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haania

@butterfly20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

It was really amazing...

u expressed zain's emotions and his feeling so well...

u wrote it beautifully...

continue soon.

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Awesome chapter
loved it..
Continue soon sim

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Riya

@Riya5666

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Awesome update...

Zain's expressions...

That part was BEAUTIFULLY penned down...

Loved each and every part of this chapter...

Amazing!!!

Pls continue soon...

And thanks for the pm...

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katmaan

@katmaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Beautiful mam I am loving it...pls update soon

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Kiran Fatima

@zaya.fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

It was a n Awesome update

Loved the way you described zain;s feelings for Aaliya👏

Aaliya thought him as driver aww poor zain

but he was happy to be her driver that was too cute😳

continue soon & thanks for pm😊

Edited by zaya.fatima - 10 years ago

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zayalove

@zayalove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Really amazing update ..
Loved zain's monologue ..
Haan ya naa part was great ..
Very good chptr
Update soon
Thnks for da pm
Lots of love
Alina

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Zainedil

@Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood
Thank you darling for updating this..
1) Loved the way u expresssed Zain's apprehensions..his anticipation of meeting Aaliya..
2) How he was lost in Rhea..his Aaliya..the pain in his heart..and I LOVED THE DIALOGUES..and .. ZAIN'S MONOLOGUE..
Overall,it was an awesome update.. a beautiful kaleidoscopic vision of all the emotions tugging at the reader's heart.
Love ya :*
-Ann

Awww Ann finally I get the comments 😃

Thank you so much for those precious words

Will update soon and thanks for the promotion 😳

Sim

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Aarohi2009

@Aarohi2009

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Superb chapter
Waiting for next chapter
Continue soon
Plsss 🤗

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Zainedil

@Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya
Great chp 👏
Loved it !
Continue soon 😃

Thank you so much 😊

Sim

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Zainedil

@Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
Superb sim , seriously you are superb girl , the emotions , the meeting , the fact that she treats him as a stranger , my poor zain , shave to karadeti ,overall amazing and continue soon !

thank you so much 😊

Dont worry Shave bhi karlega ...abhi toh Laila mil hai 😉

Sim