zaya ss: if i were you. Chapter 5, Page 9, 10th JAN - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

@craziness05- Thanks a lot. Glad you like it. But I am so sad I cant update. Thanks.

I know u will nit be able to update but keep giving teasers
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: craziness05


I know u will nit be able to update but keep giving teasers


Okie dokie Mr. pokie. 😆
Will keep giving you all a lot of teasers.
Actually I am thinking I would just give the teaser no updates. 😆
Thanks a lot. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan


Okie dokie Mr. pokie. 😆
Will keep giving you all a lot of teasers.
Actually I am thinking I would just give the teaser no updates. 😆
Thanks a lot. 😳

Welcome🤗
Hey don't do this I want update and as well as teaser keep us guving both
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Teaser was NYC... 😊 😊
Zain ignoring Suri... 😆
Will be waiting for d update... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@humiri- I am happy that you liked the teaser. Yup the hero ignoring the villain because the villain is the hero's mother and doesn't like the heroine so matter of family you know. 😆 Will update as soon as I get time and make it as long as I can. If not I will keep leaving teasers or short updates. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
U r right...suri is Godzilla...
Regarding updates do it according to ur comfort...
I don't have any problem because in a day or 2 I will get sweet updates with Godzilla antics... 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: humiri

U r right...suri is Godzilla...
Regarding updates do it according to ur comfort...
I don't have any problem because in a day or 2 I will get sweet updates with Godzilla antics... 😆 😆


Godzilla huh? Really nice name.
Thanks a lot dear u r so sweet.
I am having so much support.
Thank you sooo much.
Godzilla antics? 😆 😆
Yeah will write them quick for sure.
Thanks a lot dear. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan


Godzilla huh? Really nice name.
Thanks a lot dear u r so sweet.
I am having so much support.
Thank you sooo much.
Godzilla antics? 😆 😆
Yeah will write them quick for sure.
Thanks a lot dear. 😳


U r wlcum... 😊 😊
Ya Godzilla antics because she is totally crack and even don't know what is she doing? 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey people I am back with another part. I am so sorry for the delay but now I am free and here is the next part. Hope you all like it:

Zain woke up next day to see the other side of the bed empty. He thought Aaliya may have left early. The orphanage had rooms in which they both were living. He changed into the clothes which Aaliya had left for him. He went outside and was greeted by the sister.
sister: Good Morning Zain.
Zain: Morning. Where is Aaliya?
Sister: oh she must be with the kids. The room down the stairs.
Zain: oh thank you so much.
Sister: my pleasure. Would you like some breakfast?
Zain: sure thanks.
They both smiled at each other and left. Zain went to the room and saw Aaliya playing with the kids. He smiled and went near them. He sat down next to a girl and asked her name.
Zain: hi I am Zain.
Isha: hi I am Isha.
Zain: pleased to meet you Isha. Friends?
He forwarded his hand and she took his hand and shook her hand. She smiled a cute smile. Which made Zain smiled too. Aaliya who had been watching all this went up to him and sat beside him kneeled down next to him.
Aaliya: Isha why don't you go play with Aakash?
Isha: okay di.
Aaliya smiled at her cuteness while Zain was admiring her. She turned to him and let out a warm smile.
Zain: so r u coming to Mumbai?
Aaliya: I cant Zain. This is my family now. I cant go back to Mumbai. I love these kids. They are my life.
Zain: what about your family?
Aaliya: oh you mean the family which didn't trust me and kicked me out of the house?
Zain: Aaliya-
Aaliya: no Zain. If you want to go back go then. I wont come with u.
He knew she was angry. And he also knew that he wouldn't leave without her. He got up and announced.
Zain: hey kids. Today we are gonna take a break of your didi's drama. And today we are gonna play A COMPETITION.

To be continued.
Hope you all liked it.
Will update tomorrow.
Short updates from now on.
Thanks a lot for reading. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Competition haiyy:-) can't wait update soon..loved it btw

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