Poonam's confession FF

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I have tried to write a ff on Poonam's Love Confession.

Here it is...

Poonam lakhan se bahut naraaz hai,lakhan se baat bhi nahi kar rahi.Yeh dekhkar Lakhan ander hi ander ghut raha hai(actually ghut kya raha hai,mar hi raha hai bechaara).Par punmi ye sab nahi dekh pa rahi.Lakhan bahut koshishein kar raha punmi ko manane ki aur use maafi maangne ki,par punmi use bilkul bhi bhao nahi de rahi.Lakhan ko lagta hai ke ab punmi use kabhi baat nahi karegi aur maaf bhi nahi karegi,Isliye who apne aap ko maarne ki bhi koshish karta hai,par nakaam hota hai.

Din guzarte hain,par Poonam ka behavior nahi badalta. Yeh dekh kar Lakhan ab bahut frustrate ho gaya hai.Frustration itni badh gayi hai ki who bahut shraab pee leta hai.Lakhan shraab peekar kar ghar waapis aata hai aur apne kamre mein jaata hai.poonam pehle se hi kamre mein hoti hai.Poonam lakhan ko aisi halt mein dekhkar bahut dukhi hoti hai par who show nahi karti ke who dukhi hai.Achanak lakhan nashe ki haalat mein girne lagta hai,punmi use aakar sambhalti hai.Punmi ke aankhon se aansu beh rahe hai,par who unhe chhupati hai.Punmi Lakhan ko bed ke paas le jaane ki koshish karti hai,par lakhan use dhakka de deta hai.Lakhan ki eyes poori tarah teary hain,who pal pal Poonam ke pyaar ke liye tadap raha hai. Frustration mein who apne dil ki saari bhadaas Poonam par nikalta hai.woh Poonam se kehta ke usne hamesha us se itna pyaar kiya,par badle mein tumne hume kabhi pyaar nahi kiya . Hum humesha tumahare liye itna tadpe hain,par tumhe koi farak nahi pada. Tumhe sirf aur sirf is parivaar ki chinta thi,hamari kabhi nahi.Maana ke humne tumhe bahut dukh diye hain par pyaar bhi toh bahut kiya hai.Lekin tum us pyaar ko kabhi nahi samjhi.Tumne humesha hamara gussa hi dekha kabhi bhi hamare andar ka pyaar nahi dekha.Lakhan bahut ro raha hai aur bahut kuch punmi k obol raha.

Punmi chup chap Lakhan ki saari baatein sun rahi hai.Uski aankhon se bhi bahut aansu tapak rahe hain.Woh achanak apni finger Lakhan ke lips par rakhti hai aur zor se use chup hone ko bolti hai.Poonam ki frustration bhi bahar aa chuki hai.Woh laakhan ko kehti hai ki aapko lagta hai humne aapko kabhi nahi samjha jabke sach yeh hai ke aapne mujhe kabhi nahi samjha.Aapne humesha hum par shukk kiya.Aapne humesha hamare beech priyom ko laaye rakha.Aapne humesha mera beeta hua kal dekha aur maine humesha aapke saath apna aane waala kal dekha. Aap jaante hai jab main raat ko soti hoon toh aapka chehra dekhkar soti hoon aur jab subah uthti hoon toh aapka chehra dekh kar.Lekin nahi,aapko yeh sab nahi dikhai deta.Aap humesha hum par shukk karte hain.Aur kya keh rahe the aap ke hum aap se pyaar nahi karte,aapko yahi lagta hain na toh theek hai,nahi karte hum aapse pyaar.Aur kuch sunna chaahte hain aap.Aapne humesha wohi socha jo aap sochna chahte hai,kabhi mere dil ke andar nahi jhaaka.Lakhan se sab baatein sunkar bahut dukhi hota hai aur apni gun nikalta hai aur apni kanpati par rakh leta hai.Poonam achanak peechhe mudkar dekhti hai aur ghabra jaati hai aur kehti hai yeh aap kya kar rahe hain Lakhan Thakur.Lakhan us se kehta hai ke tum theek keh rahi ho humne tumhe kabhi nahi samjha aur hum tumahare pyaar ke laayak nahi hai.Isliye aaj hum apne aap ko khatam kar lenge.Lakhan goli chalane hi lagta hai ke Poonam bhaagti hui uske paas jaati hai aur uske haath se bandook chheen leti aur Lakhan ke gale lag jaati hai aur bahut roti hai.Lakhan bhi use hug karta hai.Punmi laakhan ko kehti hai ke aapne aisa soch bhi kaise liya aap apne aap ko maar daalenge,kisne aap hukk diya hamari zindagi humse chheen ne ka.Aapki jaan aapki nahi humari hai.Yeh sab sunkar Lakhan bahut shock mein hai.Lekin punmi bole jaa rahi aur kehti hai agar aapko kuch ho jaata toh hum jeete ji mar jaate.Punmi bahut ro rahi hai aur saath saath Lakhan ko maar rahi hai.Aur achanak uske muh se nikal jaata hai ke hum aapse bahut pyaar karte hain aur aapke bina jee nahi paayeinge.Lakhan yeh sab sunkar abhi bhi sadme mein hai.Punmi yeh sab kehte huye abhi bhi use maar rahi hai.Achanak Lakhan punmi ka haath pakad leta hai.Ek pal ko sab chup.Ek dard sa utar aaya hai dono ki aankhon mein.Kehne ke liye kuch nahi bacha.Dono ki aankhon se aansoon beh rahe hain.Lakhan punmi ke nazdeek aata hai aur apne hothon se punmi ke aansuon ko chumta hai.(Be ready guys,romance shuru).Phir woh punmi ki aankhon ko chumta hai aur achanak punmi ke hothon par kiss karne lagta hai,punmi sharma jaati hai aur wahaan se jaane lagti hai.Par lakhan use peechhe se aakar pakad leta hai(very tightly).Lakhan punmi ke baal side karta hai aur uski neck par kiss karta hai(3 kisses).Punmi turns back and hugs him tightly.(bg plays yunhi re yunhi re mile rahe hum,tujhi mein tujhi mein range rahe hum).Then again Lakhan punmi ko lip kiss karne ki koshish karta,par who phi turn kar jaati hai.Lakhan uski waist ko kaskar pakadta hai.Punmi ke andar current sa aa gaya ho aisa lagta hai.This time punmi turns back and kisses lakhan's neck and chest(lots of kisses).Lakhan punmi ko apni god mein uthata hai aur use bed par letata hai.Lakhan bhi thoda sharma raha hai(little bit).Punmi apni arms lakhan ki taraf karti hai aur use apni baahon mein bhar leti hai.Then lakhan kisses her eyes,cheeks,her belly , her feet and finally kisses her lips(thodi English likh rahi hoon,hindi mein zyaada likha nahi ja raha tha).Poonam also kisses him back.Romance continued and finally they consummate their marriage.

In the morning,Poonam uthti hai aur raat ko jo kuch bhi hua sochkar kar muskurane lagti hai.Lakhan ke face par ek cute si smile hai.Lakhan abhi bhi so raha hai.Poonam Lakhan ke forehead par kiss karti hai aur kehti hai-Hum aap se bahut pyaar karte hain Lakhan Thakur.

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Hope you all like it.

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tanu mindblowing I wish aisa ho...
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Originally posted by: crazy4ashu

tanu mindblowing I wish aisa ho...

hope for the best😊
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hey tanu plz b active on IF too n specially on AT its so much fun...
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cvs k bheje me bhusa hai ye sab dikhta ni 🤔
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Originally posted by: beatsdongandy

cvs k bheje me bhusa hai ye sab dikhta ni 🤔

bhusa b nahi hai kuch hai hi nahi😔
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Originally posted by: crazy4ashu

hey tanu plz b active on IF too n specially on AT its so much fun...

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Waiting for an other ff😊

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I'm sure it's great lekin main itna parh nahi sakti.. mujhe kuch hota hai reading karne se..😆
But itna tumne likha hai us effort ke liye hi great job..👏
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