ZAYA SS : THE 12 MONTHS ( Chap 4 page 16)

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya
Amazing update...
u write it so beautifully...
loved dis update...
hope aaliya will realize her feelings for zain..
Cont soon...

Thanks Deepika , let's see if she realizes her feelings or not ! 😉

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haania

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Wow saleha...

chupi rustum...

What an uodate!!! Wow

and the way u described her emotions was fantastic.

the office scene was fab.and zain's way of manaofying her was alovely...lol

continue soon.

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: butterfly20
Wow saleha...[DIV]chupi rustum...[/DIV][DIV]What an uodate!!! Wow[/DIV][DIV]and the way u described her emotions was fantastic.[/DIV][DIV]the office scene was fab.and zain's way of manaofying her was alovely...lol[/DIV][DIV]continue soon.[/DIV]

Thank you my torture queen !

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Kiran Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

The crackling fire of the candle , an intense atmosphere inviting them , to lose themselves in each other , allowing to them to drown into the oasis of love .He was scrutinizing every contour of her face , trying to imprint her face forever into that shaped organ ,which beats harder , sometimes taking her name , when being close to her yet so far ... Her eyes which used to enlighten him , were looking down, hiding from his , a long hide and seek which seemed never ending ." Why?" She could not muster courage to look at him , to look into his eyes and spoke those cherished words , that her heart used to scream when the blueish sky would be pouring his heart out in form of droplets called rain . Those words ,died a new death everyday , when she was with him and could heard his unspoken words through his heartbeats ."Speak up , Aaliya ! "Let me go !"" I'm not holding you

Wonderful job Saleha👏

The way you write the emotions intensity of inner feelings it is just amazing👍🏼

Plz continue soon

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
The crackling fire of the candle , an intense atmosphere inviting them , to lose themselves in each other , allowing to them to drown into the oasis of love .He was scrutinizing every contour of her face , trying to imprint her face forever into that shaped organ ,which beats harder , sometimes taking her name , when being close to her yet so far ... Her eyes which used to enlighten him , were looking down, hiding from his , a long hide and seek which seemed never ending ." Why?" She could not muster courage to look at him , to look into his eyes and spoke those cherished words , that her heart used to scream when the blueish sky would be pouring his heart out in form of droplets called rain . Those words ,died a new death everyday , when she was with him and could heard his unspoken words through his heartbeats ."Speak up , Aaliya ! "Let me go !"" I'm not holding you
Wonderful job Saleha👏
The way you write the emotions intensity of inner feelings it is just amazing👍🏼
Plz continue soon