliya took a seat next to zain's chair and a memory hit her head,how they use to hold eachothers hand and how zain use to play with her hand while having the breakfast,aliya smiled to herself but reality hit her,that their is nothing between her and zain,zain loved her but she ,doesn't love him anymore,as her love is lost for him somewhere,allah only knows whether she will get her love back for him or till her last breath she will be his friend
sana,arub and saif came and took their seat
saif-hello chachi
aliya-hello how r u???
saif-l am fine
sana and arub were about to talk ,just when nafisa indicated them to shut their mouth or otherwise she will hit them hard on their faces,so kids were quite
aliya-jade sapphire sabko good morning bolu
jade and sapphire-good morning
but no one bother to open their mouth and greets the kids back
everyone was having their breakfast just when
jade-mamma mujhe jam chahiye
saif-ammi mujhe bhi jam chahiye
both aliya and shazia touch the jam bottle at the same time
aliya noticed that bottle contains only one spoon of jam that means only person can have jam in breakfast
aliya took the bottle in her hand and kept it in front of shazia,but nafisa hit shazia on her arm by indicating her that this is the right time to insult aliya,as zain his out of town and will return by late night,that means no one is to support aliya
shazia smirked at her by telling her that she understood her plans,aliya eating her breakfast
shazia-allah iss ghar main kya kya horahe hai
aliya-bhabhi kya hua
shazia-kya hua yeh tum kehe rahe ho
nafisa-aur nahni toh kya jo abhi hua woh kya tha
shazia-haan sahi kehe rahe hai nafisa
aliya-bhabhi mujhe kuch smajhe nahni aaya rahe hai maine toh sirf jam shazia bhabhi ko de diye kyu ki saif ko jam chahiye tha
nafisa-oh really
shazia-ek toh iss ghar main asie lok reha rahe hai jinka iss ghar se koi rishte hi nahni hai
nafisa-aur nahni toh kya
shazia-pata nahni yeh kiske bacche hai
nafisa-zain ke toh bacche nahni hai ,yeh pata nahni kiske saath affair tha
shazia-allah asie characterless ladke iss ghar main
nafisa- dekho na aayege brekfast karne
shazia-aur abhi tak yahan hi hai ,iss ke jagah main hote na toh bag pack kare kar chaliye gaye hote
nafisa-aur yeh donno bine baap ke bacche
this was the last word which added fuel to fire,aliya ran away and nafisa and shazia made a face at eachother
NIGHT
it was now 8 hours since aliya locked herself in the room,jade and sapphire were sitting in their room and were playing with their toys,nafisa and shazia both were laughing at their success ,suriaya enters inside the house only to find nafisa and shazia laughing like evils
suriaya-kya hua
shazia-mummy kal subha toh aliya iss ghar se chaliye jayege
suriaya smirks
nafisa-asie insult kiye humein aliya ko, ki kya baato
and laughs

what will happen now?????????????????????????????????

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CHAPTER-42
BARKAT VILLA
suriaya was waking towards her room just when she collides with jade and sapphire,she falls down,by hearing some sound nafisa and shazia come towards suriaya by running ,both holds suriaya by her hand and make her stand still,jade and sapphire were laughing
suriaya-yeh kya kare rahe tha tum donno
jade-humein by mistakely kiye
suriaya-jhooth
nafisa-mom yeh aliya ke bacche hai issliye jhooth hi bolagein
jade-shut up mera mamma jhooth nahni bolte
nafisa-tumein ne mujhe shut up bola how dare u?
nafisa was about to slap jade but aliya holds her hand
aliya-bhabhi haath neecha
jade and sapphire hugs aliya's legs and holds her duptta
shazia-kyu?
aliya-bhabhi baccho par haath nahni uthaein chahiye
shazia-galte kargen toh smajhne toh padage
aliya-toh aap pyaar se bhi smajhe sakte thi
shazia-aliya please tum mujhe mat smajho
nafisa-aur waise bhi smajne ki zarrota tumhe hai humein nahni
shazia-sahi kaha tumne
nafisa-tum yeh kyu nahni smajte ki tumhare zain ki life main ko izzat nahni hai
aliya-bhabhi meri zain ke life main bahut izzat hai
nafisa-oh really sab pata hai mujhe
shazia-aur nahni toh kya abhi tak zain ne chooein tak nahni hai tumhe
nafisa-hum sab ko pata hai ki tumhara aur zain ka rishte kaisa hai
suriaya-aur isske upar se yeh kehte ho ki yeh bacche zain ke hai ,affair kiske aur ke saath,naam zain ka,chup chap chale jao iss ghar se aapne bina baap ke baccho ke saath
aliya-mami yeh zain ke bacche hai
suriaya-koi proof hai tumhari paas????
aliya-nahni

nafisa-aur tum zain ki kya lagte ho???
aliya-biwi hoon main zain ki
shazia-sirf bed tak biwi ho tum zain ki
aliya-bhabhi mera aur zain ka rishte aapke aur fahad bhai jaisa nahni hai
nafisa and shazia were shocked to hear this,suriaya was angry ,shazia was thinking that,how dare she can say that fahad and her relation is till bed how dare she?suriaya was angry as the girl who spoiled her everything was uttering this word
suriaya raise her hand to slap aliya,aliya closes her eye so that she can feel less pain ,zain holds suriaya's hands,aliya opens her eyes only to find a angry zain
zain-how dare you mom?
suriaya-tumne mujhe se asie baat kiye zain
zain-aapne aliya pe haath uthaen ki soche bhi kaise
shazia-toh usse ne kya kiye zain
aliya was crying,zain was feeling pain in his heart to see her in this situation
aliya-zain yeh mujhe keha rahe hai ki mera paas kya proof hai ki jade aur sapphire tumhara bacche hai??
zain-proof chahiye na aapko
suriaya-haan
zain-aliya meri biwi hai aur jade sapphire mera bacche
all were quite
zain holds aliya's hands and takes her till their room
ZAIN'S ROOM
aliya was sitting on bed and zain was sitting beside her zain takes her hand in his and she looks at zain
zain-l am sorry
and he tries to hold his ears but aliya stops him by holding his hands
aliya-zain tum sorry kyu bole rahe ho,its okay
jade-mamma bhook lage rahe hai
sapphire-papa subha se kuch nahni khaye humein
zain-what???
aliya-nahni zain
zain puts his finger on her lips and looks at her with passion and desire in his eyes
zain-shhh
aliya-main abhi kuch lekar aate hoon
zain holds her hand
zain-main lekar aata hoon
AFTER SOME TIME
zain enters with a plate in his hand
zain-chalo
kids were having the dinner but aliya was quite
zain-aliya
aliya-mujhe bhook nahni hai zain
zain forcefully feeds her a spoonful of rice
zain feeds kids too
aliya feeds zain and gives him a blushy smile
LATER ON NIGHT
aliya was sitting on bed ,her hairs were tied by a clip,zain opens her clips
aliya-zain
zain puts his finger on her lips
zain-shhh tum khulaein baalon main bohat khobhsuraat lagte ho
aliya blushes
zain-good night
aliya-good night
SURIAYA'S ROOM
suriaya was pacing in room ,nafisa and shazia both were standing near her
nafisa-mom aaj ka plan bhi flop hogaye woh bhi iss shazia ke wajah se
shazia-maine kya kiye
nafisa-sab tumne hi kiye
suriaya-just shutup both of you,pehle hi mera dimag bohat kharba hai aur kharba mat karo kuch socho
nafis smirks
nafisa-mera paas ek plan hai mom,jise zain aliya ko khud iss ghar se bahar nikale dega
suriaya,shazia and nafisa smirks together

A TWIST WHICH WILL CHANGE ZAIN AND ALIYA'S LIFE FOREVER

zain and aliya both were wearing this

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