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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you ..!!

Originally posted by: katmaan

Hey I love it and pm me pls

yes i will surely do it ..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveBeintehaa

Nice update dear I loved it
and plz do cont. Soon

I think u forgot to PM me but it's ok next time plz. Plz. PM me :) tnx

Originally posted by: LuvAaliyah

Amazing uodate

Thanks for the PM

@Both : Thank you ..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ZFA_Flower

This update is Magnificent

Awesome
Aliya rocked in this update
Last passage was incredible
Precap is interesting
Continue soon plzzz
Thanks for the PM

Thank you ..!!
and i will continue ..!!😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Laila_Shiri_Lee

Wow yaar that was amazing
Have waited so long for this update and finally the wait is over
Loved the chapter
It was quite emotional also
Can't wait for the next chapter
Eagerly looking forward to it
Update soon please
And thanks so much for the pm

Thank you ..!!
And i'm really sorry for the wait ..and yes will update it today ..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
hola people i'm back with the update..(ya finally i did )so here you people go with the update i hope you like it ..my pc is on loonnngg leave so there was neither proof reading nor typo correcting ..so please ignore all sorts of Typos..hope you guys will have a great time reading my update...Happi reading..!!!
BTW
Red Text -flashback
Blue text -present
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CH8: No Chance..!!

Few sun ray walked into the room and made their way to my face disturbing my peaceful sleep...i woke up with a frown on my face which automatically turned into a adoring smile when i witness the site infront of me ..there was he ..zain my cute kitkit ...was fast asleep with his mouth wide open ..i try-ed my best not to laugh at that cute scene infront of me ..how can some one be so adorable ?? i though to myself ..then a sudden fear creeped into my heart ..what if he regret last night??what if he regret being with me?what if he regret me??sadly my fear turn to be true .

"Sh*t ..what have i done..this is a huge mistake.."

"A MISTAKE"

his word echoed in my ear..i clutched onto the sheet that covered my naked body ..i acted to be asleep for few minutes but he kept on repeating the word"mistake " i got up and rush to the washroom and got dressed..when i came back to the room all got hear was

"Get out .!!"

he said in a total cold and emotionless tone staring at the floor ..for a sec i really failed to understand what was going on..why the hell all of sudden zain started behaving like this..there must be something wrong ..even yesterday he was behave abnormally ..whats wrong why don't he just share it with me ..this isn't him ..he never acts in such a way

"why? whats wrong see if there any .. "

he cut me off in the middle of my sentence

"There nothing wrong ..i was drunk ..and you are nothing to me..so leave.!!"

he reasoned making it sound the most coldest way possible.

"What ?"

was all i could say

"This is a huge mistake ..i shouldn't had drunk so much ..!!"

he repeated those word again.

"Zain why are you acting this way ? see if i did some thing wrong we can make it "

i almost begged him

"There nothing wrong and why don't you get it Al-Ya? l feel like dirt about the last night ..just get out from here "

he almost shouted at me

"WTH is wrong with you zain?? why hell are behaving like this if you don't feel the same way i do all you have to do is to say it out before hand..!!"

i yelled at him furiously

" i never promised you anything Nerdy "

he just glared at me

"Then say it out ..that it was just a one night stand..!!"

i glared back

"It-Was-Just-a-One-Night-Stand"

he eye went total watery and he said this in a totally different tone which isn't his.

"you know what ? i hate you ..!!"

i angrily shouted at him

"I hate you too Aaliya Ghulam Haider."

he said emotionlessly

"zain i will forget ..lets forget everything happened here we can still start a fresh started ..a new life with a new relation .."

i said pleading him..he didn't answer

"Answer me zain ..you weren't like this..why happened why are you behaving so ..?"
"People change Al-Ya..so did i .."
was all i got hear from him
"fine ..you don't wanna share it's alright ..but remember one thing MR.Zain Usman Abdullah ..i will never ever going to forgive you for this no matter what "

with that i stormed out of that room.
"he may be back into my world ..junu's world ..there no way i'm gonna accept him back into my life..he may be in junu 's life as her father ..but there gonna be noway he gonna come back into my life..i'm never gonna take him back ..no matter how why and what there is "NO CHANCE"of him coming back to my life"
A sole tear passed down my cheek with many other following it ..i rubbed em off me cheek and sat staring at myself in the mirror for rest of the night
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PRECAP

"i'm Sorry Al-Ya.."

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First of all i wrote the flash back a little long but it didn't seem well to me so i just cropped out few dialogue of it and made this ..anyways .hope you guys liked it .. and haan in next chap your are going to get Zain POV of this flash back so stay tuned..now as you guys know my rule..comments do ..updates lo...so do like and comment .. .it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed..!!


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Love'

Renu ..❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by ...Renu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update.poor aliya feel bad for her but I still confuse is they married or they just cousin?waiting for next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part !!
Felt very bad for aliya :(
Waiting to c zain's pov about dis !!
Continue next part fast !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was a nice chp 😊
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved it renu I want to know zains POV fast and ya pls pm me next time pls

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