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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part :)
Zaya confession was nyc ...!!
Bohot chota tha...
Pls give long updates ...
Continue fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chapter
Finally confession hogaya
Priya next time long wala update pls
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update...😳
continue asap 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update ...👏
N who says u both are less of writers, look at the beauty of this story n read our comments
Update Karo waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys..
After a long time I am updating this story haina?
Happy new year kehna tha tabhi update kiya.. gift toh Dena hai na? 😆
...,...
CHAPTER 5
They were sitting on the beach in each other embrace watching the waves hitting the shore and going back and then restarting the new cycle..
Extreme silence was there when zain broke it..
Zain: waise aliya who said that me and San am are in..
He paused as he didn't wanted to complete the sentence..
Aliya:sanam told me..
She tells what happened in evening...
#flashback#
Sanam and aliya were sitting in the room after their dance fully tired and exhausted but aliya had only little of that as she was happy..
Happy that zain praised her dance..
Sanam: aliya tum tired nahi ho ?Aur aur apne aap main haas rahi ho kya hua?
Aliya: sanam zain praised my performance
Sanam: kya??
She was jealous that zain didn't praised hers
Aliya: haan and he even kissed my hand
She was lost in her dream world
Sanam: toh kya hua he kissed me on my lips..
Hearing it aliya'sworld came crashing down in her and she wished earth to swallow her..
Aliya: tumhe ki...kis..kisss?
She was shocked to the wits and saying a word was difficult for her..
Sanam: haan..many times..u don't know we both love each other..
Sanam smirked internally after breaking heart of he dear friend
Aliya: naaa
Her voice seemed choked after hearing this truth..
Zain loves sanam this fact broke her heart into millions and trillions of tiny pieces that cannot be counted by any machine used..
Tears pulled around her already moist eyes and she gulped the pile in her throat.aliya: I have to go..my dad is leaving for US ..bye
And saying this aliya left while sanam smiled wickedly..
All the way aliya cried and decided to go to USA along with her but due to visa problem she could not..
#flashback ends#
Zain was full angry hearing this while aliya broke up again..
Zain: aliya don't cry...please for me..
aliya stopped crying..
Aliya: zain teach her a lesson that she Weill remember till death..
The soft hearted aliya made her heart strong when she said this..
Zain: and I have plan
He whispered the plan in her ears and both hi-5 each other..
Zain: toh plan shuru
Aliya: haan shuru
He took out his phone from his pocket and called sanam
zain: hello sanam
sanam: hello haan zain tum bolo
zain: sanam beach pe aajao..let's drink some bear
sanam: okey zain coming
zain and aliya shared a laugh because sanam was soon going to fall in the pit that they dig for her
zain mixed some rum in her bear
sanam came and hugged zain
zain's expressions were like he is going to puke
aliya laughed seeing him from far away distance
zain broke the hug
zain: bear
he passed the can
sanam: zain yeh can to open hai
zain: haan maine open kiya hai takki tumhari nazook nazook ungli ko pain na sehna pade
again he made a disgusting face
sanam: okey thank u so much
she drank the bear in one go while aliya and zain's eyes were fixed on her only
sanam now was full talli
sanam: zainnn...tum bahut sweeet ho
she said pulling his cheeks
zain moved her hand away and rubbed his face with hankie
zain slapped her
sanam: zainnn u slapped me
she made a crying like face
zain: nahi sanam who wahan ek mosquito betha tha
and again he slaps her
sanam: okey phir aur maro
like this he slaps her till her cheeks are red and swollen
after she falls asleep there aliya comes and hi5 zain
zain: first time ever i slapped a girl
aliya: zain she deserves it.. she tried to separate us two
zain: okey my little princess
aliya too slaps her
the sensation of slap was equal to a bite given by mosquito
sanam: (in her sleep)
zain aur maro mosquito yeh raha
aliya: ohhh kuch nahi mein mar deti hun
and she slaps again hard making sanam to sleep quietly
leaving sanam there both zain and aliya went from there
...
tadaaa khatam hua mera torture..
so how was it guys???
next chapter by tanya..
priya
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mijhe ak47 do koi sanam ko mar na hai mujhe
Bechari meri aaliya
Zain aur Aaliya ne mast plan banaya
Mai bhi voh beach mai jaake sanam ko thapad mar ke aathi hun
Awesome update continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Mijhe ak47 do koi sanam ko mar na hai mujhe

Bechari meri aaliya
Zain aur Aaliya ne mast plan banaya
Mai bhi voh beach mai jaake sanam ko thapad mar ke aathi hun
Awesome update continue soon

okey abhi book karti hun..
Jao abhi bhi asleep hogi..
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Funny update ,sanam Bichari she got so many slaps continue soon Kya plan tha !
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Funny update ,sanam Bichari she got so many slaps continue soon Kya plan tha !

thanks saleha..
ab tanya ke rang dekhna
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

okey abhi book karti hun..
Jao abhi bhi asleep hogi..
Thanks

konsa beach hai
Mai apne kuch bhai logo ko bulakkar athi hun
you're welcome

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