FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106

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arohi_

@arohi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#251

Congrts 4 ur new thread...firstly I would like to say dt u r an amazing writer...secondly each n every word u wrote touch my heart..thirdly Sry 4 commentng 4 too late...I hd read ur all chaptrs..forthly thnks 4 sndng me pm..I really missed u yr..hw was ur work..??

Nw to ur work...!!!!
Today chaptr was amazing n vry well written..as always u do...!!!!
Its gyd to read aliya's pov..it's heart touchng...n last part was incredible as " zain is a maths teacher" n dt smile he gave to aliya..!!
I hope get a chance to read zain's pov.."hw he cope up with d phase...hw he felt when aliya left him"...if it's possible..if Nt...it will be ok...!!!!!

N yr d shayari u wrote at d end of day chptr give a new life n touch to ur writing...!!!

Today's chapter shayari was really gud...sumwhere I left it similar with me..!!!

Waiting 4 ur d next update sim..!!!

Arohi

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Riya

@Riya5666

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Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Congratulations for ur new thread Sim!!!!

Now coming back to the chapter...

U completely nailed it!!!

The balance maintained between Rhea's guilt n Aaliya's hatred was so perfect!

As i have said, words are always less to describe ur updates!!!

U r just amazing!

And thanks for updating soon...

I wud really have gone mad if u hadn't!!!😃

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nashfa

@nashfa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#253

Sim, first of all congrats for the new thread

Coming back to chapter
You described aliyas harted & rheas guilt perfectly
Zain as maths teacher
Continue soon & I Miss end u

Lots of love

Riya

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Megha

@Amazeballs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#254

Wonderful update

Congrats for thread 2

Really glad ur back was missing the story

Zain maths teacher he has come back in full form hope aliya show mercy on him

Previous thread I was in tears at the end

Do continue soon

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manny136

@manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#255

Aww you are back. Congrats on the new thread. Now getting to the new update wow, more pov of aliya loved it. she is so hurt and angry as both rhea/aliya and the guilt as well but under all of that there is also the love that she is trying so desperately to hide. Its gonna take time coz aliya didnt get to heal and even though zain was great so far he was still deceiving rhea so she needs some time. Zain being the maths teacher loved it lol i was like dude who is this bro of some kid and bam zain comes for real no imagination like before n as a math teacher lol Would love to see how zain handled aliya leaving all those weeks ago coz he seemed so broken. Its gonna be a rollercoaster ride cant wait for the next update.

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Kiran Fatima

@zaya.fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#256

Finally the wait is over yaaayyy you have updated I'm so happy

congratulations for 2nd thread Sim🥳

About chapter what should I say it was l amazing

The way you have described the emotions and feelings from Aaliya's POV so so so heart touching I was literally feeling her pain in real sense and her repenting it have touched the deep cords of my heart👏

Looking forward for Zain And Aaliya's kitkit,

And the poetic lines and the song selection..❤️❤️❤️

You are just Amazing dear May God Bless you😊

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Shiri

@Laila_Shiri_Lee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#257

Omg yesss

This looks wicked

Can't wait for the next part

Continue soon and thanks so much for the pm

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LuvPreetikaRao

@LuvPreetikaRao

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Posted: 10 years ago

#258

Awesome update can't wait to read plzz update soon

It's role reversal Zain used to hate to Aaliyah at first and gave her troubles now it's Aaliyah who is giving him troubles and hates him to the core

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Kiran Fatima

@zaya.fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#259

Wohoo power packed attitude of Zain it was just wow👏

I'm very very much excited for next chapters

I loved the way Zain said: Meri line hai churao mat😆

Love love love Sim You are just awesome buddy❤️

Continue soon😳

And Congo for becoming Goldie🥳

Edited by zaya.fatima - 10 years ago

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sabla

@sabla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#260

this was amazing...Now I think I have to increase my vocabulary to praise you because every time I m about to type I end up forgetting everything I wanted to write and the reason behind it is your beautiful chapters that just leave me wondering whats gonna happen next ...And I'm loving this zain and his stubbornness to be with Aliya no matter what are the consequences...he just want to take his aliya back and on the other hand Aliya is hell bent on failing Zain's efforts wow this is getting damn interesting day by day

Edited by ank_23 - 10 years ago

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