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Posted: 10 years ago
it was suber duoer amazing...
really loved it...
lol..it was also damn hilarious...
cannot stop laughing...
well giving a chuto comment...
but next time bada wala pakka..
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

it was suber duoer amazing...

really loved it...
lol..it was also damn hilarious...
cannot stop laughing...
well giving a chuto comment...
but next time bada wala pakka..
thanks for the pm


Thanks so much for your comment PRIYA...
Really glad to hear that you liked it...
It's ok...I see you were busy or the first one would have always been you or ANAGHA..😆
Hope you will like the rest...😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi


Thanks so much for your comment PRIYA...
Really glad to hear that you liked it...
It's ok...I see you were busy or the first one would have always been you or ANAGHA..😆
Hope you will like the rest...😳

u r wlcum habeeba...
lol..yes i would have definately been the first one or anagha...
yes i will like the rest
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 4

Later in the evening...
ALIYA decides to use sultan in completing her task...SULTAN was waiting for ZAIN... ALIYA notices him and whistles to him from where she was hiding...sultan wonders who it was...and notices ALIYA she winks at him and he falls for her...
Sultan : hi ALIYA...he greets her...ALIYA : hey sultan right, ok you have to do me a favour, promise.
Sultan : anything for you ALIYA...all lost in her...😆
ALIYA : great, you have to steal zain's room keys and give it to me...SIMPLE...
Sultan : what are you joking, I have no idea where keeps his keys...he hasn't even told me...
ALIYA *and he calls himself BFF* come on ATLEAST help me NA...
Sultan : no worries ALIYA anything... anything for you...

ZAIN comes from outside : what are you doing here bro..SULTAN : nothing you said you wanted to go shopping so I came...
ZAIN : ok give me a min I will get ready...he leaves to his room..sultan gives a thumbs up to ALIYA and ALIYA to him...
ZAIN enters his room ALIYA and sultan follow him....sultan comes in first...bro one sec I need your help...he drags him out leaving the door open...both stand in the hallway...ALIYA sneakingly enters zain's room while SULTAN keeps ZAIN busy showing something on his phone...sultan checks whether ALIYA entered...ALIYA shows him a thumbs up and gives a flying kiss...😆
Sultan : HAYEEE...
ZAIN : what's wrong bro?? He turns back to check but ALIYA hides under his bed
Sultan : nothing...nothing...I was a...a...imagining ALIYA again...
ZAIN : great...tell me when you wake up...he leaves to his room...

ALIYA under his bed.full of dirt, chewing gums and stuff.*ALLAH...even hell is better than his room*
ZAIN removes his socks and throws it under his bed which lands on ALIYA...
ALIYA *ewww...GROSS*
ZAIN changes his clothes...Sultan : ZAIN hurry up bro...
ZAIN : ya coming...he is about to lock his room from the outside...ALIYA : I need to get outta here...she comes out from under the bed...
Sultan knows ALIYA is stuck inside...he says BRO STOP!!

ZAIN stops...what happened??
Sultan : you can't lock the room...ZAIN : why not...any problem??
ALIYA is hearing their conversation from inside...
SULTAN : you...you..forgot your jacket...ZAIN : cool thanks dude...he again opens the door...
ALIYA hides herself in the washroom...sultan wonders why ALIYA is not coming out or whether she has already come out...ZAIN wears his jacket and says...ok now shall we go??
Sultan still confused...ya ya...of course...ZAIN locks his room and both leave...😆

ALIYA : great now I am stuck in this dump..where on earth am I gonna find the keys...
She searches near the bed, study table, his shoes, under the pillows and finally thinks he must have kept it somewhere in the cupboard...she opens the cupboard...all his clothes and stuff tumble down upon her...*this is all I need now...urghhh...how does he even stay alive??She spreads all his clothes and stuff on the floor and keeps on finding the extra keys...she does not and still keeps on searching in the cupboard where she finds a sack named "TREASURES OF REVENGE"...

She opens it and finds all her childhood stuff...from her teddy bear named JANOO it was her sleep companion never would she go any where w/o that..she remembers in flashback of her childhood*usman gifted ZAIN a cycle and ALIYA the teddy... ZAIN used to tease her everytime calling it her prince which made ALIYA angry and she broke his cycle by removing the brakes thus ZAIN stole her priced possession*she comes out of her flashback and sees it now..but ZAIN did not leave it just like that...he removed it's eyes and also slit it open as his revenge... to a DUPPATA which her mom gifted her but ZAIN burnt it coz he felt she flaunted it too much..and he also had her tooth...all her memories refreshed...

She then again starts searching for the keys and finds it in the drawer of the cupboard...she remembers that ZAIN was a huge sports fan...all limited edition sports stuff was with him...she starts to find that in the other cupboard...she picks out the most fav ones rated by ZAIN in a book and smirks...*ZAIN this is gonna be so easy*...she leaves his room..

ZAIN and sultan return home after some last min shopping...ZAIN is shocked to find out his room opened and all in a mess...he looks at Sultan...but sultan himself starts thinking*ALLAH, if this was done by ALIYA I am definitely not gonna marry her...ZAIN was right she is proud and arrogant*
ZAIN asks him..who did this??? MOMMM...he shouts...
SHABANA comes...ALLAH ZAIN who did this to your room??
ZAIN : that's what I am trying to know...who??

ALIYA passes by and sees ZAIN tensed...what happened phoops?? She pretends...ALLAH ZAIN..what did you do to your room??...she controls her laugh..
ZAIN notices and says you...you did this NA??
SHABANA scolds him...stop it ZAIN...everytime you blame it on her...*ALIYA makes a puppy dog face*...didn't I say clean your room every time...now go start packing...she leaves...

ALIYA starts laughing...come on ZAIN..100 - 100 done NA...
ZAIN : really... Cheater cock...how did you enter when I had keys...enters his room and starts arranging...ALIYA asks sultan to hush up and says it was a challenge right...now I am on your treat list for tomorrow...wohooo...ZAIN finds some of his stuff missing...ok what did you do to my rare sports collection...stole it give it back now...

ALIYA : ALLAH TAUBA, why on earth would I steal your junk???
ZAIN : Then where is my DHONI autographed cricket set??
ALIYA : god, it was autographed???you know phoops was asking for wood to light up the tandoor and I ...you know...gave...
ZAIN : what??and the limited edition basket ball...please don't say that to...
ALIYA : no I didn't give that...ZAIN : thank god...ALIYA throws his deflated ball to him.."here you go"
Sultan : that's the one...ZAIN almost gets tears in his eyes seeing the condition..
ALIYA : you know the saying...an eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth etc...she winks...😉
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Sorry for the loonng update...😕...didn't notice that...generally I end up with a small one...anyways...

Hope you guys liked it...do comment your views...don't think I am always a ZAIN torturer😆...but he will be back later...

Edited by 786ahf_bi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lolllz 🤣 awesome 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
lol...
it was awesome habeeba...
so sorry for the late reply...
it was hilarious...
aliya is so intelligent...and sultan so idiot...
that memory part was super duper awesome...
u rocked there...
what i think zain used to have a crush on aliya and the result is storing her stuffs..
lol that line eye for eye,tooth for tooth really cracked me up...
continue soon...
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kunakshafan26

lolllz 🤣 awesome 👍🏼


Thanks so much...😆...btw your name...I am habeeba...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

lol...😆
it was awesome habeeba...thanks so much PRIYA...
so sorry for the late reply...late...I updated it just now...
it was hilarious...really...thanks...
aliya is so intelligent...and sultan so idiot...ya...smart aloo...you know sultan reminds me of bilal😆
that memory part was super duper awesome...actually it was long...but I edited it...
u rocked there...thanks again...😳
what i think zain used to have a crush on aliya and the result is storing her stuffs..nothing like that you will find that out later...
lol that line eye for eye,tooth for tooth really cracked me up...ya...that moral just popped up...😆
continue soon...I will
thanks for the pm...your welcome...

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Posted: 10 years ago
I know you must be cursing me,
Coz i comment rarely actually never do,
Nd you take the curtiosy to PM me,
But trust me...I LOVE UR WRITING! AND AM ALWAYS WAITING WITH BATED BREATH FOR THE UPDATE!
And till now the story is rocking+speechless
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