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well this is my very first attempt on writing anything mostly i am just on reading... m so new to this india forum not very sure how to use it but still m trying. hope you people will like this😊
and sorry for my English 😔

this fiction starts after sarkar hit poonam from dandaa (22 feb 2016)

Unfulfilled desire
Poonam came back to outhouse so much lost in her thoughts she don't even realize lakhan thakur was waiting for her. kaha thi tum intni daer se? lakhan asked with so much concern.

Poonam suddenly realize lakhan standing in front of her. She suddenly hug lakhan thakur tightly surprised with her move lakhan asked kya hua poonam kuch bologi kaha thi tum?
Poonam narrate the whole encounter with sarkar to lakhan.
Lakhan blood boiled, with so much anger he asked kaha chott lagi hai dikhao uss sarkar aur komal ki aaj saala hum kissa hi khatam kar denge. Lakahn open the door in so much anger how dare somebody to touch his wife.
Poonam saw the rage on her husband's face to calm him down poonam hold his hand lakhan thakur aap ko humari kasam aap kahi nahi jayenge. Lakhan stops there only how he can deny his wife words.

Lakahan turn soft his anger went and asked poonam again kaha chott lagi hai dikhao to.

Poonam replied to him hum theek hai bilkul humko kuch nahi hua bus idhar thoda sa dard hai she points to her right shoulder.
Lakaham came forward and remove poonam's long black silky hairs to see her wound.As he saw her bare back He felt struck by the creamy expanse of her beautiful bare, back driving him insane with desire. He just wanted to touch and kiss every spot on her elegant back , suddenly a hunger arouse in him. All lost in his desire lakhan open the string of poonam's blouse .
Shocked on lakhan's action poonam asked ye aap kya kar rahe hai ? she tried to run away from lakhan's aram.

He caught her quickely in his arm shhh tumhari chott dekh rahe hai hilo mat pati hai tumahre dekhne do humko kaha dard hai. Lakhan replied in husky tone.
He tried hard to keep his composure and then he kissed her shoulder. She was stunned by his kiss her body was tingling with excitement she felt like hot molten lava running in her veins. Lakhan realized the sudden rise in her breathing and then he gave so many tinny kisses on her shoulder again and again teasing and torturing her.
Poonam was breating hard now, his closeness his bold action did this to her making her heart beat so fast that she can hear in her ears.
Totally lost in her lakhan's lips moved from her shoulder to her neck kissing and licking leaving a trail of fire in him. Poonam moaned slowly it was an intimate torture for poonam she twisted to free herself but lakhan hold her tightly . He made wet patterns on her collarbone with his tongue and teeth, giving a passionate love bite on her neck lakhan hunger was increasing.

Suddendly a knock on the door bring both of them to reality. Poonam darwaza kholo... komal shouts hard from outside.

As poonam realized its komal on the door totally confused and afraid she asked lakhan to hide some where or jump out from the window .pagal ho gyi ho... hum yaha khidhki se koodenge He asked in frustration.
haan lakahn thakur jaldi kijiye nahi to komal ko shakk ho jayega.
poonam replied in hurry.
Lakhan in all disgust was about to jump he grabbed poonam's hand and pull her close and in her ear he whispered yaad rakhana thakurain humne jo shuru kiya tha wo hum jaldi kahtam karenge aur tab tumhara koi bahana nahi chalega. and he kissed on poonam's earlobe. Poonam blushed on his comment.
Poonam marr gayi ho kya humne kaha darwaza kholo. Komal barked from outside.
Poonam in hurry open the door, seeing poonam in this condition komal asked with amusement pagla gayi ho kya ye kya haalat bna rakhi hai tumne ? With komals question poonam understood how messy her hairs was and her blouse shoulder still down she suddenly pull her shoulder up and replied humara kamra hum chahe jaise rahe tumko kya pareshani hai? after listening to poonam's reply komal went back in disgust.

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Next day when poonam was serving breakfast badi amma asked arre poonmi ye kya hua tumhare gale per ye laal nishan kaise? Listing to badi amma's question lakahn choked on the food he was eating.
All embarrassed red faced poonam replied wohh badi amma wohh... kal raat bahut bade machhar (mosquito) the outhouse mein unhi ne kaat liya.
Pinto stretch his hand to maximum and asked kya itne bade macchar the chachi smiling on pinto's innocent question poonam replied haan pinto bahut bade 6 feet bada maccher tha
Lakhan got a huge smile on his lips on poonam's reply and he thought next time he will give love bites to the places only he can see.


I am done with it and very afraid whether you people will like this please do comment.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😆 aaj mitu ke dil ki muraad poori ho gayi...
Baah,JIYA
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This is sooo cuttteee ❤️
Me loved it dear...
Welcome to the forum/IF & do write more please 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kya likhte ho yr ultimate,awesome,mindblowing start with hug nd end on love bite
aap likhte rho hum pdhte rhege 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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well this is my very first attempt on writing anything mostly i am just on reading... m so new to this india forum not very sure how to use it but still m trying. hope you people will like this😊
and sorry for my English 😔

this fiction starts after sarkar hit po
Awesum, damn good!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wah... Wah..
Superb re...
do write more.. me totally love it...


Btw, welcome to LaakhAm land re...
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Originally posted by: ritukumari

kya likhte ho yr ultimate,awesome,mindblowing start with hug nd end on love bite
aap likhte rho hum pdhte rhege 😆

thanku so much 😊
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A big thanku to all of u fr appreciation i ws so frustated wid tht almst kiss to socha saare fans k arman poore hone chahiye serial mein na sahi yahi per sahi

thank you once again u ppl encourg me to write more hope i wil write sumthing soon 😊 😃
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Originally posted by: ILoveToRead.




This is sooo cuttteee❤️
Me loved it dear...
Welcome to the forum/IF & do write more please🤗


sawagt k liye shukriyaa
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy_inu

A big thanku to all of u fr appreciation i ws so frustated wid tht almst kiss to socha saare fans k arman poore hone chahiye serial mein na sahi yahi per sahi

thank you once again u ppl encourg me to write more hope i wil write sumthing soon 😊 😃

brilliant story loved it cvs should take ideas from u, really superb plsss keep wrting ff on lakham 😊 can u tell ur name plss

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