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Bondita was in her room, looking at the moonlit sky, with blurred eyes. Life was never easy on her. Not that she complained because she knew she got more than what she deserved but on what cost? On cost of her dreams. As a young girl, all she dreamt was of her mother's lap and few handis of Roshogolla. As she grew up, she dreamt of having a perfect married life. She knew perfect jaisa kuch nahi hota, of course but then, every human aspires for it, if one says one doesn't, one is simply a liar. Perfection is what human lives for. Perhaps that defination of perfection is different for everyone, still. All in all, she pretty much had it all, until today. "Bondita, itna andhera kyun kiya hua hai?" Aniruddh asked as soon as he entered the room. He reached to the switchboard nearby and switched on the lights, startling Bondita, making her vulnerable. Tears make you vulnerable but the fear of someone seeing your tears is unimaginable. She didn't look at him, for the first time in forever. "Bondita." Aniruddh said, as softly as possible. No response. "Bondita, kuch hua hai?" He asked, softly enough to makes her weak again. She couldn't help but hug him and sob in his arms. He didn't ask her any questions. He held her as delicately as possible and stroke her hair. He could feel his shirt wet with her tears and it broke his heart but he just let be. Only a ray of light can pull you out of your dark times, Aniruddh was the same Ray of light in her life. Always!








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This didn't make any sense to me. I mean, what even! 🤔

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Perfection looks like this unarguably. Thank you for lighting up my glum mood you know since today is the last day of Durga Puja and all.


PS. I demand my dp and username couple ficlet soon. 😈


PPS. I'm the first one to like and comment.

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Originally posted by: briti_asfiya

Perfection looks like this unarguably. Thank you for lighting up my glum mood you know since today is the last day of Durga Puja and all.


PS. I demand my dp and username couple ficlet soon. 😈


PPS. I'm the first one to like and comment.



Aww, thank you so much Briti🤗



PS: they are already so perfect, I don't want my imperfections to creep in😆



PPS: Congratulations🤗😛

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Posted: 5 years ago
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This is beautiful again, what else can i say you always make me fall more and more for the way you write, reading your drabbles is always my fav way to spend my time.

Thank you for this beautiful piece

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I have no words to describe how beautifully you write Octo, this one also wonderful as always with so much depth 👏❤️

Thank you for this 🤗

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You described the disappointment and grief so precisely. I'm lost in those words. Did it have to end so soon?

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Originally posted by: Octothorpe



Aww, thank you so much Briti🤗



PS: they are already so perfect, I don't want my imperfections to creep in😆



PPS: Congratulations🤗😛

Your PS: is a joke.

Thank you, thank you.

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You really write so beautifully👍🏼 in such less words express so much👏

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Originally posted by: wayback2

This is beautiful again, what else can i say you always make me fall more and more for the way you write, reading your drabbles is always my fav way to spend my time.

Thank you for this beautiful piece


Aww, you are really sweet. Thank you🤗❤️

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Originally posted by: Prit_007

I have no words to describe how beautifully you write Octo, this one also wonderful as always with so much depth 👏❤️

Thank you for this 🤗



Aww, Prit🤗



Thank you. I'm glad you found the meaning I wanted to convey❤️

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