September 18 written update*updated check it out*

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys,
Sorry I have so much college work today, I will post this written update tomorrow. I am really sorry again. I hope all of you forgive me. I will update it first thing tomorrow.
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Edit: Sorry guys I am so late. So a short update for you guys.
*Ketki tells Keshubhai that Ketan apologized for his behavior(he really didn't) she just wanted to make him feel good. Keshu felt great hearing that.
* Manoharbhai(Keshubhai's old friend) comes to ask for some products( Sanghvi company products) and Ketan tells him that he won't get anything until he pays for the past purchases and Keshubhai enters and asks Manoharbhai to have a seat and asks him if he wants water and tells Ketan that Manoharbhai has helped their business greatly in the early days and tells him he can have all the products he wants. When he leaves keshu tells Ketan that relationships come before business and you will only know that when you have your own business, Ketan immediately thinks abt the gunda he met a day before and starting his own business. I hate Ketan he gets influenced super easily.
*Sachin goes home and sees his wife manda and tells her that after seeing her he feels refreshed and not tired. Then he gives her a gajra and she tells him that you just bought four yesterday they are in the fridge and he tells her that he likes buying gajras for her everyday, how sweet. Manda sits and stares at the gajra and Sachin asks her," what's wrong?" and she tells him that she feels sad that their son doesn't visit them anymore after he got married and she feels that he forgot his parents and how she wishes her son was more like Sachin. Poor parents. 😭
* Sachin and Manda then go for a evening walk in the garden. they walk and have a seat at a bench and then Sachin gets up to go get another gajra, all day gajras😆😆 and leaves manda sitting on the bench. Meanwhile Kritika and Devikaben(her mom) go near the same garden to have pani puris and kritika leaves her baby in a stroller far away from the pani puri place( a road side stall) and go to eat, who does that who leaves a stroller unattended, stupid them all they like is money and jewelry and food. Eww. They are so engrossed in eating that the baby stroller starts rolling away and they can't see it, it keep rolling and rolling and rolling and then Manda who is sitting on the bench sees it and starts running after it, when she saw it it looked so close but she ran and ran and ran and ran and started sweating and breathing heavy but couldn't get the stroller, Sachin comes back from the gajra wali and sees his wife isn't on the bench in a second he sees her running after a stroller so does that mean the stroller took a full round of the garden. Stupid but okay he grabs a hold of it just before it hits a ditch, he grabs the baby and the stroller falls in the ditch and his wife collapses in his arms. To be continued........


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Posted: 15 years ago
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No problem, take your time. Thank you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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updates, what updates
ketan, the angry young man has shown his true colours.............
the twist is very real but sad at the same time.
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How sweet thanks.😃
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Originally posted by: suganthirani

No problem, take your time. Thank you.


Thanks now its ready!😃

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