ZaYa SS: Worth all the Spicy Lies-chapter 10 pg 24(23.1.2016) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: iansomer

AMAZING,BRILLIANT,INTRIGUING AND FANTASTIC. LOVED IT. PLZZZ CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME. WONDERFUL START.


thank you so much...appreciate it
will pm you when i update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
res
UNRES

superb one divi..
mujhe samaj me nahi aa raha hai ki tu,aasta,dayn aur avi iss talent ko itne din chupaake kyu baithe the?
waiting for muhurat?
chalo koi baat nahi
abb shuru kiya hai toh i'm very happy!
love ya
this was too good waiting for next
Edited by vinu127 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
res...
YES..!! I WAS FIRST..!!😎
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unres...!!
Umm..should I write all those things I wrote in PM?
I mean this is great work(of course I know) And what an awesome writer you are..i read that 2-3 times...but sab waapas likhu?😛
And yes...you are welcum my bacchi...my maa...my student...my cutie pie Divi..!!🤗🤗
Maine picture banane me THODI SI help ki...and you made the whole film..carried that out SO WELL...
Yah..I know m ur torchurer here..so update fast..!!!!! I know i said that earlier..but I will keep saying this..you rock my cutie pie..!!🤗❤️ I LOVE YOU AND YOUR SS as well..!!!!!!!!!
Ab Sweet ZaYa Dreamz..!! Kal phirse will torchure😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinu127

res

UNRES

superb one divi..
mujhe samaj me nahi aa raha hai ki tu,aasta,dayn aur avi iss talent ko itne din chupaake kyu baithe the?
waiting for muhurat?
chalo koi baat nahi
abb shuru kiya hai toh i'm very happy!
love ya
this was too good waiting for next


jab muje patha hota, tabhi toh me muhurat ka wait karuga na...
i just wrote it and ppl liked it...thats all i know
love you too
thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ZayaShiz

res...

YES..!! I WAS FIRST..!!😎
----------------
unres...!!
Umm..should I write all those things I wrote in PM?
I mean this is great work(of course I know) And what an awesome writer you are..i read that 2-3 times...but sab waapas likhu?😛
And yes...you are welcum my bacchi...my maa...my student...my cutie pie Divi..!!🤗🤗
Maine picture banane me THODI SI help ki...and you made the whole film..carried that out SO WELL...
Yah..I know m ur torchurer here..so update fast..!!!!! I know i said that earlier..but I will keep saying this..you rock my cutie pie..!!🤗❤️ I LOVE YOU AND YOUR SS as well..!!!!!!!!!
Ab Sweet ZaYa Dreamz..!! Kal phirse will torchure😃


thank you so much meri maa
i dont know what i'll do without you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well sorry for the late update on the second chapter...but it here today and its a big one too, i'll try to give the next sooner than this
first i would like to thank Vinu for helping me...and sorry to dayan for not telling in advance

hope you like it and sorry if you don't...here goes

2. Beginning of a Lie-0-zoic Era

In the flight

I'm on my way to the most beautiful and fun-filled city which is famous for its food, fashion and mainly partying...the one and only New York, I'm gonna extend our business there and also will manage it solely. If this isn't amazing, I don't know what is...but instead of being ecstatic I'm mourning at my own fate, and THAT great grave was dug by my Wonderful dad...Mr. Osman Abdullah

1 week ago, in London

"Hey dad, how are you?" I asked in excitement as soon as i saw the caller id-Darling...yes he is the one & only darling in my heart and life, coz he is one of...no The BEST Dad. Straight forward, honest, someone who loves his work as much as his family, but never more than that...a perfect gentleman isn't he? And I miss him terribly here. "I'm doing great Zain, hope you're too?" I smiled, and he sensed it from afar "good...I have news which would make you happier?" I was confused at my dad statement and calculated every possible good things in that second...what I'm very good at math, my favourite subject. Literally...hearing my confused silence he laughed and said "barkudhar, pack your bags...all of it and come home, coz I'm gonna give you a great responsibility". And all the thinking flew out the window, coz I had no idea what he was talking about, but I trusted my dad more to question him, so complied and kept the phone. But mein toh jawaan hoon, how can I be patient? I couldn't sleep at all...the surprise was killing me, so I did the next best thing...called my brother...oh, don't you all give me that look, I do trust my dad...it's just I'm not a big fan of surprises. After convincing...more like begging, he finally told me what the surprise was, you wanna know...ok. The world is now looking at the CEO of the Barkat Royale, newly to be launched at New York.

More than the surprise, I was excited to see my family I kept imagining everyone's faces when they look at the charming, hot hunk I've become...I worked my ass off to become ONE. But everything flew the next flight when I landed in Mumbai...everyone was waiting for me, sadly it was not for my welcome but to take me along with them to the next flight to BHOPAL...Yep Bhopal, the one place I spend my childhood only to roam, eat, play, tease, fight, roll on mud, get hurt and what not...woh bhi sirf ek ke saath...AALIYA GHULAM HAIDER. The girl who gets on my every nerve, but never leaves my mind...Mamu Ki bhanji, unique name isn't it? so was she; it's what I call her coz of my dad's love & care for her. I totally lost contact with them after I entered high school; I wonder how she looks...who cares? I'm sure she looks the same cry baby...alright whom I kidding I so want to see her, tease her again so that she can twitch her nose and become red in anger. But it's not the right time I guess, the reason we are going to Bhopal is because of phoopa's bad health...still I had this tingling feeling in me to see her again soon.

Finally we reached Bhopal, the whole environment was serious and it took every muscle of mine to control my excitement of seeing her again. All I could feel was emotions and silence...Idiot control yourself I kept reminding me...phoopa was lying in the bed with Aayat and Phoopi sitting on each side...wow Aayat is all grown into a pretty stunning girl, she even cut her hair...for someone who loved her hair more than anything, so much changed since I was gone. Besides I was searching for the person whom I wanted to see...hope she is not crying alone as always, she always did that...there she suddenly appeared from the other room...oh my...what the hell did the Haider sisters eat, magic fruit or something...I just couldn't comprehend anything anymore around me.

There stood Aaliya...newly reformed Aaliya standing next to Aayat...well she's still crying...trying to look strong with a lone tear from her eyes, but what the hell is that...she was just glowing she had this self radiating beauty and confidence in her, which didn't allow me to shift my eyes from her. She smiled at my dad...oh god margaya, is she even from earth? But suddenly her face lost life coz of something my dad said to phoopa and she directly looked at me appalled. Ya Allah, maine kya kiya? That's when I realized that every pair of eyes was on me...I know I'm good looking but this is too weird...then suddenly a gush of happiness took over and everyone dispersed planning something. Before I knew it I said "QUBOOL HAI" to Aaliya making her Aaliya ZAIN Abdullah...oh god, please wake me up, I can't get married I'm just too young to get locked up but no own listened. My life was officially over. But I didn't show it out especially to Aaliya, coz when I see her I could see my reflection there...same shock, confusion and pain.

I thought I had done with enough shocks but I got another...a big one...me and my big fat thinking... "WHAT?? Aaliya is a Cop...you mean a police in NEW YORK", I had a major heart attack and felt dizzy the instant Aayat told me...goodbye! May my pitiful soul rest in peace! But I calmed myself. The morning of our flights back to New York, we talked...Aaliya and I...first time after all the drama, not the way I imagined still I am actually glad we did we came to an agreement that both will keep off of each other's life for all good...finally I can have my life...parting days back, god bless this girl. But I was amazed at the level of maturity this Mamu ki Bhanji had...of course she does duffer, she been living abroad for 8 years she used to my kind of life.

So, here I am...I turned my head to my newly wedded wife sitting next to me, who was very much engrossed in her own thinking...maybe something about her work or...holy c***, kisise pyaar vyaar toh nai hua?...the thought literally took my breath away...that's it...that's why she suggested to live separate lives...she has A BOYFRIEND, even worse A LOVER. I came out of my panicking thoughts when the flight arrived at the New York airport. She really has changed through years; she kept herself calm and composed through out...it's not like she was going to cry out in my arms...that would be nice...ok stop, she might like someone else. If she was someone else, I guarantee that I would have made a move on her by now, I mean just look at her she's just too perfect to let her be...its gonna be hard living with her, brace yourself Zain. We took a taxi back to her apartment as per my dad's order to stay with her there and not complain...well the journey was not that bad, Aayat was trying her best to engage us in conversation...Ya, Aaliya literally begged Aayat to stay with us I'm happy but somewhere I thought we'll be alone...to talk...to talk people nothing else, phew.

We finally reached; it was not bad actually...ok I did expect some random guy to come from the house stating he is Aaliya's boyfriend...but I'm glad her house was empty...what I'm her husband I'm righted to think this way...and by one look I can tell she is still an Indian by heart and soul. My confusion got bigger, when she suggested "ok, me and Aayat will clean Joe's room" looking at our confused face she finished "for you...to stay" I just gave a faint smile and nodded in disappointment...it's not like I want to, but I did imagine us living in the same room, looks like Aayat did to. She just jumped and asked Aaliya "but why? You guys are married sis why would he stay in Joe's?" with a big question mark in her face. Aaliya couldn't respond instantly but she calmed herself "Aayat lets just take things slow and one at a time" she looked at me with hope, I gave an understanding nod...oh I understand...she does have someone in her life I just looked at her and choose to help her this time.

Thank god fresh air, I came out fanning myself...the room was a complete mess and was officially owned by dust...and spiders. Well I don't blame them, I guess after Joe's sudden death, they've been trying to move on...and they regretted how they couldn't do anything for him, not even donate blood, and just watched him die. I smiled at their innocence...and also I saw an opening while cleaning and asked her casually "so do you have any boyfriends?" she looked at me startled at first but smiled and finally said "no...I'm single at present" before I could react she retorted teasingly "Single tha...tumse Qubool Hai kehne se pehle" there goes my confusion with the dust; I just gave an amusing smile. So I was enjoying my fresh air when something happened, which I least expected...least I wouldn't imagine anything like this at all...ever.

I was standing in the hall way, leaving the two ladies to clean for me...I'm new here, khatirdari toh banta he, at least for today. Suddenly 4 people just barged in like it was their own, I just stood there confused. 3 guys and a girl entered casually without even knocking...I should have kept my mouth shut...I cleared my throat and asked them "who are you guys?" hell just broke loose...the lady just took a gun along with another, pointing at me and shouted " who are you and what are you doing here?...Raise your hands so I can see them" my hand went up instantly. Before I could say anything she continued "show your face..." more than shocked I was confused...what does she mean by show your face, it's not like I'm Spiderman...I'm not even playing holi, that's when I realized that, as we were cleaning...I was wearing A MASK...out of kerchief of course. Oh god, I'm probably looking like some terrorist to them now....before I could say anything in a swift of moment Aaliya stood before me, more like cover me from the gun...Ya Allah when did she become the hero of the story? Right she's the cop. "what the hell are you guys doing? Mel, Phil Put the guns down" Aaliya ordered them, but they just stared at me, Aaliya looked at me "oh...for god sake Zain, remove the mask" I took off immediately...this was the last time I ever wore it. Aaliya continued, looking at them "he is not an Intruder, I know him...now put your guns down"

They finally calmed and lowered their guns down, giving me some gap to breath. That's when Aayat rushed out hearing the hassle...both the sisters looked at each other a little tensed. Aaliya spoke finally "Guys, this is Zain Abdullah; he will be staying with me...US...from now on" I was looking at Aaliya little confused...why is she freaking out so much, she again continued "we were just cleaning Joe's room for him...he's gonna expand his family business here...I've known him from childhood...he's like a childhood friend...he's MY..." she was just giving small pauses at everything but she just stopped at MY. She was looking at me. I also looked at her curiously wanting her to finish her sentence, I wanted her to say it...it's weird but the truth...she finally took a breath, calmed herself and said it.

"He's MY COUSIN" she said avoiding eye contact with anyone, Yes and...I was waiting but she finished...wait what MY COUSIN that's all she had to say what the hell is going on in here. She then looked at Aayat who was more amused at what was happening and finally agreed with her sis with a nod. Finally both looked at me, Aayat still amused but Aaliya with desperate eyes...oh god I don't like the sound of this but....but finally I gave in "haan... me inki I mean...I'm THEIR COUSIN" there it is, it's just been 4 hours since I landed in New York...I've been thought as an intruder and I've also lied to cops about a very important part of my life...you're screwed buddy...funnily I feel it not gonna be the last time...Hello NEW YORK.


thats it hope i didn't bore you a lot...leave your comments and likes

love you all🤗...who reads the chapters😆


last edit was for Vinu...thank you for your suggestion😊

Edited by divikash - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Loved both the chappy..
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I did not unres that chappy also na?Will read and unres after episode!Okay?
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Phew! Finally i read that!

The Last Part Totally Cracked Me Up 🤣🤣🤣

The story is brilliant! I am in love with this!

You have a very good mind!a creative one!a different one!

I love your comic sense!This ia a total entertainer 👏👏👏

Amazing!
Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maine pehle wala chapter ka unres hi nhi kiya😆 sorry bhul gai thi...dono ko ek saath padhkar unres kar dungi😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aasta n avi! aapki toh aadat hai!
res karke unres bhool jaana!
i will PM u guys with a list of all ur Res-es next time!
and Divi, u know my opinion😆

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