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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: Ilovezaya
Raat ko
Why not now ? 😕
You know the time difference 😭 😭 😭
I won't be able to read it at night 🥱

Right now my mom is scolding me for continuesly using mobile..

Ab agar main laptop ly kar baith gai to pakka maar pary gi..😆

so will update at night..

ok bye.

m going.

Lots of love.

hania...

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bloodsheds

@bloodsheds

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: butterfly20

Right now my mom is scolding me for continuesly using mobile..
Ab agar main laptop ly kar baith gai to pakka maar pary gi..😆
so will update at night..
ok bye.
m going.
Lots of love.
hania...

Maar paregi 🤢
To thodi khalo 😆 😆 😆

Achaa raat ko update kardena or mujhe pm kardena 😆
Warna I'll kill u 😡

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Sunidhi

@-Mera-Hi-Jalwa-

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#593

Hania!

This is just amazing!

You now i am a writer myself (Bad one kyuki koi comment hi nahi karta)

and i know it is very difficult to write such long update.

I appreciate your work from the bottom of my heart.

And i always read all your works. You're like a 'AWESOME WRITER'

for me.Update soon or u know we all will spam you from our whole heart :P

P.s:I also wanna know how do you write such long updates?

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#594

Chapter 23

Hania yeh kya hai😆 bilal aur shazia ki khuli Romance😆

Lol Super cute dear... just loved it!!

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zayalove

@zayalove

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: butterfly20

Ok my sister..
main pak jany sy pehly teri wish puri kar dun gi..
hayeee tu itna expect na kar.agar main teri expectations py puri na utri to...😲
but phir bhi i 'll try to make u happy..
lots of love to u too.❤️

mujhe tere upar pura bharosa hai ..
InshaAllah tu dhamaal macha de gi ...

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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: -Mera-Hi-Jalwa-
Hania!
This is just amazing! thanks sunidhi.
You now i am a writer myself (Bad one kyuki koi comment hi nahi karta)
and i know it is very difficult to write such long update.
I appreciate your work from the bottom of my heart.
And i always read all your works. You're like a 'AWESOME WRITER'
for me. haiii ALLAH kabhi socha nhn tha k koi itni tareef kary ga..khushi k ansoo..😭😭😭
any ways ...thanks dear..thanks you so much for appreciating and adoring my work..
your love and support meant to me alot..😃
Update soon or u know we all will spam you from our whole heart :P..awww i love all my spamming quenns...u will become one too..😆
P.s:I also wanna know how do you write such long updates?..i...i...(stammered)..actually i made rough idea on my notebook about my every story..so i write and write and keep writing until that topic is finished..😃..sometime spamming work like right now at 1:00 am i m writing new chapter for vini else she will kill me...😕

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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: madhufx9...
Chapter 23
Hania yeh kya hai😆 bilal aur shazia ki khuli Romance😆
Lol Super cute dear... just loved it!!

thanks madhu..
ya i love shalal...😆😆😆😆😆and want to see their romance..actually i like namrata and neel more than bilal and shazia...😃

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haania

@butterfly20

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#598

appology:first of all sorry every one for not replying your comments.plz don't be angry on me as i replied just few.i love u all and your comments and views means alot to me.as u know i m on dead line so i just strat upadting my chapters when i got time...right now at 1:00 am my eyes are heavy due to sleep and mascara...😆(m a girl u know😉)..and i m still started writing for all my lovely friends ok no bakbak...here's the new chapter...enjoy.

chapter 28

today was zain and aliya's valima...zain went to parlour to pick up aliya..😆.he call aliya.
zain:aliya tm ready ho gai ho to bahar a jao.main bahar khara hun.
aliya:han bas...tayyar hun.aa rahi hun.
zain:ok jaldi ao.main right side wali parking m hun.
aliya:main itna door chal kar nhn a sakti,...mera dress bht heavy hai.
zain:ok baba main gate k samny aa raha hun.

as aliya stepped out she saw zain..zain was looking away looking .when she came and sit in the car.she was having veil on her head.
zain:ye ghungant q nikal k rakha h.(he was irritated as he can't see her)
aliya:wesy hi...sari dunia ky lye nhn tayyar hui hun main.k jo chahy mjhy dekhta phiry,
zain:acha to kiss k lye tayyar hui ho???
aliya:dulhan kis k lye tayyar hoti hai???apny shohar k lye or kis k lye???...(she stopped as she realised what she said)
zain smirked and start the car and drove to barkat villa...
as he stopped the car ayat and barkat came running...
ayat:appi a gai..
barkat:bhabhi aa gain bhabhi aa gain...
they both help her getting out and took her to their room.as barkat's room was on ground floor.zain frown as he still did not saw her..
he get out of the car..few guests are arrived.bilal shazia too joined after a minute..zain got busy with guests but his eyes was searching for his wife.
zain somehow excuses himself and went towards barkat's room.room was locked..he heard voices.
barkat:wow...bhabhiii ap ny to aj ashwariya roy ka bhi record tor dia kia lag rai hain aap...i wish i wish k main larka hoti to aap ko abhi kiss kar leti.
aliya giggle:barkat...(she too chucle)
ayat:hey ziada flirt na kar meri appi k sath in par to kisi or ka haq hai...(they both tease her and start laughing)
aliya:mmm mera clutch??
barkat:mery pas hai...acha bhabhi kiss sy yad aya k..ap donon ka first kiss kab hua.
zain was listing their conversation.
aliya:barkat tm phir shuru ho gai???mera clutch wapis karo mom kab sy bulari hain..
barkat:aahan...main ap ko tab tak nhn jany dun gi jab tak aap jawab nhn den gi.
aliya:ALLAH ny 2 pair dye hain mjhy main khud ja sakti hun.
barkat:hawww log kia kahen gy k dulhan ko any ki itni jaldi thi..khud hi aa gai...
ayat:han appi ham donon aap k sath nhn jaen gy..kitna awkward lagy ga na barkat..(they both high 5 each other)
that was now enough for zain he knock on the door...
zain:barkat!!!!
barkat:bhayyu...ayat bhayyu hain bahar...(she looked at aliya then at ayat and whisper somthing in ayat's ear.)
barkat open the door and zain come inside.ayat immediately run outside and lock the door )
zain:ayat!!! darwaza kholo.
he turn back and there she was standing tense confused and angry..bcuz of those monkeys who are irritating her for listning their love story.
zain miss the beat as he saw her after long struggle..she was wearing this.

she was looking so beautiful just like fairy comes from sky.zain keep staring at her..
barkat:bhayyu m still here..aap to lagta hai bhabhi ko apni nazron sy kha jayn gy.
zain break his gaze and embarssed:bakbak kia mazaaq hai yeh.darwaza q lock kia hai ayat ny.
barkat:awww aap ko afsos ho ra hai na that i m kabab main haddi..koi bat ni main aankhen band kar lungi.
aliya:barkat...(she glare at her)
barkat went towards her:to ab mery sawal ka jawab den tab hi aap donon ko exit visa issue hoga,
aliya:what???no...main..aesy kaisy.
barkat:oh come on bhabhi bataen na.
aliya sit on stool:abhi thori dair main mom aa jaen gi or...
barkat cut her off:or aap ko or bhayyu ko aik sath lock room main dekh len gi...how romantic.
aliya was shocked at her master planning zain tried to knock on door but aliya stop him
aliya:ruko...sahi keh rahi hai.mom aa gain to??9she said hastily
zain:to kia hua. yeh bhi to hmary sath hai..
barkat said immediately:main bed k neechy aik dam perfectly fit aa jati hun..(she fold her arms on her chest)
aliya:ok fine...tm apny bhayu ko bahar jany do.tm jo kaho gi main bataun gi.
zain look at her confused:kia keh rahi thi ye...he knew but he was still asking..
aliya:k..k.kuch nhn.t..tm jao na warna mom naraz ho jaen gi.main ati hun na..
zain turn back barkat asked ayat to unlock.she unlocked and he went out.
barkat:ok...so first kiss.
IN BATHROOM...
aliya barkat and ayat turn back to see zain standing at door smirking at aliya...aliya turn as red as tomato even two besharams are now feeling shy..
ayat and barkat look at each other:b..bath room???(their eyes become double of their size)
zain came forwrd and stand closer to ayat and barkat.he keep his one hand on ayat's sholder and other one on barkat's sholder..
zain whisper:itna kafi hai ya sab bataon??k ham donon ny bathroom m kia kya...
he did'nt finish his sentence when they both run out scaring that zain will not narrate them about their nights...
aliya's eyes wide and she was shocked..he come towards her smiling.
zain:aesy bhagaty hain blackmailers ko...
aliya:huh???
zain:tm bhi na aliya bht sweet ho...aesy ko tesa hi milna chahye na???ab chalo.
he took her hand and led to hall.
aliya and zain was looking the best couple on earth..both holding hands.barkat and ayat's exitement about their love story vanished as zain was ready to tell them all...they both look at zain.zain smile at them and hold aliya's waist...they both turn to other side immediately and zain chuckled.
aliya look at him angrily:q pareshan kar rahy ho in donon ko???
zain smile;q k wo tmhn pareshan kar rahi thn..
they were busy talking while sanam and rehman chacha enter.sanam frown looking at zain and aliya.zain's expressions too change as he watched sanam.
all the time zain was watching sanam to find an opurtunity to talk to her and finally when she went upstairs for her touch up..zain leave aliya's hand and excuses himself.
aliya:kahan ja rahy ho???
zain smile:m coming..kuch zaroori kam hai.
and he too followed her.
as she was about to come out from the room zain grab her hand and push her in the room and locked the door...he did'nt knew that 4 pair of eyes watching him doing this...

zain jerked her inside..
zain was full angry he want to shout but he can't as someone might hear them
zain:why did u do that..???
sanam:what???(she said carelessly)
zain:tm achi tarah janti ho k main kia keh raha hun???tm ny aliya ko jo gift dia us main kia tha???
sanam smirk:oooh aliya???the girl u choose over me..??
zain:i did'nt choose her..i love her and i marry her.
sanam laugh:really tum us sy mily or tmhn us sy piar ho gaya right???
zain:fuzool baton ka waqt nhn h tm janti ho hamen kitna kuch sehna para??kitni bezzati hui hmari.
sanam:ooh bezzati???wohi na jo tm ny puri university k samny meri ki thi...
zain:main n tmhari bezzati nhn ki.
sanam:really???u refused me saying u did'nt love me...and u choose her..that behn g???seriously...kia hai us main jo mujh main nhn hai???kia dekha tm ny us main??(she was holding his collar)
he jerked her hand:stay awy from me and aliya...i don't love u and will never.main n tmhara naam nhn dia police ko q k mjhy rehman chaha ka khayal hai...warna ham sy bhi battar sulook hotta tmhary sath...or han tm ny kaha k aliya main kia hai???...us k pas saaf dil hai jo tmhary pas nhn hai.usy sari dunia ki parwah hai jo tmhn nhn h.usy pyar hasil karna aata hai cheena nhn...
sanam:right???agar mjhy mera pyar nhn mila to tmhn bhi nhn mily ga..zain abdullah..
with that she tear her sleeves...messes her kajal and lipstick.
zain look at her shocked..
zain:wh...what are u doing???
sanam:tmhary pyar ka THE END..
she open the door and she look surayya and shabana standing there shocked she went and hugged surayya...and start crying...zain came out hurridly and shocked to see three of them.
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phew!!!!!khatam ho gaya...now what will happen next..how will all react???will reveal soon till then..share your views..
lots of love
-hania.😊

Edited by butterfly20 - 10 years ago

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zaya.harshika

@zaya.harshika

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#599

Res!

Unres...

OMG!!!! Hania...superb update!

Fantastic!

Black mailers ko bhagane ka way..awesome! 😆

Sanam...I hate her to the core!😡

N what the...aisi ending deta hai kiya..

Pls batao na...what will happen next!

But S & S ne to inki baat bhi suni..iska matlab iss chichori aurat ka game FINISH..M I RI8????

Update next part ASAP!

Edited by zaya.harshika - 10 years ago

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#600

You should be proud of me this the 3rx Time (i think ) i am first jokes apart that sanam is she mad or What ?the monkeys they made me l'aigu continue soon !