zaya ss: if i were you. Chapter 5, Page 9, 10th JAN - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
one more awesome update i must say..w8ing for the competition!!!!
keep it up..n update fast!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
So competition is going to be held... 😊 😊
Lovely update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
wow lovely update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
all 4 part were amazing.pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Nyc part..
Pls tanya continue soon
N i must sae u pen down rele well :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Well I know.
And you being angry is ok.
Bcoz this is like what? In June?

ITS JANUARY.
I know I disappointed many by not continuing right?
Well I am more than sorry guys. My fault.

I am back!
Bt, with my NEW writing style.
Not the one I hv in d previous parts. ok?



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"Uncle!" Aakash calls Zain. Zain smiles and kneels down.

"Bolo baby." Zain smiles.

"Uncle, hum charades khele?" Aakash said cutely.

"Ok baby. So girls, we are playing charades!" Zain announced.

"The deal is on!" Aaliya said.

"Baby, don't call me uncle." Zain says to Aakash.

"What do I call you then?"

"Umm, Hi, mera naam Zain hai. Toh mujhe Zain bulao?"

"Ok. Aap bhi mujhe baby mat bulao. I am 5 ok?"

"Ohhh you are 5?" Aakash nodded. "Bahaut acchi baat hai. Then you are a big man!"

"Yes." Aakash pouted. Zain pinched his cheeks.

"Ok, big man. I'll call u Aakash nly. Is that ok?"

"Yes."



"Zain, kyun? Kyun tum itne acche bann rhe ho. Yeh wakt Zain, yeh wakt jo humne khoya hai woh waapis nahi aayega Zain. ITS OVER. Bahaut din wait kr rhi thi tumhara. Kab tum mujhe lene aao. Par Zain, mera waapis Barkat Villa aana namunkin hai. It's totally not possible. Yeh, yeh jo lamha hai na Zain, mujhe isse ji lene do. Kyunki jab tumhe sachai pta chalegi, tum mujhe chod kr chle jaoge. Yah, mei tumhe chodkar-" Aaliya burst out. 2 big tears escaped her eyes. Zain looked over Aakash to see Aaliya looking at them crying. Aaliya noticed Zain looking at her and ran away. Zain followed her to the balcony.

"AALIYA" Zain called out.

"Pls, chale jao." Aaliya requested.

"Nahi. Mei nahi jaunga. Kya hogya hai tumhe Aaliya? Tum yu ukdi ukdi si kyun-"

"Pls Zain. Tumhe meri kasam, pls chale jao."

"Aur tumhe meri kasam agar tumne aage se yeh saari kasme di. Pls Aaliya, btao mujhe-"

"Zain! Tum jaante ho kasmo ka matlab? Kuch pta bhi hai tumhe ki tum mere liye kitne ehem ho. Inn mahino mei meine tumhe kitna yaad nahi kiya. Socha ki bas ek baar tumhari awaz sun lu. Tumhe phone kr dia. Kyun kia meine woh phone. Khush the na tum! Maami bhi khush thi. Mei, tum- Accha hota na, tumhe lgta ki mei marrr chuki-" Zain rushed to her and covered her mouth.

"SHUT UP! Bilkul chup. Kuch bhi bole jaa rhi ho. Matlab pta hai tumhe marne ka? I can't live without you Aaliya. Pls mujhe chod ke mat jao! Pls!" Zain cried as he soon crushed her in a bear hug. Aaliya soaked into the warmth of her husband. Her love.

"Par Zain agar koi mujhe le jao toh?" Aaliya said.

"Matlab?" Zain pulled back to see her face.

"Agar allah mujhe le jao toh?"

"Kesi baatein kr rhi ho tum? Pagal ho kya!"

"Zain, mujhe-"

"Tumhe kya Aaliya?"

"Zain mujhe BRAIN TUMOR HAI"



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Voila! Still 2 parts left.
Hope you all liked it.

Thanks a lot. :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
emotional chapter
omg aaliya ko brain tumor
hw will zain react
pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Oh no don't separate my zaya , and thank you for updating the story , i like your writing style listen please don't kill my aalu and continue soon !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
nice part tanu n emotional too.. Aaliya has brain tumour 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Amazing part...
Awesome ..
Finally u updated :)
Aliya has brain tumour :(
Continue soon !!

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