Zaya FF: Ostracised Healer chapter 6,page 21, 21.04.15

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Kiran Fatima

@zaya.fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

My heart is slamming hard against my chest to break it, to pound out of me...Teddy dnt deserve this...he is small...it should me...this is not the order...

I will not narrate stories to him anymore!!

We will not throw water balloons on others anymore!! We will not have fist fights!!

He said he will fight with anyone who teases me..!! My little saviour...

he will not go to College!!

He will not have a girl friend!!

He will not become a cricketer like Dhoni!!

Dhoni!! Dhoni!! I promised him same day that I will take him to dhoni...he will not see him anymore...

He will not get married, he will not have kids... !!

I wants him to have all these...he dnt deserve...For God sake he is a kid!! He should play...but not die...

I was literally crying throughout the chapter while reading it was way more emotional but these lines were so heart wrenching... My poor Aaliya lost her entire family.😭

Mind blowing work dude hats off to you👏

Plz continue soon and All the best for your exams

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: nashfa
Madhu chudail !! Hi Riya chudail😉
U have updated before my spamming Hahahaha said none can irritate with spamming😆
Hehehe
Coming back to your update
It was once again emotional thank u
Teddy dead.
My poor aalu
Continue
soon Air mei first spamming shuru karegi

Lots of love
Riya

Thank u so much for lovely lovely comment!! Yeah I will try to update soon

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

No the poor Teddy and Aaliya she is left all alone i am loving this story ! I hope will be able to make her want to live again ! continue soon Madhu and mis you !

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

@ Kitkitmkb I mean saleha...thank u dear...wonderful comment...yesh she will wish to live again...time is healer..

Thanks for loving this work

Yes I missed u.too so much

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

@Nazmin, thank u dear...for lovely comment!!

Yeah I will try to.update soon

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Zainedil

@Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Loved it Madhu ...and sorry for the earlier misunderstanding ...but i seriously thought she was imagining a teddy ...well now its clear ...really heart warming ...and Zain ..ahhh loved his entry

love

Sim

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salsabeel

@salsabeel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

U are reaaally sweet madhu!
Madhu please update teri meri! I am dying to read that part!! Can u please fulfill my request...aaj ya parso update kar don na teri meri <3 story! Please incomplete story acche nahi lagte!!!

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Zainedil
Loved it Madhu ...and sorry for the earlier misunderstanding ...but i seriously thought she was imagining a teddy ...well now its clear ...really heart warming ...and Zain ..ahhh loved his entry
love
Sim

Hayee why sorry yaar...I think I failed in narrating it properly!!

Anyways...thank u for lovely comment...

Wooow Zain entry😳 yeah...even I loved him...u r the first one to comment about him...sim

Wait and watch him😭 I feel bad for him...

today's update u ll know very little...of him...

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bloodsheds

@bloodsheds

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

So you're writing a new FF huh ? 😆

Anyways the concept is really amazing 👏
But its too emotional 😭 ...
Loved both the chps 😉

Oh my Aaliya lost everything 😭 😭 😭
And Zain's consoling her ... Now that was cute 😳

Hope we get a little less emotional updates , if that is possible ? 😛

Continue soon 😃