OS: A ball dance - Page 4

Krish 🤗

Wonderful os ❤️ You penned it beautifully

I was sheepishly smiling throughout the os , jealousy Anirudh 😆 this what we wanted to see him in future , how it will be to dance with someone 🤣 But ani is cute man He got jealous with his own brother 🤣

Bon how beautifully you deciphered her feelings of wanting to be his princess atleast for a day and it got fulfilled 😳

I got a immense sadistic pleasure reading a line that sauda is black hole in his past life 🤣and Bon is his full moon ❤️

About song , lines matter and feelings..both gelled well⭐️ music is not necessarily to match.

Want to read more from you krish❤️ please do write more and entertain us by your words.

Lots of love ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Home786

Krishna I am speechless as usual reading your Os... It's really stupendous and scrupulously written..👏

You have a great persona to attract readers with your words. And I'm seeing a great noble writer coming up in you. It's a beautiful and I can't express in words. You have a great play of words🤗.

We can clearly imagine and picturised everything with the authentic way you've portrayed it.

Can we get this scene in BB after leap please where Ani embarrassed and regret to trust Mini. You have beautifully created a magic here with both screenplay and script.

Yeah Batuk is expected to side with Bondu but I wish we would get Som like in this future. Salim sahab ka kya kahe he is the cupid hero of our Rudhita.

The lyrics of song suits the situation so well but I'm not aware of those songs. It's Nice actually.

Overall nice work re Krishna. I am always amused to read your works and this time too you showed that you're a great writer. Fantabulous vocabulary with distinct screenplay. Great and love you for giving us Os in right time...❤️🤗

Thank you so much for your encouraging words shaheen🤗❤️

I'm so sorry I forgot about this OS of mine entirely and today while searching throughout I got reminded I never replied back to you and lalz....I was busy na🤔

Whenever I get opinions from you I feel so happy and blessed.....you know na shaheen you are like a guide for me who always encouraged my writings and showed me where I go wrong🤗....

But I swear no one can beat you in dialogues and screenplay you are the best girl🤗

I wish as you said that one day I become a writer😳

Always give your valuable feedbacks and I will be back soon with another story going on in my mind....😉love you❤️

Originally posted by: --Lalz--

Krish 🤗

Wonderful os ❤️ You penned it beautifully

I was sheepishly smiling throughout the os , jealousy Anirudh 😆 this what we wanted to see him in future , how it will be to dance with someone 🤣 But ani is cute man He got jealous with his own brother 🤣

Bon how beautifully you deciphered her feelings of wanting to be his princess atleast for a day and it got fulfilled 😳

I got a immense sadistic pleasure reading a line that sauda is black hole in his past life 🤣and Bon is his full moon ❤️

About song , lines matter and feelings..both gelled well⭐️ music is not necessarily to match.

Want to read more from you krish❤️ please do write more and entertain us by your words.

Lots of love ❤️🤗

Sorry yaar I completely forgot about this OS due to my busier daysI'm so happy you enjoyed it a lot😃

Haina😳jealous ani is a treat to watch 😆one day he will see bon dancing with some other 🤣

Sauda is indeed black hole and bon is his full moon😳

I will try to write often dear ....it's just that I'm busier these days

Love you❤️and thank you for your encouraging words🤗