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Posted: 11 years ago

Teri meri love story
Chapter 23

Okay I'm back with today's dose of torture, today I'm feeling bad for u all😆
I donno what I wrote, okay no chatter, read it, ignore Typo's like always...
I'm running...


Aliya didn't mean what ever she said, she know Zain very well , she knew Zain didn't search for better partner, but she accused him bcz she felt it was needed to make things like before...she called Sanam many times but she didn't lift her call...

Zain Said Rehan and Barkat everything... they were very happy that finally Zain realised his feelings for Aliya...they left to Mumbai... Zain didn't meet Aliya for 2 days...Aliya was taking rest at home...


Aliya was getting Ready to hospital for check up... Zain entered into her room, Aliya was silent... he smirked at her winking his eye, Aliya was surprisingly shocked with his boldness, for the first time she saw him like that, she blinked her eyes with open mouth... Zain jumped on to her bed and sat beside Aliya leaning back towards head rest.. Aliya became furious... " Zain get down, it's my bed" , Zain gave her a sarcastic smile... he leaned towards her and placed his head on her shoulder... " why janeman? , I'm ur husband and u r my minnie wife" he whispered in husky tone, Aliya shivered a bit and moved away.. " What happened minnie?" Zain asked her tugging a strand of her hair behind Her ear.. " Zain get down of my bed.." , " Aww this so bad janeman, I never asked u too get down from my bed, when u stayed in our Room ", " Zain stop calling Janeman..." just then shabhana entered into room with a glass of Orange juice... Aliya moved away looking at shabhana...


Zain greeted shabhana..." Hello Aunty , is everything done?" Zain and shabhana were exchanging glances making a silent conversation.. Aliya looked at them with suspicious eyes... " Mom where is dad?, it's getting late,Doctor might leave" Shabhana said that Gulam left to office for an urgent meeting... Aliya decided to go next day...


" But, Aliya I called Zain to take u hospital...and that is y he is here.." Shabhana said hiding her smile... Aliya looked at Zain, he was smiling to himself.. " Hospital? With you? I'm telling u Zain u cannot handle, I ll go with my dad tomorrow ", Zain raised an eyebrow and gave a small smirk.. he got down from bed and lifted her in his Arms...


" Zain what are u doing, get me down right now..", " how can I let ur leg hurt more...janeman", " Zain I still have one leg, I can manage, leave me...". Shabana left from there catching her head... " mom... mom.. ask him to drop me down..." Aliya shouted, shabhana didn't heed to pay attention... Aliya was shouting like a 10 years kid.. continuously...


" Aliya Stop shouting..." Aliya didn't stop... zain stopped walking and looked at her in irritation ... , " Now get me down, I know u ll listen to me, that's y I shouted.." Aliya grinned at Zain.. " Okay let me clear u, this the last time, if u try to argue or shout at me I have my ways to stop u..", " what can u do, u ll put cotton in ur ear's? Or u ll tape my mouth? " Zain smiled... " Oh my minnie... u r still thinking like a kid , Remember I'm ur husband...", " So? Aww u ll hurt me..?" Zain laughed at her innocence... " No, as u said I ll tape u, I ll tape my lips with yours, untill u leave the argument.. " Zain winked at her with a mischevious grin... Aliya's eyes grew double their size with his Bold answer... she gulped down getting scared...and kept quite... she was silent through out the way to hospital...


Doctor examined her leg and dressed it again...he prescribed new medicine.. doctor took out an needle to inject medicine... Zain was little scared, he turned back holding Aliya with one hand...he felt prickling sensation on his bicep, he turned to face them.. " Doctor, why did u inject me?" Zain asked furiously..looking at his bicep... zain was shocked seeing it, it was not due to injection... Aliya was piercing Zain's bicep with her nails out of scare.. " I said u, u cannot handle me, u didn't listen to me, I'm scared of injection..." Aliya stammered innocently... Zain shook his head, " thank god, that was a small dose" Zain took a ball of cotton and wiped mark of blood... Doctor asked them to come again after 3 days...


Aliya was silent again, not spilling a single word... Zain was flirting with her through their drive but she kept quite.. Zain stopped car infront of an appartment...
" Zain where did u bring me" Aliya asked as slowly as possible... Zain didn't answer.. got down from car and carried Aliya into building... Aliya was silent as she was scared... Zain was happy bcz his warning worked on her...


Zain stopped infront of a flat.." whose Flat is this Zain...?", Zain asked Aliya to take out Keys from his pocket and open the door, Aliya tried to speak... Zain looked at her intently... she reluctantly pulled out keys and opened door... They entered into flat, it was well furnished... looking new.. " Zain... I'm not shouting, I'm not arguing..., I'm just asking whose Flat is this?" Aliya asked meekly with fear... Zain opened door of a room... he laid her down on the bed and leaned into her, he rubbed Smoothly tip of his nose with her's and whispered slowly in her ear..
" It's our Flat Janeman..."


Okay today I'm ready for broken sandals too, I know it's not my cup... but I wrote it to bring progress in story... I hope it was not boring...I'm not good at writing guttery stuff...excuse me😛, comment pls... hit like button if any of u liked it!!!
Edited by madhufx9... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally I am first
It had been ages since i have commented first finally got that opportunity
Madz are u gone mad u call this bad??? It was amazing
A - W - E - S - O - M -E
Aww I loved Zain in this chapter
Finally d long awaited BZ
He picking her n carrying her to d hospital was soo cute and that tape part was ☺️
Thinking if about it makes me go 🤪
Yeh abhi apartment mai kya karne wale hai ??
Continue soon
Edited by anaghazaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aagay read it on ur own risk🤣
Chutki😲, u too hitted like button? Chalo read it😆 I'm scared
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

it was superb superb superbbb !!!👏 zain confessed ...i too felt bad for sanam...brilliantly written...excellent job👍🏼...loved it sooo much...❤️

Thank u my pink baby😳
Aww u r dancing😆 lol
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iman_harshika

Amazing update dear!!!

Jst loved it completely!!
Atlast zain confessed, now its aliya's turn!!

Good job dear!! 😊👏

Thank u dear😳
Thank u so much
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya-firdose

Fabulous Fantastic

Outstanding Marvelous Brilliant amazing superb
Super
Zain finally realised his true love
Looking forward to read more
Hatts off dear
Bang on
Good going yaar Momma rocked by the superb mind blowing update

Thank u beti😆
Love u loads for lovely lovely comment😳
Chudail hug🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower

OMG ! How could I miss all these chap
When I received your PM I hurriedly checked all the chaps from thread 1
I had missed five chaps,but it is ok
Read all the missed chaps in one go
Pasta Queen's new pasta recipe incident in chap 18 was hilarious
Zarina's tadka was superb
All the last updates were fabulous, heart-touching and little humorous too
I was kind of angry at Zain whenever he thanked Aliya couldn't see the hurt in her eyes but what can I expect from phattu Zain
In a scene when Aliya saw Zain and didn't went towards him was really but still wants their kids to meet him was fantastic
Anyways This chap 22 update is S.P.E.C.T.A.C.U.L.A.R and S.P.L.E.N.D.I.D
Finally Zain has realised his love for Aliya and this time in his consciousness all thanks to Sanam,she is okay to me now
~My favourite scene~
Passage no.11
Zain tried to console her...he's asked her to take rest... Aliya tried to fold her legs unaware of fracture...she winced in Pain... " , "Aliya, u got third leg, so careful dear.." Zain said sarcastically trying to lift her mood... " what do u mean zain" Aliya asked in confusion..." , " U have a fracture dear, u ll have to walk with support of third leg " Zain winked at her... Aliya who was not in a mood fight just gave a faint smile...
~My favourite dialogue ~
" I'm the one to be blamed, I'm sorry I cannot love u... I love only Aliya, I dnt want to mess up things further..".
I thought about all the ways in which Zain would confess his love to Aliya but this one is just perfect
Felt little bad for Sanam but she has to understand that ZaYa r made for each other
Continue soon this lovely ff
I missed u and this ff so much
Thanks for the PM
_ZFA

U read 5 chapters In one go😲 love u for this😳
Thank u so much for lovely lovely comment, I missed ur comments and u
Lovely ff? Aww thank u so much...
My pleasure dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

are i am again sorry for the late reply...
i am very much lazy...
comming to this it was awesome...
loved ti dearu...
finally zain confessed but aliya is also right...
sanam nikal gayi phir aagayi...
okey continue soon no more bakbak...
koi aur update kiya hai toh pls tell me

Aww it's okay darlinggg😛
Thank u so much dear, I'm glad u liked it
Nothing updated😭
Missed u priya
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Posted: 11 years ago
Once again a superb update!!
Loved it completely!!

I m happy wid yur simple romance dose also!! I know its nt guttery bt its good!!
Keep going!
Excited for nxt part!!
Despo zain and phattu aliya!! Lol 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: iman_harshika

Once again a superb update!!

Loved it completely!!

I m happy wid yur simple romance dose also!! I know its nt guttery bt its good!!
Keep going!
Excited for nxt part!!
Despo zain and phattu aliya!! Lol 😆

Thank u dear, I'm glad u liked it...
I cannot write guttery stuff😛
Phattu Aliya😆 lol yes...

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