Zaya os:i hate you p2 pg 3(on current track)

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@WarriorGirl-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

It was superb

Thxx fr the pm

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awsm start

U shud Continue this

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@Spillthetea

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: geet0910
Lovely os tee... thanks for pm..but i m scared zain isse b zyada torture karega aaliya ko har roz... 😭 roz roz rona hai hume.. aasu pina hai hume aur zaya ko.. 😭 but aise hi aur os likhte reh.. shayad hamara darr aur dard thoda kam ho jayega coz we wud hv imagined k bat se battar kya ho sakta hai.. so we will hv strength to watch the worst epi..

Sisy i m scared too,ab to rao raoz rona parega

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

It was superb ...
Loved it...
Felt sad for zaya...
Thanks for the pm...
Continue soon.

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@Spillthetea

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Aliya woke up to find her self on the ground and remembered everything that happened at night

She looked at her bandage and looked at zain who was sleeping

She thought to herself

"Khud chot de ke khud hi marham lagate ho,tum chahte kia ho zain?"

Zain also wokeup and hated himself for what he did last night

But at the end of the day she desrved it,didnt she?

He got ready and aliya brought him tea

Aliya:zain,chaye

Zain:nahi chaie

Aliya:pee lo zain

Zain:kaha na nhi chaie,

With that he pushed the cup away and the hot chaye fell on aliyas feet burning them

She fell down with a thud

Aliya:ahhh...ouch

She was crying in pain

Zain too got worried that what had he done...again

Zain:aliya tum theek ho?

He said sitting down

And held her foot

It was red,it was injured

Aliya pulled her foot away

Aliya:jab fikar nhi hai,to ye dikhawa mat kia karo,theek hu main,or mujhe theek rehna hoga jab tak me apni sachai prove na kardoo.

She said crying

Zain:aliya..

Aliya:me theek hoo,aadat hogyi hai mje in sab ki,meri hi ghalti thi k me tumhare lie chaye layi,ghar me koi nhi tha or tumhare breakfast ka time tha,is hi lie layi ti...but me bhool gyi ti k mere haat ki koi cheez tumhare lie zeher se kum nhi hai.

She stood up.

And limping she collected the pieces or the broken cup.

She could collect those,but could she ever collect the broken pieces of her heart?no,never

She left the room

Zain was still sitting there,thinking everything that happened,

I am i going over the board, m i wrong?thought zain

Though i planned an os but this one is specially for avi(tit for tat)

Hope u guys enjoy

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@4bottlevodka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Yeaaahhh!!Mereliye? Bohot achcha tha Tee! Awesome!!Thank You So Much!🤗

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@Spillthetea

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
Yeaaahhh!!Mereliye? Bohot achcha tha Tee! Awesome!!Thank You So Much!🤗

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geet0910

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

This is good one too tee.. thoda long likha karna but.. it finshes so soon that i keep longing for more.. anyways.. tune isko avi k liye hi dedicate kiya.. 😭 baaki hum sab bawdi me gaye?? 😭 huhhh... ja..katti 😭

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@Spillthetea

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: geet0910
This is good one too tee.. thoda long likha karna but.. it finshes so soon that i keep longing for more.. anyways.. tune isko avi k liye hi dedicate kiya.. 😭 baaki hum sab bawdi me gaye?? 😭 huhhh... ja..katti 😭

ab jo likhu gi wo tere lie,theek hai?

Long mujhse nhi likha jaata😆