zaya ss: if i were you. Chapter 5, Page 9, 10th JAN - Page 2

hi sorry for the mistakes. I updated from my phone so I did some mistakes. So I have corrected them all. Hope you all didn't mind. 😳 😳

Superb update
Continue soon please and please pm me

Updaaattteee pleaseee 😊 😊 😭

Hey Tanya...
Do update soon...
U r really such a great writer...
😃 😃 😃
Dying to read next part...
U have really killed me by writing such beautiful os...
I have one line to say" haye Tanya Teri writings ne to mar Darla"... 👍🏼

Originally posted by: humiri

Hey Tanya...
Do update soon...
U r really such a great writer...
😃 😃 😃
Dying to read next part...
U have really killed me by writing such beautiful os...
I have one line to say" haye Tanya Teri writings ne to mar Darla"... 👍🏼

Thanks a lot Priya.
You are really awesome too.
Sacchi maar dala? Then how did you comment? 😆
Chalo that's awesome you liked it.
Keep commenting and liking my works.
I will update by Wednesday.
Sorry a bit busy till Wednesday have my coaching and studies.
Thanks a lot for the comment. 😳

Hey people.
I am here to tell you people that next update will be on Wednesday.
Since my coaching is starting I will update on Wednesday only.
I will have coaching on Monday, Tuesday, and Thursday.
So I will still have 4 days.
Hope you all don't mind. *hides behind the sofa*
Thanks a lot. 🤢

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

Thanks a lot Priya.
You are really awesome too.
Sacchi maar dala? Then how did you comment? 😆
Chalo that's awesome you liked it.
Keep commenting and liking my works.
I will update by Wednesday.
Sorry a bit busy till Wednesday have my coaching and studies.
Thanks a lot for the comment. 😳

It's OK...
I will be waiting for ur update...

Hi people I am back with another part to my ss. As I told you people earlier I had my coaching today and I am back but still have to study. I was just going through your comments and realized that you all wanted me to update fast an quick. So here you go with the next update:

Zain was punching the punching bag to take out his frustration. He didn't himself knew what got him so frustrated. Suddenly he got a call from a unknown number.
Zain: hello?
The person however didn't reply.
Zain: who is this?
The person didn't reply again. However this time Zain didn't lost his cool. He silently waited for the person to reply. But all he was hearing was silence. Suddenly he heard a cry. It took him one minute to realise that it was Aaliya.
Zain: AALIYA? AALIYA WHERE ARE YOU?? ARE YOU OKAY?? HELLO?? HELLO?
But she cut the phone. Zain however tracked the phone call and came to know that the call was from Manali. On getting further information he got to know it was from an orphanage. Aaliya spent the most difficult phase of her life alone. After she left Barkat Villa. She knew she didn't have anyone to hold on to. She was alone in this world. No one to call hers and no one she could to right now. Even her love had bailed on her. She hated herself for leaving him like that and letting him be alone when he needed her the most. But she also knew that it would be better if they would stay away from each other right now. Because at this time they could take out there frustration in a not so healthy way. So she left. She knew she cant go back to Bhopal. She also knew that she has to now find a living for herself. She took a bus which she didn't herself knew where was it heading. She didn't have enough money with her too. Fortunately a kind mother saw her crying like that. She went up to her and asked her the problem. Aaliya without hesitating told everything to her. She kept a sympathy hand on her shoulder and told her she could come and work as a teacher in the orphanage. Aaliya went to Manali with her.

Zain left for manali the very next day. He wanted to know if Aaliya was fine. If she was alive. But of course she was she had called her after all. Nothing bad will have happened to her he tried to reassure himself. Finally he took a flight which landed near a place to manali. It was still a 100 km left so he decided to go by car rather than taking a train.(my apologies as I have never went there I don't know much about the distance and all). He reached there the next day as he had been driving throughout the night. He finally reached the address. He looked at the place. It was located at the top and was full of snow. He grabbed his jacket and stepped out of the car. He opened the door and it was fully heated inside. It was like a cute little cottage. It was very cozy inside and so he took of his jacket and went inside. Suddenly he heard the giggling of the children from a room. He went inside and saw the most mesmerizing view. The view he had been dying to see all these months. IT WAS AALIYA! He went further inside the room and closed the door back to its position. Aaliya was laughing among the kids. He walked near her. Aaliya looked up. She saw him. She saw ZAIN. She had been dying to see those eyes for days. She would cry each night in the memory of him. She knew Osman was dead. But he looked so weak she noticed. His overgrown beard and unmade hair made him look like an animal. She got up from her seat and walked over to him. Still shell-shocked. She walked near him and cupped his face within her hands. He held those hands by keeping his hands over hers. Both had tears in their eyes.
Zain: AALIYA..
Aaliya: ZAIN...
Both smiled then hugged each other as tightly as they could. After a while they parted. A kid reached Aaliya and pulled her dupatta to make her look at him. She broke the hug and kneeled down and the kid whispered something in her ear which made Aaliya smile. She kissed the kids cheek and told him to go back and join the others.
Zain: I am so sorry.
Aaliya: No Zain it isn't your fault. Its all mine. And you had the full right to shout at me that day.
Zain: no I didn't. I was a dumb loser. The loser who made you cry and live alone at the most difficult phrase of your life. Are you okay?
He cupped her face within his hands. She cupped his face too again in tears.
Aaliya: what has happened to you though? Why do you look so weak and what is with this stubble and hair.
She said by touching the hair. Trying to make it right. But it would just flaunt back. Zain smiled but then the smile disappeared Aaliya got confused. Zain hugged her again. She hugged him back too.

To be continued.
Hope you liked their meeting.
DO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS AND LIKES OTHERWISE NO UPDATES!!!
That's a warning. 😆
Hope you all liked it.
It brought tears to my eyes as well.
Though it was very emotional I hope you all liked it.
Thanks a lot. 😳

Another rocking update from u...
Finally they met...
Emotional but a good one...
again I want to use that line which I used in my previous comment...
Well u know it 😆 😆 😆
Update soon..
Will be waiting for the update dear... 👏 👏
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