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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: AK_2010

You described the disappointment and grief so precisely. I'm lost in those words. Did it have to end so soon?



Thank you. Means a lot❤️🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

Your PS: is a joke.

Thank you, thank you.


Joke? Which joke😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: bubblesort

You really write so beautifully👍🏼 in such less words express so much👏



Aww, thank you❤️🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This made perfect sense!! It was so short but it tackled so many things! Like the part about wanting more but then thinking I already got so much, how can I be greedy for more? I feel like grown up Bondita would have moments like that. How to complain when other women around her don't even have half of what she has? Also the part about knowing that perfection can never be achieved, but still struggling against the desire to achieve it. The sentimental part of her sitting in complete darkness and Aniruddh switching on both the literal and metaphorical lights for her. And I am a total sucker for someone giving Bondita a warm hug, it being Aniruddh is a cherry on the cake. Like, most times in the show I literally feel like someone should go to this munchkin and just hold her close and comfort her. I so wish there was any kind of maternal figure over there lol! Your writing is very poignant!!!!!⭐

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: WarriorB

This made perfect sense!! I'm glad it did. 🥺



It was so short but it tackled so many things! Like the part about wanting more but then thinking I already got so much, how can I be greedy for more? I feel like grown up Bondita would have moments like that. I really hope so. I love how Bondita is at the moment but I want her to get a bit serious once she grows up and not be always chirpy kind. I mean, there should be some "thehrav" in her.


How to complain when other women around her don't even have half of what she has? Also the part about knowing that perfection can never be achieved, but still struggling against the desire to achieve it. That's just human tendencies I have noticed😆



The sentimental part of her sitting in complete darkness and Aniruddh switching on both the literal and metaphorical lights for her. And I am a total sucker for someone giving Bondita a warm hug, it being Aniruddh is a cherry on the cake. Like, most times in the show I literally feel like someone should go to this munchkin and just hold her close and comfort her. I so wish there was any kind of maternal figure over there lol! Same! I wish there was a mother figure in the house maybe like Kaki or someone but okay😆



Your writing is very poignant!!!!!⭐


Thank you so much for loving it ya! Means the world to me❤️🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#16

I mean I very much agree with u about the therav part for Bondita when she grows up🤩 but then I would also say Aniruddh needs to let out his inner child more often!! There r some beautiful scenes where I end up musing who is the real kid here!! As for the Kaki part, I am gonna say for a super fundamentalist guy like Kaka there ain't no chance of that. Rangeela Binoy more likely to get a new wife. The way they r going with him, it looks like All khoon maaf!😃

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: WarriorB

I mean I very much agree with u about the therav part for Bondita when she grows up🤩 but then I would also say Aniruddh needs to let out his inner child more often!! Yeah! Same! I wish he also gets back a few moments from his lost childhood with Bondita😃




There r some beautiful scenes where I end up musing who is the real kid here!! As for the Kaki part, I am gonna say for a super fundamentalist guy like Kaka there ain't no chance of that. No I meant I wish he was married. 😆



Rangeela Binoy more likely to get a new wife. The way they r going with him, it looks like All khoon maaf!😃




Binoy is damn rangeela 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Bondita was in her room, looking at the moonlit sky, with blurred eyes. Life was never easy on her. Not that she complained because she knew she got more than what she deserved but on what cost? On cost of her dreams. As a young girl, all she dreamt was of her mother's lap and few handis of Roshogolla. As she grew up, she dreamt of having a perfect married life. She knew perfect jaisa kuch nahi hota, of course but then, every human aspires for it, if one says one doesn't, one is simply a liar. All in all, she pretty much had it all, until today. "Bondita, itna andhera kyun kiya hua hai?" Aniruddh asked as soon as he entered the room. He reached to the switchboard nearby and switched on the lights, startling Bondita, making her vulnerable. She didn't look at him, for the first time in forever. "Bondita." Aniruddh said, as softly as possible. No response. "Bondita, kuch hua hai?" He asked, softly enough to makes her weak again. She couldn't help but hug him and sob in his arms. He didn't ask her any questions. He held her as delicately as possible and stroke her hair. He could feel his shirt wet with her tears and it broke his heart but he just let be.

🥺😭😭octo


Perfection is what human lives for. Perhaps that defination of perfection is different for everyone, still......so so true octo.....we all want perfection but differently perfect from others👏👏



Tears make you vulnerable but the fear of someone seeing your tears is unimaginable......this is so me yaar😭😭

We don't want show our fears or vulnerability infront of others😒


Only a ray of light can pull you out of your dark times, Aniruddh was the same Ray of light in her life. Always!.....omg


You emoted their emotions well through these lines yaar

A big hug from me sis🤗...it's beautiful😭




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This didn't make any sense to me. I mean, what even! 🤔

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Aww, thank you Krish. Means a lot❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Octothorpe

Bondita was in her room, looking at the moonlit sky, with blurred eyes. Life was never easy on her. Not that she complained because she knew she got more than what she deserved but on what cost? On cost of her dreams. As a young girl, all she dreamt was of her mother's lap and few handis of Roshogolla. As she grew up, she dreamt of having a perfect married life. She knew perfect jaisa kuch nahi hota, of course but then, every human aspires for it, if one says one doesn't, one is simply a liar. Perfection is what human lives for. Perhaps that defination of perfection is different for everyone, still. All in all, she pretty much had it all, until today. "Bondita, itna andhera kyun kiya hua hai?" Aniruddh asked as soon as he entered the room. He reached to the switchboard nearby and switched on the lights, startling Bondita, making her vulnerable. Tears make you vulnerable but the fear of someone seeing your tears is unimaginable. She didn't look at him, for the first time in forever. "Bondita." Aniruddh said, as softly as possible. No response. "Bondita, kuch hua hai?" He asked, softly enough to makes her weak again. She couldn't help but hug him and sob in his arms. He didn't ask her any questions. He held her as delicately as possible and stroke her hair. He could feel his shirt wet with her tears and it broke his heart but he just let be. Only a ray of light can pull you out of your dark times, Aniruddh was the same Ray of light in her life. Always!







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This didn't make any sense to me. I mean, what even! 🤔




Great read this was! But I couldn't understand why Bondita had been crying. And why that phrase: "she had it all, until today" ? Is there any hidden implication here of something that had transpired to wreck her perfect life? Eager to hear! Thanks a lot for posting this beautiful piece of work here 🤩😃

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