Kismat Konnection p.2 on pg. 4 6-26-08

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Posted: 17 years ago
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this is my first FF
i dreamt the first part of it
and i wanted to turn it into an FF
hope u guys like it
Kismat Konnection
Charecters
Divya- her dad died in a car crash when she was 17 and her mom died of shock a year later. She had the responsibility of her younger brother .and sister(ALOK AND KRUTI they r twins and 14 years old). she is never shy and stands up for wat she belives in. She truly loves her sibilings although they can be anoying. she is going to join Princeton to become a child specialist.
Sagar- has a perfectly healthy family. he has a yonger bro and a older sis(yash who is 14, and shuti is married and is 22). he is 18. he is going to join princeton too.

i wanted to post the main chracters first the rest will come ina while.
tell me how it seems so far and if u have any help i would aprreicate it
thank u
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Posted: 17 years ago
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greatt..looking forward to first part...continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome. can't wait until you post the 1st part 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i have it ready but i will update tomorrow
thanks for the comments everyone
i really appreciate it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great....i think it will b great ff by lukin da charaters....am waitin 4 ur update...
Edited by sweet_fana - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it's a movie name 😛 waiting 4 it 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice
looking forward to first part 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 1
This story is starts out with divya at a disco and she is asking for a drink
She asks" can I have juice" but the person gives her wine
She doesn't notice it but she like sit and keeps drinking
soon she is drunk
she goes outside and falls on the side walk on the streets on NJ
then as she falls a guy comes and parks his car and looks at her
he picks her up and puts her in his car
And …………… I will continue if at least I get 5 comments by different people
Authors Note……………………..
I am open to any criticism or anything that u have to offer
THANK U FOR TAKING THE TIME TO READ
i really appreciate comments
and if u have a continuation to my story then u can PM it to me
and i can contribute it in the story
thanks to all the readers again

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds interesting!
Cant wait to read more 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyy great start, cont soon
im tahmina btw*

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