ss:the secret love (collab)*chapter 9 updated(14/01)*

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oriyu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: Brainbox1999
PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!! 😊

we will

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nafisa

@clover1231

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Priya nd tanya story concept everything is nice .

Waiting to see aliya and zain reactions aur ghulam bhai 1 sal ke liye chalengai 😆

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: clover1231
Priya nd tanya story concept everything is nice .
Waiting to see aliya and zain reactions aur ghulam bhai 1 sal ke liye chalengai 😆

thanks nafisa..
aage aage dekho hota hai kya😆

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Amandeep

@aman1605

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Hey Priya and Tanu🤗🤗

Read all the three chapters together😳

I'm loving this story❤️

U both r doing a great job😉

Plz continue asap😳

Tnx 4 pm😃

Love Aman❤️

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: aman1605
Hey Priya and Tanu🤗🤗
Read all the three chapters together😳
I'm loving this story❤️
U both r doing a great job😉
Plz continue asap😳
Tnx 4 pm😃
Love Aman❤️

oh thank u so much aman..
that meant a lot to us..
glad u liked it..
we will definitely continue it soon

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zaya.harshika

@zaya.harshika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Wow... itni awesome story main ne abhi tak nahi padhi thi.. how did i miss it? ?

Seriously guys... This story is FANTASTIC!

Really loved it

N priya last part itnaaa...mini se bhi mini tha!

Tanu pls JALDI update karo... Please!

UPDATE FAST!!

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: zaya.harshika
Wow... itni awesome story main ne abhi tak nahi padhi thi.. how did i miss it? ?
Seriously guys... This story is FANTASTIC!
Really loved it
N priya last part itnaaa...mini se bhi mini tha!
Tanu pls JALDI update karo... Please!

UPDATE FAST!!

that u can only tell..
Thanks..
Tanu ka inbox spam karo 😆 😆

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zaya.harshika

@zaya.harshika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya
that u can only tell..
Thanks..
Tanu ka inbox spam karo 😆 😆

aray haan.. uss waqt mere wifi ko BI ke khatam honay ka dukh laga tha!😭

Welcome. ..

Abhi karti hoon😛😆

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: zaya.harshika
aray haan.. uss waqt mere wifi ko BI ke khatam honay ka dukh laga tha!😭
Welcome. ..
Abhi karti hoon😛😆

jaldi karo

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Nandini

@cupcaked

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

The Beach

Zain's POV

I walked aimlessly into the beach. Suddenly I felt someone sobbing. I looked ahead of me to see a figure sitting. Her back facing me. Aaaliya?

I walked up to her and kept a hand on her shoulder. "Aaliya? Are you-" I couldn't complete my sentence as I felt her hug me tightly. I stroke her hair silently. She weeped into my chest and soon I could feel my shirt going wet. I tried to pull her away from me and ask her if she is alright but she didn't budge. She clinged onto me as if her life depended upon me.

"Please Zain. Aaj- Aaj mujhe apne aap se dur mat kro. Please Zain." Aaliya sobbed into me again. I hugged her tightly this time. "I love you Zain!"

My tears made way to my eyes. I smiled.

"I love you too Aaliya." I said as I hugged her tightly. I felt her smile as she snuggled more closer to me.

10 Minutes Later

We sat down on the cold sand. I took Aaliya into my arms. She rested her head on my chest. We stared at the sea brushing its waves. I smiled. I looked down at my angel as she just snuggled more into me.

"Tumhe ek baat btau Zain?" She looked into my eyes.

"Do btao." I smiled. She settled her head on my lap. I smiled again.

"Tumhe pta hai tum aur Sanam- Umm, tum dono-"

"Hum dono kuch nahi hai." I said kissing her forehead. Ab jo hai. Sirf hum dono!"

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Short. Haina?

Toh next update Priya ki.

Hope you all liked it.

Confession done!

Ab bas Sanam ji ki band bajani hai Priya. :)

-Tani.