ZayaSS: From where it all started CHAP 10!!!PG28 ..... - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Dear, I jus read all the parts in one go, loved it, loved it
Continue soon😊 update Asap pls, pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
I read all ur chapters
All were awesome
U are a very good writer
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Very nice update...tnx
Plz. Do cont. Soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
When r u updating the next chappy?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

When r u updating the next chappy?

I have no idea dear...rite now m blank will have to think wat to do next...
But very fast in sha ALLAH!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Pls update soon 😊
I want to know Aaliya's Point Of View when Zain asked her to marry him 😉 😆

To isliye pls pls chp-5 jaldi update kijiyega 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
So sweet of u...
It was really awesome yaar...
Loved it...
The scene reminded me when aliya ankle got twisted and our zain miyaan made it alright...
Pls pls pls continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
nice i liked it pls pm me also for the next chap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Thank you...so much wanted to personally thank each one bt m very busy nowdays ...try to update d chap by the earliest...thanks once again to all of u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aaliya; kyaa????..kya kaha tum ne????

Zain ; yaar ...tum sab ladkiyoon ko koi hearing problem hoti hai kya????

Aaliya ; haan ...no... I mean ...did u just say nikaah??
Zain ; haan wat else...

Aaliya ;Zain tum pakka drunk toh nahi ho na??... jaha tak mujhe yaad hai maine kabhi tum se nikaah ka promise nahi kiya tha ..galti se bhi nahi...

Zain ; toh phir toh tumhaari yaadaash bohot kamzor hai...15 saal pehle ...28th march to be exact...kuch yaad aaya...

Aaliya ; 15 saal pehle... 28th march...arre haan 28th march ko tou you ..mamu ..mami nd fahad bhai left bhopal na??

Zain ; haan par uss din hamdono ne ek promise bhi kiya tha...

Aaliya's eyes widened as she remembered the promise..

**flashback**

Zain ; bye Aaliya mai jaa raha hoon...*he said with a sad look*

Aaliya; par Zain jaate jaate promise tou kardo??

Zain ; kya??

Aaliya ; ki tum mujhe kabhi bhool nahi jaaoge na..

Zain; ofcourse..mai apni best friend ko kyu bhoolunga???aur doosra promise bhi yaad hai naa..

Aaliya ; haan ki hum dono bade ho ke sirf ek doosre se hi nikaah karenge...

Zain ; promise...

Aaliya ; promise..

**flashback ends**

Aaliya stands up in shock remembering the promise...

Aaliya ; haan yaad aaya...

Zain too stands up...

Zain ; toh phir nikaah kab hai??

Aaliya ; kiska??

Zain ; stupid ..hamaara aur kiska?

Aaliya ; dekho zain wo ..wo ...hamaari nadaani thi ..tum...ek minute tum nazdeek kyun aa rahe ho??

Zain ; come on Aaliya mai tumhaara hone waala shauhar hoon...tumhaare nazdeek aane ka haq hai na mujhe...

Aaliya ; kit kit ...kit kit ... ZAIN agar tum zara sa aur nazdeek aaye toh I swear mai chilla dungi...

Zain ; mai chillane doonga tab na?

He kept his hand on her lips...

Aaliya ; ummm..umm

Zain ; Shhh MKB just enjoy the moment...


Aaliya's eyes widened in fear of something very wrong ...

Zain slowly moved his hand ..took a few steps behind and burst into laughter...

Zain ; hahahahahhahaha ...god mai ne socha ki mai MKB ki dara doonga waise umeed toh nahi thi ki tum darro gi bt tum ...hahahaha

AALIYA'S POV

YA ALLAH...how mean ye yaha hass raha hai isse jya pata ki ...ki mai kitna darr gayi thi..meri kitni phat rahi thi... god ...I can still feel my heartbeat ...asshole!!!!

Zain ; waise tumne kya socha tha ??

Aaliya ; mm..mai ..kuch ..kuch bhi toh nahi..

Zain ; toh itna nervous kyon ho rahi thi...sach batao tumhe laga na ki mai tumhe kiss karne waala hoon...

Aaliya ; haan ...nahi... I mean haan toh??


Zain ; haan??? Hahahahha

Aaliya ; excuse me!!! Ek toh mere itne nazdeek aate ho phir kehte ho enjoy the moment who bhi tab jab hum iss kamre mai lock hai...toh mai kya sochoongi???aur tum wahaa kadhe ho ke hass rahe tthe aur yaha meri jaan nikli jaa rahi thi idiot!!!

Zain ; accha achha srry!!!! MKB wo dekho darwaaza khul gayaa...

Aaliya ; sach...uff thankh god warna tumhaare saath aur nahi raha jaa raha tha

When they came outside they acted as nothing happened and nor did anyone see them coming out except maya..

Maya ; aaliya tujhe mai kaha kaha nahi dhoond rahi thi...aur tu yaha store room se nikal rahi hai ...''ZAIN'' ke saath..shew stressed zain..

Aaliya ; no maya mujhe pata hai ki tu kya soch rahi hai par aisa kuch nahi hua ..plz

Maya ; toh phir toh tu mujhe puri story narrate kar rahi hai na ...kaha par??

Aaliya ; canteen ??

Maya ; chal..

At the canteen

Maya ; ab bata ..

Aaliya ; woh maya ..actually mai aur zain store room mai phass gaye tthe ...waha par hum dono ne decide kiya ki hum dono dost bann jaayenge...aur uss ne muhjse maafi bhi maangi...

Maya ; aur???

Aaliya ; ur who mujhe kiss bhi karne waala tha..

Maya ; wat???

Aaliya ; no no..sirf daraane ke liye warna aisi usski koi intension nahi tha..

Maya ; kaash mai teri jagah hoti toh mai toh ...i don't know mai kya kar bet ti,,

Aaliya ; plzz yaar...

On the other hand Zain recieves a call frm shabaana

Zain ; assalamualaikum...phups..

Shabaana ; walaikum assalaam beta ...beta mai chaahti hoon ki tum aaliya ko apne saath ..yahi barkat villa le aao..

Zain ; par kyun phups ..

Shabaana ; woh hum log yahi par hai ...bhabhi ne hame bulaaya tha fahad ka nikaah taye ho gaya hai na...

Zain ; arre haan ...ji phups rakhta hoon .. ALLAH hafiz

Shabaana ; ALLAH hafiz beta

ZAIN'S POV

Mamu ki bhaanji ko message kar deta hoon..

'mamu ki bhanji..tumhaara intezaar bahar kar raha hoon...jaldi gaadi mai aa jao ..m waitin''

He waited 4 aaliya's reply n soon got one but ws shocked to read d message..

'jus comin sweetheart...wait 4 me..luv aaliya..''

-----------------------------------------------------srry jaldi mai hoon iss liye itna hi ...

hope u like ie..luv aaliya😊

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