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Posted: 17 years ago
ok my turn...here are a few thngs i think about ur ff

1. FASINATING

2. LOVELY

3. PERFECT

4. MUSH'S FAVOURATE

5. FABULOUS

6. SPEECHLESS



anyhow..,.u have to cntinue..for these kinds ofcomments to continue babe..ok luv ya..AND ur ff
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mushtari

ok my turn...here are a few thngs i think about ur ff

1. FASINATING

2. LOVELY

3. PERFECT

4. MUSH'S FAVOURATE

5. FABULOUS

6. SPEECHLESS



anyhow..,.u have to cntinue..for these kinds ofcomments to continue babe..ok luv ya..AND ur ff

aww thanks hun! ur soo sweet. oh so ur threathing me. oki doki ill continue asap!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Does everyone want another update?
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anki4life

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

now how did i know you would be the first one to reply.😆 rofl... anyone else?

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Posted: 17 years ago
Im waiting.... otherwise ill pm the update to ankita.
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Posted: 17 years ago
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS..........*Clear throat**....i would LOVE it if you continue NOW...YOU 2 ANKIII
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh wow u said just after i pm it to ankita. Ok ok! Ill post it here too. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oki doki Part 53: Ankita and Mushitari! Tihs is 4 u 2 and anyone else interested:

Recap: Vidya decorates the house.
Vidya walks down and sees Chandra at door. She runs down as Chandra enters.
V: Arrey Chandra tum yahan!
C: Kyun me yahan nai asakti.
V: Zaroora asakti ho. Muhje to vaise bi tumhari help ki zaroorat hai.
C: Ok ok. Help is here! They both laugh.
V: Vaise Chandra…
C: Hmm…
V: Sagar kaise hain?
C: Acha hai.
V: Kal unone tik se kana kaya.
C: Hain kaya. Leken mene zyda tawajo nai di.
V: Kyun? Chandra tum unki behen ho. Tume chaiye ke tum unka kyal rako. Tik hai jab me wahan hoti hoon toh me unka kyal rakti hoon par agar me tori dino ke liya agai toh iska ye matlab toh nai hai ke tum unka kyal nai rasakti!
C: Vidya calm down. Me mazak kar ri ti. Mene kud sagar ke sat kana kaiye. Infact kal hum dono ne bet kar movie bi aik sati deki hai.
V: Oh who me…
C: Tum toh bechara ki yaad me tarp rai ho. Vidya blushes.
C: Acha choro ye bato shalu ka dress lia ke nai.
V: Lia.
C: OH really muhje deko. Aur ye shalu kidar hai!
V: Upar aao hum bi chalen.
C: Chalo. They both go upstairs and shalu is texting.
V: Shalu?
Sh: Mhm.
V: Chinu ko text kari ho? Shalu quickly puts her phone away.
Sh: Nai … nai toh. Chandra laughs.
C: Arrey shalu hum teri behene hain. Humse ye sab kuch nai chupne wala.
SH: Acha. Aur tu jo raat ke 2 baja tak Rajeev ke sat chat karti hai who kya hai!
C: Toh me kaun sa deny kari hoon. Kyun vidya?
Sh: Arrey vidya ko is me pat lao. Use ye sab karna ka hak hai kyunki uski shaadi hochuki hai. Right vidya?
V: Right!
C: Acha acha baba maaf kardo. Aab shalu muhje apna dress dikao.
SH: Dikati hoon. Shalu takes out her dresses.
C: Wow shalu. Tumhare dresses to kamal ke hain. Kis ki choice hai ye.
Sh: Vidya ki.
C: Wow vidya kya choice hai. Sach mein its beautiful.
V: Hain par shalu par aur bi beautiful lagen gen.
C: Right!
Sh: Oh stop u guys ur making me blush.
V: Arrey blush karna toh chinu bhai ke samne. Vidya's mom approaches them.
VM: Vidya beti tere phone aya hai.
V: Phone mera? Tik hai maa me ati hoon. Vidya nad her mom leave. Vidya picks up the phone.
V: Hello?
Phone: Suna hai ke apne dilbar ki awaz sune se dil me phool kil jate hain. Aaj who mene kud mesoos kar lia hai.
V: Sagar.. aap?
Phone: Eeh jaan e maan bilkul se pechana.
V: SAgar aap apni lines se baz nai ayenge.
S: Nai bilkul bi nai! Hain aik tarika hai.
V: Who kya?
S: Agar tum muhje chor do to me ye line marna chor doon ga.
V: KYa! Aap chate hain me aapko chor doon!
S: Nai mene kab asa kaha?
V: abi toh aap kehre te!
S: Nai mene toh asi koi bat nai ki.
V: Apne kaha ke agar me aapko chor doon to aap line marna chor dein ge.
S: really? Mene to asa nai kaha.
V: SAgar! Sagar laughs.
S: Arrey vidya tum janti ho muhje acha lagta hai jab tum tang hoti ho.
V: Janti hoon.
S: Acha choro ye patio ghar ane ka plan kab hai.
V: Arrey sagar kal toh milenge hum. Aik hi din kii toh bat hai.
S: Nai vidya muhje ye pasand nai hai.
V: Kyun?
S: Kyunki tum janti ho kai bi jane se pehle jab tum tayar hoti ho toh sabse pehle me tumhe dekta hoon. Kal tum tayar hogi toh me tume nai deksakoo ga.
V: aGar itni hi fikir hai toh koi tarika doond lein muhje sabse pehle dek ne ke liya. Bye. Vidya shuts the phone. Later on she is in her room getting ready. All of a sudden she hears something on her window of her terrace. She opens it and sees sagar standing there.
V: Sagar!
S: Shhh. They both go inside.
V: Aap yahan kaise kyun?
S: Itne sawal pooch toh ho! Sans toh lene do.
V: MAgar…
S: Acha jana na chati ho toh suno! Mene kaha ne ke jab bi tum tayar ho toh sabse pehle me hi tume dekoonga.
V: Hain toh?
S: TOh ab sabse pehle me hi tume dekoon ga! And I have to say u look absolutely outstandingly beautiful!
V: Really?
S: KAsam se! He kisses her on the forehead.
S: Ok I got to go see you downstairs. He leaves nad vidya runs downstairs. To her surprise he made it in time. Everyone begins dancing and partying. Vidya and Chandra put mehendi on shalu. They dance the night away. When the mehndi is over everyone is gone except sagar's family and chinu. Vidya is tired so she was walking to her room when suddenly somebody stopped her. She gulped and turned around…
Precap: Chinu and shalu's wedding.
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Posted: 17 years ago
OOMMGG i loved it plz cOnt sooon<<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMGOMGOMGOMG...WAS THAT AMAZING OR WHAT..I WNDER WHO IT IS LOL..JUST FABULOUS...LOVELY..OUTSTANDING..GJAERIUBNEKNKFNIRUINBKNGSJ.. ..ALL OF THE ABOVE LMA..CONTIUE NOW...I WLL

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