ZaYa FF:A Darker Shade Of Black (CH:8-PG:12) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sunidhi... Great begining... completely different...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2:

How can people call this world beautiful when it has been such a pathetic experience for a girl who had many dreams to conquer? Is this how a girl should survive? Not living her dreams and just doing what is told her or pushed her into that.

Aaliya ghulam haider a girl who has past which no one would ever like to hear. She has come to Mumbai just to study and live for the sake of god. She is in the same college as Barkat , it is just for her fees for which she has to fetch some work and take the help of some NGO.

Aaliya's first day was over at her new college no one took the initiative to even ask her name,Zain was there to take her sister home back while he saw a group of buys circling aaliyal."Looks like there's a new girl in the town" said one boy, Zain took that as a warning. Suddenly one boy took Aaliya's hand and tried to pull her closer but she bit his hand and run away just to collapse with a muscular body, who was none other than Zain!His hand on her waist and one on her back telling her that she is secure in his embrace. When her eyes met his, she had water in her eyes and she was pleading him to save her from the others while she was also scared from so she quickly took a back. Whiile the boys came "Hey! You! Don't come in our way or you know..."said one boy trying to snatch aaliya but Zain took aaliya behind his back."You are safe" said Zain assuring Aaliya with a smile. One boy lifted his hand to punch Zain but he took his hand and twisted it hard behind his back and punched him had in his stomach. All the boys were scared now because of the consequences which took a minute before."If you did this again I'll smash so hard that you will never forget" said Zain warning all of them to stay away from Aaliya.

"Hi! I am Zain" said Zain lifting his hand for a handshake but Aaliya was hell scared that she ran waway from there."Bhaiyauuu!"exclaimed barkat from behind."Come barkat we are late!" said Zain.When they both were in the car Zain started asking question about that girl from Barkat "Is there a new entrant in your college?""Umm yeah, but how do you know?" asked barkat"I met her but hse didn't even speak a word!Why is she so scared?""I don't know bhaiyuu but I think she needs a friend and I would definitely like to be her friend" said barkat with a smile"You should be and tell me about her" said Zain"Ohh ohho bhaiiyuu kya hua?" asked barkat teasing him "Gale mein hichkich viks ki goli khao hichkich dur bhagao" he shot back at her "Mai to sirf mazaak kar rahi thi bhaiyu!" replied barkat with a pout "Main bhi mazaak kar raha tha doll!" said Zain and they both burst into fits of laughter.

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This one is bigger than last time! Itne comments aur likes mein bas itnaech milega!

Plz like and comment i really appreciate all your feedbacks

Regards,

-Suni(ZaYanatic/HarshIkian)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Zain protected Aaliya , so sweet , i am really curious to Know What happen to her , continue soon it was superb !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think I didn't comment on last one also sorry..
Both chapters were awesome sunidhi..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow this is giving some filmy feeling pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
nice update zaya meet at college was like heroic one loved it so aliya is a mystery intersting do continue soon plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ZAIN SAVED AALIYA!! AWW!! SOO SWEET! DO UPDATE SOON... CURIOUS ABOUT THE NEXT PART... :):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...suni AWESOME start!
Zain..interestedin Aliya from start! cool
pls update nxt chap as soon as possible!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sunidhi...
Wonderful Update... Zain saved Aliya...
Barkat is sweet... she wants to make friendship with Aliya
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Zain saving Aliya...
Loved it suni...
Would love to read more...
Plz continue

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