Khaamoshiyaan- A Zaya FF (Chapter 6 on pg 21)Up on 23rd April!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I m updating chp 1 in some time guyss...

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hii Guyss!😊

So... I have come up with Chapter 1 of this FF...

There you go...😉

Chapter 1

Venue: London

Narrator's pov

"Zain! Yaara kahaan hai tu??? Aeh Rizwaan! Zain kidhar hai yaar?" Kartaar asked, panting.

"Kya Kartaar! Tu bhi kise dhund raha haii? ZAIN KO? Jahaan tujjhe ladkiyaan dikhengi wahaan humaare Zain saab milenge! Achha dekh... Itni saari ladkiyon ka jhund dikh raha hai na... He must b there only."

So, Rizwaan, Kartaar n Shawn went there, saw the scene, and sighed. This was the everyday schedule of Mr. Zain Abdullah. Yes yes, The "ZAIN USMAAN ABDULLAH" Most wanted bachelor of the institute. The Handsome Hunk. And he exactly knew when, where and how to use his beguiling looks to his advantage.

"Zain, chal yaar ab! Bas karr... Late ho raha hai... Inn ladkiyon ke chakkar me mai tujhe humaari aaj raat ki party miss karne nahi dunga," Shawn said, when Kartaar n Rizwaan just kept looking. So Mr. Zain Abdullah finally looked up to see his 3 friends standing there. How couldn't he see first u ask? Obviously, he was busy with the girls!!!

"Aaya Shawn! Okay girls, Gotta go. See y'all tmrw then. Same time! And you," he said, winking to Gauhar, who was continuously fluttering her lashes at him, "I"ll call you." Blushing, Gauhar looked up at him and gave him a seductive look.

"Huh!" All the three boys, standing with Zain, sighed. "Zain, bas ab chal." They dragged him.

"Aur haan Zain sunn bhai, Next week Zubair ki shaadi hai na... Ussi, Ayesha se... Wahaan bhi toh jaana hai..."

"...Aur ladkiyon ko check out karna hai!"

"ZAIN!"

Venue: Mumbai (Night time)

In Aaliya Ghulam Haider's Room.

(Aaliya is on the phone)

"Aalu, meri maa, ab so ja! We have to wake up early tomorrow morning. London ki flight hai naa. Ayesha Appi ke shaadi ki tayyari ke liye bhi toh jaana hai!" Aayat said.

"Haan haan Aayat! Yeh toh sach hai but appi ke shaadi ki excitement hi bhaut hai... Neend hi nahi aa rahi... Kya karun?"

"Kuchh nahi, Rehan kaisa hoga, sapne dekh uske and sochte sochte you will easily fall asleep!" Aayat giggled, when she could sense Aaliya blush on the phone.

"Aayat! Kya tu bhi! Chal bye. Mai bhi abhi so jaati hu."

"Okiii. Good night. And... SWEET DREAMS!" Aayat said, knowingly, "if u know what I mean!"

"Bbye!!!" Aaliya shouted, then took the pillow near her face, and went to sleep blushing.

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So thats it guyss...

First chapter thaa naa... So it was more of an introduction...

So, Did u like it?

Was it good, interesting, boring or bakwaas?

Be free to share ur views...

Just dnt throw eggs cuz i m veggie... Tomatoes n chappals are ok...

And haa, how will Zaya meet? Who is this Rehaan?

To know more, LIKE, COMMENT and BUDDY ME for pms!!!😉

Edited by Riya5666 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: zayahangover
Nice update

Itna jaldi padh bhi liya???

Cool...

Anyways, Thank you...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Riyaaa

Riya here
It was cool chap
Update soonsoon 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Nice start ...
Gauhar chudail bhi hai isme ;)
Waiting to read more !!
My name is Nazmin ... You can call me nazz :)
Continue soon riya !!
N thnxx for pm !!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: nashfa
Riyaaa

Riya here
It was cool chap
Update soonsoon 😳

Thank youu...

Next chapter i will be updating today or tomorrow only. Cuz i have finished studying and chp 2 is also half written...

Hope u like the rest...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Nazzz16
Nice start ...
Gauhar chudail bhi hai isme ;)
Waiting to read more !!
My name is Nazmin ... You can call me nazz :)
Continue soon riya !!
N thnxx for pm !!

Thank you soo much...

Well, Gauhar is just a side character... She is only in the first two chapters...

Then we have Zaya and someone someone!!!😉

And hello Nazz!!! This seems cool...

Hope u like the next chapters too!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Vry nyc strt Riyu.
Zain ws a big flirt.
Nyc chappy.
Continue soon.
Atb fr exam. Srry last xm me wish kar ri. :)
Aanya

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Riya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Sobtian...
Vry nyc strt Riyu. Thank you sooo much Ananya!😊
Zain ws a big flirt. Umm... Yes, he WAS. (I just hope i m not giving much of the story😛)
Nyc chappy. Thank you once again!!!
Continue soon. Sure, i will...
Atb fr exam. Srry last xm me wisk kar ri. Lol.:) Thank you sooo much! Last exam hai toh kya hua... Wishes are wishes naa... Love u...
Aanya