Zaya FF: Ostracised Healer chapter 6,page 21, 21.04.15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Hehehe. Humne abi b nhi padi.
But I ll try 2 read this story.

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#172

@ Anya take ur time jaan...no hurry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Padh liya maine 1st chappy padh liya.
Strtng ws gud. Beautiful family. N that Teddy cute name. She ws very lucky ki aisi family thi.
N ya Travel freaks like us.
I ws enjoying this stry coz her parents were supporting her n consoling her but blast..
OMG muje ye stry padne me dar lag rhi thi isliye humne strt nhi kiya tha. But now I m loving this stry.
Poor girl. Last part made me cry.
*running 2 read nxt chappy*

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

2nd chappy- vry vry emotional.
Kuch b nahi bacha uske pas.
N teddy b chala gya.
Beautifully written.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#175

3rd chappy- awesome. Zain ka b bitter past hai. Ohh!! The feeling of new Orphan is worst feeling. Zain ws watching her pics.
So sweet!!
Beautiful chappy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#176

I can feel every line frm Aliya's POV. Hum uss situation me to nhi rhe but phir b. It ws beautiful.
Kaise rahegi wo?? She is alone.
Nd that part jahan uske papa ka brain. I cant say.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Lol. Kya family banai Madhu. Perfect family to inhe kehna chahiye.
Finally zain smiled.
Hana is really a gud frnd. Aliya is vry lucky 2 ve her.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Yippee. Maine padhli puri story.
It ws beautiful. N fir se car ride.
"I ALWAYS THOUGH I M BRAVE... BUT TODAY I REALISED I M NOT" it ws very touching line.
N fracture ke bad b bike ride. She was really brave.
But abi to zain ki story b bachi hai na.
Update soon.