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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Their hang out or date was pretty nice and beautiful. They acted like a teenagers and sometimes like kids.
Eye locks are getting frequent and long too. Their chemistry is getting intense and interesting.
Looking forward to read about the party.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome ZaYalicious Update..Wow Choclate Ice Cream...

I seriously want these scenes after they fall in love...!!!

Waiting for next part Sis
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was such a cute update😳 LOL they are acting like kids with the icecream and then like themselves with their eyelocks, loved the kids reaction😆
Cant wait for the next one
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update dear !! 👏
Awww...Zain touching Aliya's cheek !! ☺️☺️
N I want a pm from me so maine buddy request bheji hai !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
By the time she was done, Aliya's lower face was covered in chocolate ice cream.

Zain tenderly wiped the ice-cream from her chin and nose and they looked into each other's eye, each mirroring the other's image. They stayed there for some time until a small kid came by and started laughing.

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update.zaya was so cute.thanks for pm.update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update 😊
Thanks for the pm and continue soon!
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jenny_sms

Awesome parts

Sorry Iam not able to comment busy hoon yaar but now I'll comment regularly promise...

It's okay! :D
Ab zarur karna haan! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update

Their hang out or date was pretty nice and beautiful. They acted like a teenagers and sometimes like kids. LOL, yeah 😆
Eye locks are getting frequent and long too. Their chemistry is getting intense and interesting. Thank god! I thought you guys were bored of the eye-locks 😆
Looking forward to read about the party. Aayega, aayega ;)

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Kyara.95

Hi :)

This is the first time I am commenting on this thread!
Actually, I had this drabble bookmarked since very long but read the whole of it just right now. 😳 Thank you! :)

Honestly, I really enjoyed reading it till the part when Aliya was taking a bath and Zain barged in the washroom not knowing of her presence inside.

But ...

After that one, this got boring from the clothes wala prank. 😕 I didn't have the intention of dragging it as much but due to the response, I took it for some more time. :) Next time, please do tell me if you don't like it :)

Now, I wan't you to pen down some romantic scenes between them, Please!.
I mean common girl .. it's their HONEYMOON after all and they have been living alone in that suite since many days now. You have to bring them close!! Physically and emotionally, Both!. As I said, it will begin in Day 10. I already have something in mind and all this is just a filler leading up to the party. :)

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