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Bondita was moving here and there, trying to clean up the whole of the study room that she created mess of, just to search for an old file she needed for some study purpose. "Phir tufaan macha diya tumnein idhar?" Aniruddh said, while entering the room. It wasn't the first time she created havoc out of the study room. "Sorry Pati Babu." She quickly apologized but still kept on moving from one desk to the shelf, so on and so forth. Just then Aniruddh noticed Bondita's blouse was torn from the side of the shoulders. He could see some mark of an old injury. "Bondita ruko!" He said, startling her. "Kya hua? Main sab theek kar dungi. Aap chinta mat kijiye." She said. He neared her, turned her around and took a complete look at the injury mark. "Ye kis cheez ka ghav hai?" He asked. "Oh. Yeh toh bahut purana nishaan hai." Bondita said, with a smile, that hid plethora of pain and sadness. "Kaise laga? Aur tumnein mujhe bataya kyun nahi?" Aniruddh asked. "Batane Jaisi koi baat nahi thi. Chodiye, kuch khaas nahi tha, bachpan mein mere bistar gila karne ki aadat ko theek karne ke liye Kaka ek taabeez laaye the. Woh kaafi din tak ek jagah chubhne se ghav sa ban gaya aur nishaan chod gaya. Bachpan ke ghav zyda gehre hote hain na. Main kapde badal ke aati hoon phir ye sab theek kar dungi, Shotti." Bondita said, with a smile, trying to supress that whole memory of her childhood that she wanted to forget, but at times fails so miserably. She went away, leaving Aniruddh thinking, thinking of lot of things he could have done a better way. Kuch ghav gehra asar chod jaate hain.....







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Just wrote it aise hi. Don't mind it if you feel I wasted your time. Really sorry. 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It's great. Short and sweet 🥰🥰

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Originally posted by: shirin04

It's great. Short and sweet 🥰🥰


I'm glad you liked it. 🤗

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Originally posted by: Iamth

Nice one Octo.❤️


Aww, thank you Prit🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Just now I read your writing... It's actually nice and good one.. Do write more yaar.. I liked it. 👍🏼❤️

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Originally posted by: Home786

Just now I read your writing... It's actually nice and good one.. Do write more yaar.. I liked it. 👍🏼❤️



Thank you Shaheen🤗


I just feel so not motivated for writing these days. *Sigh* today i watched Friday wala episode and got little idea so i wrote this. 🤓

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Nice drabble.. Do write more 👍🏼

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So beautifully nibbed octo😳👏

Loved the way you impounded bon's childhood problem and Ani being guilty about it ( he isn't responsible for her wound but he weren't there to protect her aswell)

Missed your drabble alot 😊

Thank you for writing it up octo 🤗

Write more 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: Saavni

Nice drabble.. Do write more 👍🏼


Thank you so much. 🤗 I'll try writing more :)

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Originally posted by: --Lalz--

So beautifully nibbed octo😳👏

Loved the way you impounded bon's childhood problem and Ani being guilty about it ( he isn't responsible for her wound but he weren't there to protect her aswell)

Missed your drabble alot 😊

Thank you for writing it up octo 🤗

Write more 👍🏼



Aww, thank you Lalz🤗



I missed writing too. I hope I'm able to write more. Have totally lost my touch to writing these days. *Sigh*

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