Rudhita OS Series|Last OS- Aye Dil Laya Hai Bahaar|Updated on Pg.26 - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
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JyotišŸ¤—beautiful,bohot badiyašŸ‘

Sorry for the late feedback , too many pending practicals,projects and assignments 😭😭

The last part was so heart warming😳When he kissed her,my Latent heat of fusion fell steeply and I melted .Still not solidified šŸ˜†šŸ¤Ŗ

And how perfectly the song lyrics have matched with the story .Keep writingā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago
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The blooming love between them are soo cute amd your description with this song is sooo beautiful šŸ–¤ and that dance you described was devine šŸ–¤

How come I saw it soo late šŸ¤¦ā€ā™€ļøsorry yaar

But it was soo beautiful one dear

Next one jaldi se de do

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Btw thanks for the pm

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely os JyotišŸ¤—

Your description of their slowly blooming love is really beautiful šŸ‘ even though both of them still hasn’t confessed their feelings but feelings are there.. it’s about time now slowly but steadily they are taking baby steps to reach the peak of their love.. their feelings are nicely described Jyoti.. good job dear šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Waiting for more one shots written by you

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hayeeeeeee... i got lost while reading this os ā¤ļø

what an amazing piece of work dear. the way you have described their feelings superbbbb. the dance, eye locks and then the hug ā¤ļø loved their cute nok jok even at the end the cute nok jhok over the rosogulla was so cute.

Waiting for the next chapter of this os. post soon please.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Ka_ta

JyotišŸ¤—beautiful,bohot badiyašŸ‘

Sorry for the late feedback , too many pending practicals,projects and assignments 😭😭

The last part was so heart warming😳When he kissed her,my Latent heat of fusion fell steeply and I melted .Still not solidified šŸ˜†šŸ¤Ŗ

And how perfectly the song lyrics have matched with the story .Keep writingā¤ļø


Thank you so much dearšŸ¤—

Aww busy beešŸ˜† hope abhi complete ho gye ho sare projects😳

@bold- kya baat hai kya baat hai sahišŸ˜†

Will update soon..stay tuned!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priiii

The blooming love between them are soo cute amd your description with this song is sooo beautiful šŸ–¤ and that dance you described was devine šŸ–¤

How come I saw it soo late šŸ¤¦ā€ā™€ļøsorry yaar

But it was soo beautiful one dear

Next one jaldi se de do

Thank you so much priišŸ¤—

Glad that you are loving the series

Han i will.update next one soon...till thenšŸ¤—

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priiii

Btw thanks for the pm

ā¤ļøšŸ¤—

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: nims23

Lovely os JyotišŸ¤—

Your description of their slowly blooming love is really beautiful šŸ‘ even though both of them still hasn’t confessed their feelings but feelings are there.. it’s about time now slowly but steadily they are taking baby steps to reach the peak of their love.. their feelings are nicely described Jyoti.. good job dear šŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Waiting for more one shots written by you

Thank you so much Nimu darlingšŸ¤—

Yup they haven't confessed yet. But to show their growing feelings, this part was needed and yeah Bon toh already loves him, but Ani hasn't realized his feelings yet but I think woh din dur nahi hai abhismiley36

So glad that you are finding it beautiful...it's actually means a lot when someone understand the same emotions the way I/we want to portrayā¤ļø


Hmmm next one? What about the sad one?😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jojyu

Hayeeeeeee... i got lost while reading this os ā¤ļø

what an amazing piece of work dear. the way you have described their feelings superbbbb. the dance, eye locks and then the hug ā¤ļø loved their cute nok jok even at the end the cute nok jhok over the rosogulla was so cute.

Waiting for the next chapter of this os. post soon please.

Hayeeeee sachi?šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Thank you so much jojyu

That nok jhok part was interesting nahi?šŸ˜†

So glad that you are enjoying thisā¤ļø

Will try to update next one really soon😳

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