(FF)You’re my Love-SV (part 3, pg4)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heyy Guys… I want to start a FF with SV in it.. But I'm not really into writing, soo if u don't like it just tell me and I wont continue. and I will write it in English.

Characters

Sagar (S)---he is really and talented guy. He really loves his parents and two sisters Sindoora, Chandra..He has one more month to finish college and start his own clothing business. And oh yeah he really doesn't believe in love anymore after breaking up with Surili.

Vidya (V)---she lives in New York City with her parents, she is really outgoing and does not like when other people judges her. But she can be a really nice person too..She wants be a fashion designer and has 1 more year to finish her fashion degree. Her parents loves her a lot..

Chinu (Ch)--he is sagar's best friend and they have been friends since childhood..and he is dating shalu

Shalu (Sh) --she is Vidya's cousin and lives in Delhi. Goes to college with Sagar and Chinu. And she is dating chinu.


Part 1

The scene starts with a girl sleeping peacefully on her stomach and you cant really see her face, since she is sleeping with a sheet covering her whole body except for her beautiful shiny hair. Suddenly, there is knock on her door telling her to get up and get ready for college.

V---come in the door is open (with sleepy voice)
VM(Vidya's mom)---hurry up and wake up….or else you are gonna be late
V---I don't feel going to college today…and I'm really not in mood to get up either.
VM---okk….but you are not doing this anymore (she leaves the room)
V---(thinking) why do I feel like Mom is up to something…cause she would never let me skip college
for no reason..
She gets up and goes to shower..then she comes out wearing a cute summer dress.
V--- (talking to herself ) I'll go see what Mom is up to today…

She comes downstairs, where her dad and mom is sitting eating breakfast

VD (Vidya's Dad)---you're here ..pumpkin
V---Daddd plsssss stop calling me that name..
VD---but…you're my little pumpkin…ohh yeah… your cousin shalu called and wants us to come
to India for her wedding..
V---whatttttttt….. I cant leave and go to India, andd I knew mom was up to something
for letting me skip college today..
VD---don't worryyy…its just for one month and we are leaving in two dayss.
V---okkk…..I'll go but I wont stay there more than a month..
VM---that's what I like to hear from my beautiful Vidyy
V---MOMMM….Don't call me that…and what's up with you and Dad always calling
by weird names…I'm not a kid anymore okkkkk…(with annoyed voice)
Precap---V and her parents goes to India…

Okk Guys…I'll stop here and plsssss tell me if I should continue or not.. And sorry for any mistakes


Edited by Nelly34 - 17 years ago

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rmj1990 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome start...its really good=)) plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome start Nelly, please continue! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pleaz cont. 😃

tat was a great update 😉

cant wait for da next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wikedd start.... 😉
please countinue soon ur ff seens to be reallyh intresting from reading ur characters 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful start👏
please continue soon........ 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sounds really nice
Great start 👏 👏

Contniue soon when you have time 😊
Wish you all the best
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yea that was amazing!!! please dont stop and continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start nelly 😃 😃
plez continue soon hun 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing start. i can just tell
this will be a great ff. pleej
continue asap! 👏

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