UPDATE Ch12 pg 31: My take on beintehaa mohobbat - - Page 12

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Purvaa🤗 amazing update asusual, ...

Brilliantly written dear,

Loving the story the way u r taking it,

Kids coming close to sam... is something good...idea

I loved it...

Thank u so much for pm dear...😳

Will be waiting for ur next take..

another twist...🤗...may be or may not be...
thanks for reading...

Originally posted by: qhid

another twist...🤗...may be or may not be...
thanks for reading...

also, I just wanted to say sorry to all the girls ...those of you reading...for the grammar...and not perfect...english or hindi/urdu...trying to write in the 1/2 hour slot I have for me time...

and want to get some of my thoughts.. ideas... across...more than writing perfectly...

one idea in the last two chapters...6 and 7...

...that when we do things for others, without expecting anything really..just something good...help out...then god makes things beautiful things happen for us...that we hadn't really planned on getting...

Originally posted by: qhid

also, I just wanted to say sorry to all the girls ...those of you reading...for the grammar...and not perfect...english or hindi/urdu...trying to write in the 1/2 hour slot I have for me time...

and want to get some of my thoughts.. ideas... across...more than writing perfectly...

one idea in the last two chapters...6 and 7...

...that when we do things for others, without expecting anything really..just something good...help out...then god makes things beautiful things happen for us...that we hadn't really planned on getting...

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Typo's grammar, not an issue and u write brilliantly u know,

Look at my updates god, yesterday only I realised, I reread my update to many typo's and grammatical mistakes, I felt bad for my readers

Well.said dear, I do believe in that

Thanks da...yes sometimes when I go back and read...I want to correct so many things...but what I like is new anything...new...and interesting...your ff that I read was very nice...the more you write the better you get and the most important part is to enjoy it...which you do...😳

Originally posted by: LoveBeintehaa

Amazing update

thank you🤗 for reading...

Amazing part !!
Luv dis jealous aliya :)
Continue soon
N thnxx for pm !!

It's amazing...superb

Amazing update