Dreams and Desires (Zaya+Rishbala) Part 6 posted [25/09] *PM's Later* - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humzy

wow lovely update

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Posted: 11 years ago
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DreamsAndDesires!

At Aliya's Place

"Madhu never gives me time to think.." Aliya says to herself, shaking her head in a disapproving manner.

Aliya goes to the garden to find her mom standing there lost in thoughts.

"Ammi" Aliya says nervously braking Shavana's train of thoughts.

Shabana turns to her with a smile and gently asks her, "Yes dear?"

"Mom.. that.. actually.." Aliya stammers not knowing what to say.

"Why are you stammering? Say whatever you want I won't be angry.." Shaban assures her.

"Mom.." Aliya tries to come up with perfect words.

"Ya?" Shabana tells her calmly.

"Ammi can I accompany Madhu to Mumbai please.." Aliya says in a single breath.
"What?" Shabans asks her shocked and confused.

"Actually Madhu's designs have been selected at the fashion week and for that she has to go to mumbai.." Aliya tells her nervously

Shabana thinks for some time and finally says, "You can go Aliya but when are you leaving? When will you return back?"

"Wo.. Ammi.. Tommorow morning at 2 am.." Aliya stammers again.

"WHAT?" Shaban says unable to hide her shock.

"Mom.." Aliya tries to talk to her.

Shabana asks her straight, "When will you two come back?"

"In a few months.." Aiya says trying to gauge her reaction.

Shabana keeps quiet.

"Ammi please! Remember the other day you had promised me to give me whatever I want.. So could you please allow me to go there?" Aliya says trying to get a positive reply from her.

Shabana calmly tells her, "Dear we had recently received a nice marriage proposal for you.."

"Don't tell me even you are like Madhu's parents? Aliyua asks shocked

"Why? What happened?" Shabana asks her confused.

"Mom even they are hell bent on marrying her.." Aliya says sadly.

Shabana tells her calmly, "But I am not hell bent on marrying you off .. I will never force you for it!"

Aliya says happily, "Thanks mama! You are the best!"

"Hmm.. You can go!" Shabana tells her slowly.

"Oh My God!! Thank You!! But dad.." Aliya says excited and even though she was shocked that her Mom agreed so easily.

Shabana sarcastically says, "Arre wah!! Koyi dekho toh sahi iss nautanki ko! Tum toh janti hi ho ki tumhare abbu tumhe kabhi kisi cheez ke liye mana nahi karte hai phir bhi shakal aisi bana rakhi hai jaise ki bahut badi afat ayi ho.. Nautanki! (Someone look at this gimmick! You very well know that your dad never says no to you for anything but you are making a face as if you are stuck in a big problem! Drama queen!)

Both Aliya and Shabana laugh..
Aliya hugs her mom and plants a kiss on her cheek and runs away to give the happy news to Madhu..

Shabana is standing there still and her eyes get teary..

Shabana slowly says, "Allah mein usse kese bata sakti hu wo sab.. Mere mein itni himmat nahi ki mein usse tutte hue dekhu.. Iske liye acha hi rahega agar woh yaha se dur jaye.." (God how can I tell her all that stuff? I can't see her break down.. It will be good for her to go far from here..)

At Aliya's room -
Aliya calls up Madhu but Madhu does not pick up..

"Ab isse kya hua?(Now what happened to her?)" Aliya wonders.

Back to Malik Mansion -

Madhu was standing at her door.. She closes her eyes trying to build up her confidence and knocks at the door..

Madhu hesitantly asks, "Can I come in?"

"Beta come in.. you don't need to ask.." Lady asks her to come in.

Madhu goes inside and sits beside her..

The lady gently caresses Madhu's head and asks her, "So my princess is upset with the Marriage fiasco right?"

Madhu nods her head and says, "Ya dadi but I have something more to tell you.."
Kanthi gently asks her to continue, "Carry on my princess..."

Madhu closes her eyes and says in a single breath,"Dadi I am running away.."

"WHAT?" Kanthi asks her thoroughly shocked.

Madhu tells her everything about the phone call..

Kanthi holds Madhu's hand and says, "I am happy for you darling.. I won't stop you.. Today I want to give you something.."

Kanthi removes her beloved necklace and hands it over to Madhu..

Madhu gently denies it saying, "No dadi you only wear this.. It looks the best on you.."
Kanthi says in a sad tone, "You won't even take this from me.. ohk.."

Madhu laughs at her Dadi's antics which were much similar to her and says in a mischievous tone, "Ohh my nautanki dadi give me that necklace but don't ask that back from me!"

Kanthi also laughs and playfully hits Madhu's back, "Hahaha Badmaaash.. Jaa ab bag pack kar jaa.. (Go and pack your bag) And ha whenever you miss me see this necklace it will always keep us connected."

Madhu kisses her beloved dadi on her cheek and her dadi returns the same.
After some time Madhu goes back to her room and checks her mobile..

At Aliya's place
Aliya is thinking how her Mom agreed so fast.. A part of her felt that something was definitely wrong.

Aliya's phone rings and she ignores it but finally picks it up..

"Hello Alu?" Madhu says waiting for her to respond.

"Hmm..."

"Koi mujhse naraz hai kya?(Is someone angry with me?)" Madhu asks her slowly.

"Nahi toh..(No)" Aliya says straightly.

Madhu sweetly says, "Sorryyy"

Aliya gives up saying, "Mein tujhse kabhi naraz reh hi nahi pati.. hunhh.. kitne calls kiye maine (I can never stay angry with you.. hunhh.. how many times did I call you?")

Madhu tries to defend herself, "Arre wo.."

Aliya cuts her off and happily says, "Ahh.. Let it be... its okay! You know what!? Mom agreed!! Yippie!!!"

Madhu asks confused, "What? She agreed? Are you sure?"

Aliya excitedly shouts, "HAAN!!! (Yes)"

Madhu smirks and tells her in a challenging tone, "Great Alu!! As it is you had promised me so you had to come either ways."

Aliya changes the topic, "You packed your bags"

Madhu answers, "Nope, what about you?"

"I am doing that right now, anyways you booked the tickets right?" Aliya asks her.

Madhu shocked remembers she had not yet booked the tickets and tries to come up with an excuse, "Umm.. wohh.."

Aliya asks her shocked, "Don't tell me that you forgot to book the tickets!"

Madhu tries to make up, "Umm.. you don't worry I will handle everything!"

"You sure?" Aliya asks her wondering how she would get things done.

"Double sure!" Madhu says relieved.

"Okay talk to you later then.." Aliya says.

"Bye!"

"Bye!"

Precap - Madhu is sad and Aliya is trying to cheer her up..



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Hi guyz! I am really sorry for the late update! Do like and comment! 😊


Edited by drashtifan1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Awesome update , continue soon , cant wait for ZaYa
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm update
Loved it
Wonder wat aaliya's mum meant
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update😊
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Superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Part 4


Madhu gets up and calls Nikhil..

Nikhil nervously says, "Hello Madhu?"

Madhu hurriedly says, "Hello Nik!! Listen please book business class flight tickets for me and Alu to Mumbai for tomorrow at 2am!!"

Nikhil shocked asks, "WHAT?"

"Nikhil please.. Its urgent!!" Madhu says pleadingly

"How will I book tickets in such a short span of time??" Nikhil asks her at his wits end.

"Please Nik do something! Please!!" Madhu requests him.

Nikhil sighs, "Okay.. I will call you as soon as I will book your tickets!!"

Madhu happily jumps and says, "Thanks a ton Nikhil!! You are so sweet!! Bye!"


Madhu cuts the call without waiting for his reply..


At Nikhil's place

Nikhil dreamily looks at Madhu's pic he has in his wallet and the words "Thanks a ton Nikhil!! You are so sweet!!" are constantly playing in his mind..

He is jerked out of his thoughts when his elder brother shakes him up..

Rahul irritated says, "Nik!! I am asking you are you coming out for dinner? Dad wants to go out for a family dinner!"

Nikhil registers his words slowly and replies, "Hunh? No.. Nope! You guyz go I am not feeling good.."

"Are you sure Nik?" Rahul asks him confused, Nikhil was a foodie and he knew it.

Nikhil says, "Very sure! Now you guys continue!"

Rahul leaves and Nikhil sighs in relief..

Nikhil closes his wallet and says, "Good he never saw this pic"

Nikhil leaves to make arrangements for Madhu's and Aliya's tickets..


At 1:am Madhu's phone rings and she picks up..

"Hello Nik?" Madhu asks expecting a positive reply.

"Erm.. Madhu.." Nikhil nervously starts

"You booked tickets right?" Madhu asks getting worried.

"Umm.."

"Answer me! You booked the tickets right?" Madhu says in a demanding tone.

"Yes.. but..." Nikhil stammers, knowing very well Madhu would be upset soon.

"But what?" Madhu asks him confused.

"No flight ticket was available so.." Nikhil says nervously.

Madhu gets panicked now and cuts him off, " So What?"

"So.. So I booked train tickets for you!" Nikhil finishes off in a single breath.

"WHAT??"

"Ar.." Nikhil starts only to be cut off again.

"You think I will go via train? TRAIN?" Madhu asks him.. As she belonged to a very rich family, she had been provided with all the luxuries since her childhood. Never in her dreams had she thought she would ever have to travel by train. Egoistic as it may seem, it was not, it was just the shock and the nervousness of doing things that were out of her comfort level.

"Madhu chill down please... This was the only option.." Nikhil tries to calm her down.

Finally accepting that she had to travel by train she sighs and says, "Fine! Give me the details.."


Madhu calls Aliya and tells her everything

Aliya laughs at her childishness and says, "Aww.. itz okey na re! Whats wrong in traveling by train?"

Madhu tries to cover up, "Ahh... Leave it now.. (makes a sad tone and adds) And the time is 4am and not 2am.."

Aliya teases Madhu, "So it seems that my best friend is upset.."

Madhu makes a sad tone and says, "Very!"

"You remember that day Madhu?" Aliya asks her suddenly excited.

"Which day?" Madhu asks confused.

"When Sameer had proposed me?"

Madhu bursts into laughter and says, "Ohh that! Yeah I very well remember!! That was soo funny.. He had stolen a bouquet of flowers and the vendor was running behind him like crazy.. And then he had slipped after keeping his foot on water and fell right at your feet.."

"And the bucket of red paint I was holding fell right on his face" Aliya adds in.

"And even after that he raised the spoiled bouquet up and said "Aliya! I Love You soo much!! Will you marry me?" Madhu continues.

"And then Simmi, his girlfriend came and rushed to him and said "Baby you did not got hurt right! So much blood? Saying which she had fainted." Aliya ends.

Madhu now dreamily says, "I wish I could know what happened when she was revived.."

Aliya asks her shocked, "You don't know?"

"No.. You know?"

Aliya proceeds to tell her, "Yeah! When Simmi came back to consciousness Sameer told her what had happened leaving the proposal part and Simmi was saying - Wow! How nice a boyfriend I have got! Thank You God! Even after she dropped paint on your face, you instead of getting angry became friendly with her by raising a bouquet of red roses to her"

Madhu laughs aloud and continues, "She actually said that!? What a nutcase she is!! Anyone can actually cheat behind her back and she will know nothing!"

Aliya laughs too and then continues, "Sameer was banging his head to the wall at her antics.. Guess what.. It was a dare for him to propose me!"

"I just can't seem to stop laughing.. I don't understand what kind of dare it was!?" Madhu says in between her laughter.

"Trust me, me neither! So now you are happy?" Aliya asks happily that Madhu's mood had lightened.

Madhu happily says, "Very!"

Aliya smiles and says, "Great!"


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Precap - Aliya fighting with a handsome guy!

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Hi!! Do forgive me for the late update! Please like and comment!

Edited by drashtifan1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks!!! 😃

Originally posted by: Humzy

Awsm update

Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon



Thanksss!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
awesome update please continue soon...😉

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