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Hi people. Because of this on going remarriage and divorce crap I have decided to write my view of the story. So if you don't like it. My apologies. So I have skipped the part in which Zain comes to Osman's rescue. I am just continuing from the point Aaliya and Zain reach the hospital.
Aaliya and Zain were waiting outside the ICU. Surraiya along with the others came in the hospital worriedly. Fahad had told both his wives to stay home. Chand khala was taking care of the house. Zain was in Aaliya's embrace which angered Surraiya even more. She hated that girl. And somewhere she knew that it was Aaliya who did all this. She was too angry on her. Zain had burst out into tears while Aaliya was hugging him to control and console him. Surraiya went up to Zain and kept a sympathetic hand on his shoulder.
Zain: mom?
Surraiya: how is Osman sahb?
Zain: mom dad is not well. The doctors are saying he had a asthma attack a lot serious one.
Surraiya: what?
Zain: Fahad bhai?
Fahad: what?
Zain: take mom home. Me and Aaliya are here we will take care of everything.
Surraiya: its all because of you.
Surraiya said pointing towards Aaliya who was crying. Surraiya wasn't angry that much but because she was in trauma of Osman's health. Aaliya looked up along with Zain.
Zain: mom-
he was about to say but Surraiya cut him.
Surraiya: Zain Aaliya is the one who is responsible for all this.
Zain: no mom you are having another misunderstanding. Why would Aaliya want to kill her own uncle?
Aaliya: mami.
Surraiya: Zain why don't you ever listen to me. She is trapping you Zain. She and her whole family.
Zain: mom that's not it. Why would Aaliya do that?
Surraiya: exactly Zain. I am also thinking why did she do that?
Zain: mom-
Surraiya: Zain. She called Osman sahb to the office. We were sitting in the room and she came in and asked Osman to go to the office for only 15 minutes. This was all her plan Zain. She trapped you so that no one in the house could come in her way. She knew you would always support her no matter what after she played this so much in love game with you.
Just then doctors came out. Zain rushed to them.
Doctor: we are very sorry Mr. Abdullah. We lost him.
The whole world shattered. The ground beneath Zain's feet slipped. The whole world turned black. Tears formed his eyes. His mind stopped working. His breath stopped. He felt his eyes closing and his view blurring with tears. He felt a hand on his left arm. It was Aaliya. A thought ran up his mind and he pushed the hand away. Aaliya was shocked by this. He turned around. His eyes were completely red.
Zain: why did you do this?
Aaliya: Zain-
Zain: why did you this Aaliya?
He shouted this time. Aaliya got scared. He had never shouted at her before. Even when they hated each other.
Aaliya: Zain please give me a chance to explain-
Zain: what would you explain dammit! MY FATHER IS DEAD!!!!
Aaliya: Zain I didn't-
Zain: GET OUT!!!
Aaliya: Zain-
Zain: GET OUT BEFORE I HURT YOU AALIYA!!!
Aaliya looked at Zain helplessly. His eyes were fuming with anger. She couldn't imagine she once loved this man, although still loves him. Tears formed her eyes as she felt the whole world shattering in front of her eyes. Suddenly she felt alone. No one with her. No one she could turn on to. She quietly walked out of the hospital. She knew she can not return back to her ammi abbu as to what they would have to face. What will she tell them? How will they answer the whole society? No she couldn't return back to Bhopal. She has to live alone.
On the other hand Zain regretted what he had said. But he pushed the feeling away. HIS FATHER WAS DEAD FOR GODS SAKE. He cant think of anything else right now. It was time to be practical.
3 MONTHS LATER.
Zain had become a total workaholic and started drinking to reduce the pain of losing his love of life along with his father. He cursed himself everyday for shouting like that to Aaliya. How could he? How could he yell at her like that? Didn't she loose her uncle? Didn't she lose anything?
He came back home. No one used to be home. Their were no sitting together dinners. All of them would either eat outside or eat in their room. They just met in the driveway while going out of the house. But they didn't interact with each other at all. Fahad tried to talk to Zain sometimes but he was always drunk except mornings.
He removed his shoes. Grabbed a bottle and drank it all. He didn't change and laid back on the bed.
Zain: Aaliya-
Each day he would miss Aaliya. He drank to reduce the pain. His overgrown beard and unmade hair made him look like a party animal. He got up and to take out his frustration started to break things. Pushing them off the table. Suddenly a note fall out of a box which was Aaliya's. Zain opened the note. Although he couldn't see clearly but somehow managed to read it.
The note said:
sorry zain. Jaanti hoon mujhse ghuusa bahaut hoge. Aur ho bhi kyun na? Tumhe bina bataye chali gyi. Zain meine tumhe bas yeh batane ke liye yeh chitti likhi hai ki mei hamesha sirf aur sirf tumse hi pyaar kiya hai. Mujhe pta hai ki mamu ke jaane ke baad tum bilkul pagal ho jaoge. Mei bhi ho jaoongi Zain. Meine tumhare bina kabhi jeena nahi sikha na. Aaj tumne mujhe nikal ko kaha mei toh mei aaj hi ja rhi hoon. Par Zain ek baat ka dukh hamesha rahega. Kaash mei tumhara mamu ka na hone ka gum mita sakti. Kaash mei hamesha tumhare saath tumhari himmat ban ke reh skti. Par sorry Zain mei aaj yaha se jaana hi padega. Aur ek aur cheez tumhe batana chahti thi. Par tum sunane ke halat mei nahi the. Meine koi planning nahi kri thi Zain. Meine mamu ko isliye office bheja tha taaki who tumhara office dekh ske jo meine tumhare liye design kiya tha. Kaah meine tumhe aaj hi bta diya hota. Par kya Karun? Todhi pagal hoon na. Sorry Zain. Please apna khayal rkhna. Aur kuch galat kaam mt krna. Please apni nahi toh meri khatir drink krna mat shuru kr dena. Waapis nahi aa paungi shayad se. Aur na hi ammi abbu ke paas jaa paungi. Unhe kitne logo ka samna krna padega. Sorry Zain. Par shayad se tumhe mujhse bhi accha jeevan saathi mile. Jo tumhara acche se khayal rkhe. Aur haan phirse who purine waale Zain mat ban jaane. Aur ek baat zarur yaad rkhna. Mai tumse pyaar krti thi, karti hoon, and humesha humesha karungi.
Tumhari Aaliya.
Zain felt his eyes teary. After so many days he had felt human. He had no emotions on his otherwise. He crushed the paper in his hand. And fall on the bed hugging a picture of her.
Next morning.
Next morning Zain woke up. He saw the picture of her and hugged it again. He sat up. Then decided. HE HAD TO BRING AALIYA BACK. He was really a a*s h**e to let her go like that. But now it was time to bring her back. It was time to bring Aaliya back.
He called up Shabana first.
Shabana: hello.
Zain: hello.
Shabana: Zain my child. How are you? How is Aaliya?
Even phups doesn't know where Aaliya is? he thought.
Shabana: Zain are you there?
Zain: yes yes phups. Phups does Aaliya call you?
Shabana: yes very often beta. Why?
Zain: is she okay?
Shabana: what are you saying Zain? Isnt she with u?
Zain: ya. um. She is. Phups mom is calling. I will talk to you later.
Shabana: okay beta. Khuda afiz.
Zain to himself: Sorry Aaliya. Meine tumhare saath bahaut bura kiya. Par ab tum kaha ho?
He hit his hand on the wall. Then cupped his hand in his other as it had started bleeding. He ignored it and thought as to where she might have went.
To be continued.
Now people I know Farhan sir has made it clear that their is gonna be no separation for a long time to come but this is just my view. Anyone who has problem with it can tell me by pm or just post it here. This is just my view of the story. Hope you all liked it.
Thanks a lot for reading.
And I know this one is a bit sad.
But would try to make next one romantic.
Okay buh-bye. 😃
Aaliya and Zain were waiting outside the ICU. Surraiya along with the others came in the hospital worriedly. Fahad had told both his wives to stay home. Chand khala was taking care of the house. Zain was in Aaliya's embrace which angered Surraiya even more. She hated that girl. And somewhere she knew that it was Aaliya who did all this. She was too angry on her. Zain had burst out into tears while Aaliya was hugging him to control and console him. Surraiya went up to Zain and kept a sympathetic hand on his shoulder.
Zain: mom?
Surraiya: how is Osman sahb?
Zain: mom dad is not well. The doctors are saying he had a asthma attack a lot serious one.
Surraiya: what?
Zain: Fahad bhai?
Fahad: what?
Zain: take mom home. Me and Aaliya are here we will take care of everything.
Surraiya: its all because of you.
Surraiya said pointing towards Aaliya who was crying. Surraiya wasn't angry that much but because she was in trauma of Osman's health. Aaliya looked up along with Zain.
Zain: mom-
he was about to say but Surraiya cut him.
Surraiya: Zain Aaliya is the one who is responsible for all this.
Zain: no mom you are having another misunderstanding. Why would Aaliya want to kill her own uncle?
Aaliya: mami.
Surraiya: Zain why don't you ever listen to me. She is trapping you Zain. She and her whole family.
Zain: mom that's not it. Why would Aaliya do that?
Surraiya: exactly Zain. I am also thinking why did she do that?
Zain: mom-
Surraiya: Zain. She called Osman sahb to the office. We were sitting in the room and she came in and asked Osman to go to the office for only 15 minutes. This was all her plan Zain. She trapped you so that no one in the house could come in her way. She knew you would always support her no matter what after she played this so much in love game with you.
Just then doctors came out. Zain rushed to them.
Doctor: we are very sorry Mr. Abdullah. We lost him.
The whole world shattered. The ground beneath Zain's feet slipped. The whole world turned black. Tears formed his eyes. His mind stopped working. His breath stopped. He felt his eyes closing and his view blurring with tears. He felt a hand on his left arm. It was Aaliya. A thought ran up his mind and he pushed the hand away. Aaliya was shocked by this. He turned around. His eyes were completely red.
Zain: why did you do this?
Aaliya: Zain-
Zain: why did you this Aaliya?
He shouted this time. Aaliya got scared. He had never shouted at her before. Even when they hated each other.
Aaliya: Zain please give me a chance to explain-
Zain: what would you explain dammit! MY FATHER IS DEAD!!!!
Aaliya: Zain I didn't-
Zain: GET OUT!!!
Aaliya: Zain-
Zain: GET OUT BEFORE I HURT YOU AALIYA!!!
Aaliya looked at Zain helplessly. His eyes were fuming with anger. She couldn't imagine she once loved this man, although still loves him. Tears formed her eyes as she felt the whole world shattering in front of her eyes. Suddenly she felt alone. No one with her. No one she could turn on to. She quietly walked out of the hospital. She knew she can not return back to her ammi abbu as to what they would have to face. What will she tell them? How will they answer the whole society? No she couldn't return back to Bhopal. She has to live alone.
On the other hand Zain regretted what he had said. But he pushed the feeling away. HIS FATHER WAS DEAD FOR GODS SAKE. He cant think of anything else right now. It was time to be practical.
3 MONTHS LATER.
Zain had become a total workaholic and started drinking to reduce the pain of losing his love of life along with his father. He cursed himself everyday for shouting like that to Aaliya. How could he? How could he yell at her like that? Didn't she loose her uncle? Didn't she lose anything?
He came back home. No one used to be home. Their were no sitting together dinners. All of them would either eat outside or eat in their room. They just met in the driveway while going out of the house. But they didn't interact with each other at all. Fahad tried to talk to Zain sometimes but he was always drunk except mornings.
He removed his shoes. Grabbed a bottle and drank it all. He didn't change and laid back on the bed.
Zain: Aaliya-
Each day he would miss Aaliya. He drank to reduce the pain. His overgrown beard and unmade hair made him look like a party animal. He got up and to take out his frustration started to break things. Pushing them off the table. Suddenly a note fall out of a box which was Aaliya's. Zain opened the note. Although he couldn't see clearly but somehow managed to read it.
The note said:
sorry zain. Jaanti hoon mujhse ghuusa bahaut hoge. Aur ho bhi kyun na? Tumhe bina bataye chali gyi. Zain meine tumhe bas yeh batane ke liye yeh chitti likhi hai ki mei hamesha sirf aur sirf tumse hi pyaar kiya hai. Mujhe pta hai ki mamu ke jaane ke baad tum bilkul pagal ho jaoge. Mei bhi ho jaoongi Zain. Meine tumhare bina kabhi jeena nahi sikha na. Aaj tumne mujhe nikal ko kaha mei toh mei aaj hi ja rhi hoon. Par Zain ek baat ka dukh hamesha rahega. Kaash mei tumhara mamu ka na hone ka gum mita sakti. Kaash mei hamesha tumhare saath tumhari himmat ban ke reh skti. Par sorry Zain mei aaj yaha se jaana hi padega. Aur ek aur cheez tumhe batana chahti thi. Par tum sunane ke halat mei nahi the. Meine koi planning nahi kri thi Zain. Meine mamu ko isliye office bheja tha taaki who tumhara office dekh ske jo meine tumhare liye design kiya tha. Kaah meine tumhe aaj hi bta diya hota. Par kya Karun? Todhi pagal hoon na. Sorry Zain. Please apna khayal rkhna. Aur kuch galat kaam mt krna. Please apni nahi toh meri khatir drink krna mat shuru kr dena. Waapis nahi aa paungi shayad se. Aur na hi ammi abbu ke paas jaa paungi. Unhe kitne logo ka samna krna padega. Sorry Zain. Par shayad se tumhe mujhse bhi accha jeevan saathi mile. Jo tumhara acche se khayal rkhe. Aur haan phirse who purine waale Zain mat ban jaane. Aur ek baat zarur yaad rkhna. Mai tumse pyaar krti thi, karti hoon, and humesha humesha karungi.
Tumhari Aaliya.
Zain felt his eyes teary. After so many days he had felt human. He had no emotions on his otherwise. He crushed the paper in his hand. And fall on the bed hugging a picture of her.
Next morning.
Next morning Zain woke up. He saw the picture of her and hugged it again. He sat up. Then decided. HE HAD TO BRING AALIYA BACK. He was really a a*s h**e to let her go like that. But now it was time to bring her back. It was time to bring Aaliya back.
He called up Shabana first.
Shabana: hello.
Zain: hello.
Shabana: Zain my child. How are you? How is Aaliya?
Even phups doesn't know where Aaliya is? he thought.
Shabana: Zain are you there?
Zain: yes yes phups. Phups does Aaliya call you?
Shabana: yes very often beta. Why?
Zain: is she okay?
Shabana: what are you saying Zain? Isnt she with u?
Zain: ya. um. She is. Phups mom is calling. I will talk to you later.
Shabana: okay beta. Khuda afiz.
Zain to himself: Sorry Aaliya. Meine tumhare saath bahaut bura kiya. Par ab tum kaha ho?
He hit his hand on the wall. Then cupped his hand in his other as it had started bleeding. He ignored it and thought as to where she might have went.
To be continued.
Now people I know Farhan sir has made it clear that their is gonna be no separation for a long time to come but this is just my view. Anyone who has problem with it can tell me by pm or just post it here. This is just my view of the story. Hope you all liked it.
Thanks a lot for reading.
And I know this one is a bit sad.
But would try to make next one romantic.
Okay buh-bye. 😃
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