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Here's my take on the beach scene (sort of a how it should've happened)
Continues from when Aliya and Zain sit on the table and she feeds him sheer khorma.
"Kya Hua?" Aliya asked Zain as he stared at her.
Zain smiles and replies, "Tumhari aankhein, kitna sach bolti hain. jab kisi ki aankhon main jhaankti hain toh kehna mushqil ho jaata hai. Aur jab tum muskarathi ho to lagta hai ke zaroor kahin kuch acha hua hoga.Sakoon milta hai ke din bekaar nahin jayega, khushi hoti hai tumhe kush dekh kar"
Aliya blushing strokes her hand to push her bangs away from her face. Zain grabs her hand. Aliya surprised looks at Zain. They both stare into each others eyes. Zain's glance wanders for a second to his right and he notices a white horse running at full speed towards the table. Zain doesn't take a second to think. "Oh shoot!". He jumps from his seat and runs out of the away stumbling through the sand.
By the time Aliya notices its too late, the horse stampedes right into the table flipping it and everything on it over. Aliya ducks. The sheer khorma and drinks spilling almost calculatedly on top of her.
Comments and feedback below first drabble for BI (or ever I think 😆). Just a hillarious thought triggered in my mind after reading BlueEyes post and this was the result.
Let me know if you liked it and whether you would like more things like this in the future.
Continues from when Aliya and Zain sit on the table and she feeds him sheer khorma.
"Kya Hua?" Aliya asked Zain as he stared at her.
Zain smiles and replies, "Tumhari aankhein, kitna sach bolti hain. jab kisi ki aankhon main jhaankti hain toh kehna mushqil ho jaata hai. Aur jab tum muskarathi ho to lagta hai ke zaroor kahin kuch acha hua hoga.Sakoon milta hai ke din bekaar nahin jayega, khushi hoti hai tumhe kush dekh kar"
Aliya blushing strokes her hand to push her bangs away from her face. Zain grabs her hand. Aliya surprised looks at Zain. They both stare into each others eyes. Zain's glance wanders for a second to his right and he notices a white horse running at full speed towards the table. Zain doesn't take a second to think. "Oh shoot!". He jumps from his seat and runs out of the away stumbling through the sand.
By the time Aliya notices its too late, the horse stampedes right into the table flipping it and everything on it over. Aliya ducks. The sheer khorma and drinks spilling almost calculatedly on top of her.
Aliya gets up, her hair and her dress ruined. Aliya was fuming. Zain looks over at her, once the horse was out of sight, trying to suppress his laughter, but unable to hold it in, he burst out laughing.
The drive home started off in complete silence. Zain was the first to speak "Mamu ki bhanji kya hua, date pe mazaa nahin aaya? Mujhe tumhara pata nahin, magar main ye yaqeen se keh sakta hoon ke ye meri sab se yaadgar date rahe gi". He grinned. Aliya glared at Zain. "MashAllah tum ghussay se ghoorti hui kitni khoobsurat lagti ho".
"Mr. Zain Abdullah, tum mujhe chor ke, khud apne aap ko bachane ke liye bhag gaye, phir jab mere upar sari cheezain gir gayeen to tum has paray, idiot." She punched him the arm.
"Woh kya hai ke tum bohot cute lag rahi thi apni balon mein sheer khorma ke saath". Aliya lost it and started hitting him. In the process of Zain protecting himself the car started swerving and almost crashed before Zain regained control. "Mamu ki bhanji agar tumhe ghar sahi salamat pohonchna hai toh bakki ki larhai ghar ke liye bachake rakhna, please". He smiled, she huffed in anger and with that they continued their drive home.
The drive home started off in complete silence. Zain was the first to speak "Mamu ki bhanji kya hua, date pe mazaa nahin aaya? Mujhe tumhara pata nahin, magar main ye yaqeen se keh sakta hoon ke ye meri sab se yaadgar date rahe gi". He grinned. Aliya glared at Zain. "MashAllah tum ghussay se ghoorti hui kitni khoobsurat lagti ho".
"Mr. Zain Abdullah, tum mujhe chor ke, khud apne aap ko bachane ke liye bhag gaye, phir jab mere upar sari cheezain gir gayeen to tum has paray, idiot." She punched him the arm.
"Woh kya hai ke tum bohot cute lag rahi thi apni balon mein sheer khorma ke saath". Aliya lost it and started hitting him. In the process of Zain protecting himself the car started swerving and almost crashed before Zain regained control. "Mamu ki bhanji agar tumhe ghar sahi salamat pohonchna hai toh bakki ki larhai ghar ke liye bachake rakhna, please". He smiled, she huffed in anger and with that they continued their drive home.
Comments and feedback below first drabble for BI (or ever I think 😆). Just a hillarious thought triggered in my mind after reading BlueEyes post and this was the result.
Let me know if you liked it and whether you would like more things like this in the future.