OS: A ball dance - Page 3

Hello krish. Its super se uper lovely. You are writers me farah khan on forum. Sara masala dala jisse kisi ko masla hi na ho. Love .proposal.jealousy. possesiveness. Laced with beautyful lyrics.

All in one. Maja agaya.

We love it ani babu

When you call her senorita

Originally posted by: reply1997

Hello krish. Its super se uper lovely. You are writers me farah khan on forum. Sara masala dala jisse kisi ko masla hi na ho. Love .proposal.jealousy. possesiveness. Laced with beautyful lyrics.

All in one. Maja agaya.

We love it ani babu

When you call her senorita

Thank you sonia🤗

Farah khan😲🤣🤣....ohh that was huge....but I really deserve it?🤔

I'm happy you enjoyed it a lot....

Bon is ani babu's senorita😉

Originally posted by: Rudhitafan

Thank you sonia🤗

Farah khan😲🤣🤣....ohh that was huge....but I đreally deserve it?🤔

I'm happy you enjoyed it a lot....

Bon is ani babu's senorita😉

Yes bcz me fk ki movies enjoy karti hu

Me masala fan hu

To ye full msala shot tha ❤️

Aur plz idea mujse le sakti ho

Angst n full passion se bhara b ek shot likho.. no confession only tension

Originally posted by: reply1997

Yes bcz me fk ki movies enjoy karti hu

Me masala fan hu

To ye full msala shot tha ❤️

Aur plz idea mujse le sakti ho

Angst n full passion se bhara b ek shot likho.. no confession only tension

Okay😆

Will surely ask you when I try something someday👍🏼

It was so damn perfect.. It made my heart beat so fast.. 😅

Beautifully penned..

Love the use of song..

Krish 🤗❤️

Loved this os ❤️ It's dreamy ❤️ I was too tired and this one made me feel fresh 😳

I was imagining the whole scenario☺️❤️and I said earlier that I love the way you play with words ❤️

even in that beautiful modern looking dress she has a slight pinch of sindoor on her forehead....which looked surprisingly beautiful on her....it was as if she was suppressing the glances of all other men with great pride that she was the lady of only her man...her husband.... This line 😳

I liked Ani realised how much he hurt Bondita when danced with his pyaari Mini 😈

You described the feelings of Anirudh beautifully and Salim Sahab is our second hero always ❤️😆

inorder to understand the art of love you should try reading your partner's eyes atleast once.....you should try to dive into her depths....👏👍🏼

And the time is best for posting this os is best Krish. Thank you for giving us such a beautiful os at this time ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Rashi_garg

It was so damn perfect.. It made my heart beat so fast.. 😅

Beautifully penned..

Love the use of song..

Thank you so much rashi❤️😃

I'm so happy you loved the use of song here eventhough I was a little hesitant to use it here🙈

Keep giving your feedbacks in all my upcoming stories too dear😳

Originally posted by: Prit_007

Krish 🤗❤️

Loved this os ❤️ It's dreamy ❤️ I was too tired and this one made me feel fresh 😳

I was imagining the whole scenario☺️❤️and I said earlier that I love the way you play with words ❤️

even in that beautiful modern looking dress she has a slight pinch of sindoor on her forehead....which looked surprisingly beautiful on her....it was as if she was suppressing the glances of all other men with great pride that she was the lady of only her man...her husband.... This line 😳

I liked Ani realised how much he hurt Bondita when danced with his pyaari Mini 😈

You described the feelings of Anirudh beautifully and Salim Sahab is our second hero always ❤️😆

inorder to understand the art of love you should try reading your partner's eyes atleast once.....you should try to dive into her depths....👏👍🏼

And the time is best for posting this os is best Krish. Thank you for giving us such a beautiful os at this time ❤️❤️❤️

Prit🤗

I'm the most happiest when my creations give some relief or freshness to my readers when they are low or tired....and I'm so contented that I could give this happiness to you when you needed it the most....😳

That you so much you noted the line about her sindoor infact that is my favourite part too❤️

.I loveeee ek chutki sindoor😆

Salim saheb are ofcourse our soul connection now🤣🤣

But still salim saheb is reserved for shrishti exclusively....😳

I'm also happy that you got the sole intention of my OS. ...it was dedicated just for all of you rudhians who were so sad with ani mini dance sessions.....so this story is for each and every one of you

❤️❤️

I wish ani genuinely regrets his dance with mini and taking advantage of little bon's innocence, soon or in future😎

Just ignore any blunder with my song selection though🙈

Krishna I am speechless as usual reading your Os... It's really stupendous and scrupulously written..👏

You have a great persona to attract readers with your words. And I'm seeing a great noble writer coming up in you. It's a beautiful and I can't express in words. You have a great play of words🤗.

We can clearly imagine and picturised everything with the authentic way you've portrayed it.

Can we get this scene in BB after leap please where Ani embarrassed and regret to trust Mini. You have beautifully created a magic here with both screenplay and script.

Yeah Batuk is expected to side with Bondu but I wish we would get Som like in this future. Salim sahab ka kya kahe he is the cupid hero of our Rudhita.

The lyrics of song suits the situation so well but I'm not aware of those songs. It's Nice actually.

Overall nice work re Krishna. I am always amused to read your works and this time too you showed that you're a great writer. Fantabulous vocabulary with distinct screenplay. Great and love you for giving us Os in right time...❤️🤗

Woooww krish...❤️❤️I was smiling throughout reading this☺️...

loved it!!!!❤️