FF: Only If I heard you calling out to me. (Chapter 7 UPDATED pg 21)

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simran422

@simran422

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Another well written update!
Very engaging story!

You are an awesome writer!

Update soon!

thank you very much for the PM 😊

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.sasha

@.sasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Hey !!

It's wonderful !

I just wished zain to react like that wen aaliya was requesting him to listen to her 😭

But no probs as at least he tried to instill some sense into his moms head 😆

I would love to read more

Continue soon😃

Sasha !!

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Nandini

@cupcaked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

its awesome...
bechara zain... beautifully written...
it brought tears in my eyes...
its a good thing bobby is arrested...
plzzz continue soon...
and if u cn plz pm me when u update...
thanks a lot...
:)

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LiveLifeInBliss

@LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: zainaliya-12
It was really amazing, I really hope aliya is ok, please add some hospital romance too. And thank u so much for the pm.

thank you 😳 and your welcome😛

ooh hospital romance...i will do my best.😳

thanks for the suggestion.😃

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LiveLifeInBliss

@LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: simran422
Another well written update!
Very engaging story!
You are an awesome writer!
Update soon!
thank you very much for the PM 😊

thank you so much, glad u liked it 😳

and ur welcome.😊

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LiveLifeInBliss

@LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: .sasha
Hey !!
It's wonderful !

I just wished zain to react like that wen aaliya was requesting him to listen to her 😭
But no probs as at least he tried to instill some sense into his moms head 😆

I would love to read more
Continue soon😃

Sasha !!

Thank you 😳

will do my best to update. probably sometime during the weekend..let's see.😊

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LiveLifeInBliss

@LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: zaya15
its awesome...
bechara zain... beautifully written...
it brought tears in my eyes...
its a good thing bobby is arrested...
plzzz continue soon...
and if u cn plz pm me when u update...
thanks a lot...
:)

thank you so much.😳

will definitely pm you as you requested.

i'll take longer to update this time around but i'll try to make it up by giving you all a zaya scene.😃

Hopefully I'll be able to live up to it.

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vinu

@vinu127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

just read both the parts..

so glad show me aisa nahi hua

and very happy that u wrote this POV

it was so very well written dear

i loved it..

totally loved it

esp zain's thoughts and actions we very well written

do continue soon :)

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LiveLifeInBliss

@LiveLifeInBliss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: vinu127
just read both the parts..
so glad show me aisa nahi hua
and very happy that u wrote this POV
it was so very well written dear
i loved it..
totally loved it
esp zain's thoughts and actions we very well written
do continue soon :)

thank you very much vinu 😳

lol am glad this didn't happen in the show as well, i would go into serious depression.😭

I only had the heart to write this when I was sure that Zain would never do this in the show.😆

will do my best to update soon.