Kismat Konnection p.2 on pg. 4 6-26-08

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Nice start 👏
plzz coon soon

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

when will you be updating..sorry for the impatience 😳 😕

Edited by mushtari - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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SORRY BUT WHEN I TRY TO POST IT IT DOSE NOT WORK
I HAVE TRIED MANY TIMES
IT SAYS SERVER ERROR
MAYBE IT IS TO MANY WORDS
I WILL TRY TO POST IT LITTLE BY LITTLE TOMORROW
SORRY EVRYONE

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Recap- a guy takes divya in his car in her drunken state
Part 2
He parks his car in what seems like his drive way and picks her up and takes her in to his home
When he comes in his mom (sm) starts yelling "hai rabba" sagar yeh tu kesi liya"
s- wo ma yeh sidewalk par gir gaye thi I think she is drunk
sm- to tu ise liya ku?
s- mom I thought that I saw some drunk guys coming towards her so I decided to help her
sm- yeh tu na acha kia
Just then her dad comes and her mom explains it to him so he won't yell at sagar
Then her bro comes
Yash- dude who that, hot chick
Sd- hits him and tells him to go back to his room.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Sd- so where is she going to stay
Sm- I will get dinner for u 2
s- Dad I will sleep on the couch and she can sleep on her couch and when she wakes up I will explain everything to her and I will drop her off to her house
Sd- ok
Sm- dinner is ready
Sd- sagar first drop her on Ur bed or how will u eat (during this whole conversation he was holding her)
He drops her off and eats dinner
Then everybody goes to sleep
Sagar sleeps in the living room couch
That's it for today
I hope u guys liked it. And sry my Hindi is really bad when it comes to writing. If someone could help with the Hindi that would be really nice.
Hope u guys like it.

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Anonymous

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

OH I FINALLY GOT IT ON
THANKS EVERY ONE
HOPE U GUYS LIKE THIS PART
I MIGHT POST ANOTHER ONE TOMORROW

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Anonymous

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

AND PLEASE POINT OUT ANY MISTAKES I MADE
THANKS AGAIN

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priya

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

luved it cont soon pleeze 😊

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Payal Patel

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

nice!
Update soon! Cant wait to read more 😃

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Anonymous

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

Thanks to: rajeev_fan , ravioli_11 , sonikudi1 , sweet candy, sweet_fana, sayara, sharad+divz4evr, Payal25, anki4life, cutey55, mushtari, bmtd11, sharadz4me, veera25, ramsha1990, adventure_gurl, Irika, kashishk (sorry i dont know the real names; and sorry to all the people i forgot)
For reading and complimenting my FF 😊
And as for the next update it might be tomorrow

Edited by riyadesai - 17 years ago

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