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Sunidhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the good work!!

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Shiri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

amazing update

loved the ending

oh no...zain is her cousin and she didnt know?? haha this is gonna be fun

update soon

and please pm me when u do

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RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

awesome concept !!!
loved it❤️
plzz continue soon

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Flower

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Interesting continue soon and do PM me

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Aaliya

@.SnowPrincess.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Thanks 4 ur comments

**flashback**

after Zain kept the file in his bag...

Rizwaan : Zain ...jaldi

Zain : kar tou raha hoon...

Rizwaan : abbe ruk ...koi aa raha hai jaldi nikal ...

Zain : chal chal chal...

While Aaliya and Maya were coming in ...

Maya : Aaliya jaldi kar ...

Aaliya : haan...haan... ruk na ...teri train choot rahi hai kya????

Maya : tu aisa hi samajh ...

Aaliya : Chal ...

Maya : Aaliya ek minute ...ruk ..

Aaliya : kya hua...yaar ..

Maya : kya wo teri file hai??...Zain ke bag mai ...

Aaliya : ek minute...i took the file in my hands.

AALIYA'S POV

Huh!!!!Zain ka baccha ...idiot kahi ka ...usski ..usski ye himmat ...usko tou mai chodoongi nahi ...kit kit kahi kaa..

Maya : kya soch rahi hai??

Aaliya : kuch nahi ...chal professor ko file submit karne jaate hai ..

**flashback ends**

ZAIN'S POV

o teri ...yaani ab ye Ms. Attitude kuch na kuch zaroor karegi ...Attitude koot koot ke bharaa hai na issme..

At Haider Mansion..

The phone rings ...

Aaliya : assalamoalikum ...

Mamu : walaikumassalaam ...beta..

Aaliya : Arre ..mamu aap ...kaise hai aap..

Mamu : bilkul theek...aur tum...

Aaliya : Mamu mujhe kya kabhi kuch ho sakta hai ??

Mamu : kabhi nahi...accha beta ...aaj raat tum yahaan Abdullah mansion aa rehi ho...

Aaliya : par kyon ...mamu...

Mamu : arre ...tumhaare mamu ne kaha hai iss liye ...shabana se baat ho chooki hai ... Aaliya : jee mamu ...raat ko milte hai ..khudahafiz ...

Mamu : khudahafiz beta...

At Abdullah Mansion

Suri: arre... khana tou ban gaya na..

Servant : ji ...

Zain : arre mom itni tayyaariyaan ...kiske liye mom ...as he ate an apple

Suri : arre beta ...aaj tumhaare phups aa rahi hai ...

Zain: sach ...aur doll bhi na..

Suri : haan aur

Zain : aur mamu ki bhaanji bhi...right waise ..usska asli naam kya tha??...Aasia??Aafia ??? pata nahi kya tha...

Suri : tumhe usska asli naam bhi yaad nahi..

Zain : haan ...kyonki aaj tak usse maine usske asli naam se bulaaya hi nahi , MKB...that's wat i call her ..

on the other hand

Shabana : beta , tum kya pehen rahi ho???

Aaliya : Ammi mai, uhh kuch bhi like thoda simple saa

Shabana : simple nahi ye pehno thoda bhaari hai..lekin

Aaliya : thoda... Ammi ...hum mamu ke ghar jaa rahe hai ...mere liye ladka dekhne nahi ...jo mai ye pehno ...

Shabana : chup chaap...ye pehen lo ...aur ...

Aaliya : aur...

Shabana : aur...fikr mat karo jab tumhaare liye ladka dekhne jaaenge tab aur bhi accha dress pehenaaongi tumhe.

Aaliya : Ammi...

Shabana : Accha accha jaldi tayyaar ho jaana...

Aaliya : ji ...

In Abdullah mansion..

Usmaan : arre Surraiya begam ...abhi tak shabaana aayi kyon nahi

Suri : lijiye aa gae ...

Shalam : assalamoalikum

Usmaan &Suri: walaikumassalaam ...

Ayat: Assalamoalikum mamu ...assalamoalikum mami..

Usmaan & Suri : walaikumassalaam beta ...

Usmaan : arre Shabana ,ghulaam ..Aaliya khidar hai ...

Shabana : wo...

Aaliya : Mai yahaan ho...

Aaliya : assalamoalikum mamu ...assalamoalikum mami..

Usmaan n suri : walaikumassalaam beta ...

Suri : kaisi ho Aaliya..

Aaliya: mai bilkul theek hoon mami..

Ayat : Arre mami..Zain bhaijaan kahaan hai ????

Kis bandar ka naam le liya issne bhi ..i thought to myself ...n then..

Zain : yahaan par hoon doll ..i said while coming down frm the stairs..

Ayat : Zain bhaijaan ...she came n hugged me ...v both were more close ..

i mean ...hw a sister and a brother are supposed to be ...i guess much more close than that mamu ki bhaanji...i wonder hw stupid she must be looking now after 15 years...itne saalo london mai jo tha ...

Aaliya's phone rang and she went to a corner to ans the phone...

Zain : tu tou bohot zyaada badi aur cute ho gai hai...

Ayat : aap bhi ek dum ...hero types lag rahe hai ...

Zain : wo tou hai ...

Zain : assalamoalikum phupa ...

assalamoalikum phups...

shalam : walaikumassalaam beta...

Aaliya turned ...and...

ZAIN'S POV

wat the f**k ...ye yaha ???? ...I knw I knw mai hoon hi itna handsome ki koi bhi mera peecha karega ...but mere ghar tak...hadd hoti hai yaar ...

Suri : Arre Aaliya...

Dude...Arre Aaliya yaani ye hi no no no ye hi Aaliya ...mera luck hi aisa hai kya...yaa mera luck isske aane se badal jaata hai ...

Aaliya : assalamoalikum ...ZAIN

Zain : huh !!!!!

Aaliya : assalamoalikum ...

Zain : accha...uh..walaikumassalaam

Suri : Andar aayi ye...

As everybody entered Aaliya stopped and whispered in Zain's ear

Aaliya : pehle bhi kaha tha mooh bandd karlo warna makhi ghuss jaegi...harbaar remind nahi karwaongi.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------So hw was it...let me knw ...n ...plzz do give me some suggestions ...m completely blank...

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priya arora

@_Butterfly_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

really loved it !
Cont soon !
Thnx 4 d pm :)

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Last part was quite funny..
Really loved it...
Continues oon

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

really awesome
loved it
continue ASAP
thanks for pm

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LoveBeintehaa

@LoveBeintehaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Very nice... Eagerly waiting plz. Cont. Soon

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Aaliya

@.SnowPrincess.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

As the Haider's came inside ...

Shabana : Arre bhaijaan ..fahad kidar hai ...baki sab se tou mil liya magar wo nahi dikhayi diya...

Usmaan : Wo fahad ...tou kisi kaam se bahar gaya hai ...shayad hotel ke kuch kaam se..

Hotel ke nahi meri hone waali bhabhi se milne gaye hoge...pata nahi kab se Nafisa Appi ke peeche pade hai ...ek baar Nafisa Appi haan kehde kitne dino baad iss ghar mai phirse Nikaah hoga..I thought to myself..

Suri : Zain jaao Aliya aur Ayat ko apna room dikhao ...

ZAIN'S POV

wat the f**k ...mai iss mamu ki bhaanji ko apna room kyon dikhao ...kya ye koi ritual hai ...jo bhi aaye usse apna room dikhao...yaar mere room mai koi khazaana nahi daba hua hai ke jo aaye room dikhao...par ab mom ko kon samjhaaye fine..

Zain : ji mom...

Aaliya , Ayat and Zain went upstairs ..

ALIYA'S POV

Hmmm.pehli baar kisi ladke ka room itna saaf dekh rahi hoon zaroor mami ne saaf kiya hoga ...

Mom ne kab mera room saaf kiya ...I thought to myself ...

Suri : Bacchoon mai tum logo ke liye juice layi hoon lo...arre ye oil yaha kya kar raha hai ...Aaliya bete zara iss oil ko kitchen mai rakh kar aajao plz.

Aaliya : ji mami..

ZAIN'S POV

Aaliya bete...dude ye sab kuch aisa lag raha tha as if ...saas bahu ki sweet baatcheet ho rahi ho...wait Aaliya bahu no...tu bhi na Zain...so I marofied exit ...

Shabana : Aaliya...

Suri : lagta hai shabaana tumhe bula rahi hai ..ek kaam karo tum shabaana ke paas jao mai oil rakh doongi ..fine

Aaliya : ji mami..

Suri took the oil and went down she did not notice when she dropped a little oil on the floor ...after keeping the oil in the kitchen she was coming back when she stepped on the oil ...and fell down towards the ground...Aah she uttered in pain...everyone gatheted there... Zain helped his mom...

Zain : Mom kya hua ...

Suri : Wo Zain waha par oil...

Zain : oil ...oil tou mamu ki bhaanji laa rahi thi naa...

Aaliya : haan par ..

Zain : par kya...tumne ye perpously kiya na taaki mom gir jaae

Suri : Nahi zain...

Zain : No mom...mai jaanta hoon iss mamu ki bhaanji ne ye perpously kiya ...tumne mujhse badla lena tha na apni file lene ke liye ...

Aaliya : Nahi ...wo

Zain : Jaanta hoon ...tumhe agar badla hi lena tha tou mujhse leti mom se leni ki kya zaroorat thi...

Aaliya had tears in her eyes..

Aaliya : Zain maine aise kuch nahi kia

Zain : ab jhoot bolne se kya faida mamu ki bhaanji ...

Suri : Bas Zain ...Aaliya nahi mai wo oil laa rahi thi ...maine hi usse galti se gira diya tha...Aaliya ki issme koi galti nahi ...Abhi ke abhi Aaliya se maafi maango...

Zain : par mom...

Suri : abhi ke abhi..

ALIYA'S POV

How could he...usse lagta hai ki mai mami ko ...ko hurt karoongi ek stupid sa badla lene ke liye??..impossible ho tum mister Zain Abdullah ...he turned to me ..par mujhe koi maafi nahi chahiye ...mai nahi jaanti thi Zain ki itni choti soch hai...i ...i just ran frm there..

ran to my house ...to my bed and started weeping...for the rest of the night ...

At Abdullah Mansion

Suri : M really srry ...shabana

Shabana : nahi nahi bhabhi its fine...mai wo Aaliya

Suri : ji...

ZAIN'S POV

dude now i was the one in the problem ...i know wat i had to do...

Next morning...

Aaliya was all fine ready to do to college when she opened the door to find a bouquet of flowers lying on her doorstep

Aaliya : ye kis ka hai , card hai ...srry mamu ki bhaanji ...frm Za.. huh idiot ...n i threw the flowers on the floor..

Shabana on the phone spying Aaliya

Zain: kya hua??